for Heather Yuy5/9 c4 
21soulXmaka4evalove
OMG, please update, this is cool. It's realistic, well thought out- I'm dying to know what happens next!
21soulXmaka4evaloveOMG, please update, this is cool. It's realistic, well thought out- I'm dying to know what happens next!
11/2/2012 c3 dragontamer
please update the story soon.
please update the story soon.
9/24/2012 c3 20Hunter Hatake and Neko Uchiha
Awesome story so far love it can wait to see what happen next pleas update when You have the time
20Hunter Hatake and Neko UchihaAwesome story so far love it can wait to see what happen next pleas update when You have the time
7/2/2012 c1 Guest
An interesting premise, but you really need to proof read, or to get a beta. There's a lot of awkward turns of phrases and typos.
Here's your summary cleaned up:
Heather was never going to have a life of her own after the war, but then she met Heero Yuy. Heather Potter might never have had a chance, but Heather Yuy had an endless horizon in front of her - if she could only put the past behind her and live life to the fullest. She does have the best teachers, though.
An interesting premise, but you really need to proof read, or to get a beta. There's a lot of awkward turns of phrases and typos.
Here's your summary cleaned up:
Heather was never going to have a life of her own after the war, but then she met Heero Yuy. Heather Potter might never have had a chance, but Heather Yuy had an endless horizon in front of her - if she could only put the past behind her and live life to the fullest. She does have the best teachers, though.
6/23/2012 c2 Lw117149
was this a harry heero story and you made harry heather i think harry name was another name when you escapes to heero...is this yours and you are redoing it?
was this a harry heero story and you made harry heather i think harry name was another name when you escapes to heero...is this yours and you are redoing it?