for A Betrayal Most Royal : On Hiatus Writer's Block7/13/2012 c2 
11BoleynofAragon21
the more you read about chapuys he was an awful man. now it all makes sense, good explanation so this is charles/anne? ;)
Nat Sarah
11BoleynofAragon21the more you read about chapuys he was an awful man. now it all makes sense, good explanation so this is charles/anne? ;)
Nat Sarah
7/12/2012 c1 11BoleynofAragon21
second time i say shocker. how did anne escape death? i really want an answer and running to get one, giving this story a chance because it has anne and bess as the main characters and bess gets to be queen.
Nat Sarah
11BoleynofAragon21second time i say shocker. how did anne escape death? i really want an answer and running to get one, giving this story a chance because it has anne and bess as the main characters and bess gets to be queen.
Nat Sarah
6/14/2012 c5 200Marina Ka-Fai
I do not think it is ridiculous. In fact, it would be a sign of wiseness, and Anne was known for being clever.
200Marina Ka-FaiI do not think it is ridiculous. In fact, it would be a sign of wiseness, and Anne was known for being clever.
6/13/2012 c3 8Writingisapassion48
This is way to Out of Character for me... sorry I hope others will like it
8Writingisapassion48This is way to Out of Character for me... sorry I hope others will like it
6/13/2012 c2 9Fleur24
I LOVE that Charles spared Anne's life. It was very noble of him.
""Gentlemen, it is my wish that the Lady Mary remain in the Tower until a treaty of truce can be reached with her cousin. She is a threat to my daughter's crown, but I will not abide by any harm coming to the Lady Mary. I will speak to Ambassador Chapuys before this day is through. Charles Brandon will act as regent for Elizabeth along with myself and whomever else I shall choose." None dared to protest."" Of course no one protested. I think this is wise of Anne.
Poor little Jane. Jane picked out a pretty name in Charlotte.
I LOVE how Anne had her brother, the men who died before her, the Seymours and Katherine reburied. I LOVE how Katherine was to be reburied in Westminister Abbey.
AH! Charles and Anne are together! I like that.
I bet Anne can't wait to see her little girl again.
""Lady Charlotte, that is a pretty name. Lady Elizabeth, do you wish she to stay at Hatfield or reside with you and your family?" Elizabeth was taken by surprise, she did not expect that her niece would be allowed to live with her.
"She shall live with my husband and I. Thank you, your majesty."" That's good. I think Lady Charlotte will be happy with her aunt.
9Fleur24I LOVE that Charles spared Anne's life. It was very noble of him.
""Gentlemen, it is my wish that the Lady Mary remain in the Tower until a treaty of truce can be reached with her cousin. She is a threat to my daughter's crown, but I will not abide by any harm coming to the Lady Mary. I will speak to Ambassador Chapuys before this day is through. Charles Brandon will act as regent for Elizabeth along with myself and whomever else I shall choose." None dared to protest."" Of course no one protested. I think this is wise of Anne.
Poor little Jane. Jane picked out a pretty name in Charlotte.
I LOVE how Anne had her brother, the men who died before her, the Seymours and Katherine reburied. I LOVE how Katherine was to be reburied in Westminister Abbey.
AH! Charles and Anne are together! I like that.
I bet Anne can't wait to see her little girl again.
""Lady Charlotte, that is a pretty name. Lady Elizabeth, do you wish she to stay at Hatfield or reside with you and your family?" Elizabeth was taken by surprise, she did not expect that her niece would be allowed to live with her.
"She shall live with my husband and I. Thank you, your majesty."" That's good. I think Lady Charlotte will be happy with her aunt.
6/13/2012 c1 Fleur24
""But Charles knew more than anyone that Anne was the only woman the King truly loved."" I believe this to be true. I think Henry only loved Jane, because she was different from Anne and most importantly because she gave him Edward.
""They lied to me. Those deceitful, manipulative Seymours. They forced me to kill my Queen. I was promised an heir by their precious Jane. Charles, my son is dead because of that ** lying in the Queen's chambers." Charles knew what the King mean about his lost son. Anne's precious little boy lost because she had been set into a frenzy of jealousy over Jane."" This is so true!
Poor Jane! I don't like her because she got Anne killed, but it sad that she has to die because she gave birth to a girl.
Its interesting that Jane wasn't given the Queens' chamber.
Charles realized it was the Henry's deep love of Anne that caused this madness. These were the people he blamed for the execution of Anne."" Very true. Poor Henry. I think.
I'm glad that Henry reinstalled Anne as the rightful Queen and Elizabeth as his heir.
So Elizabeth is queen.
""The cloaked figure emerged. It was clear that this was no man telling them what to do, but a very petite woman.
"I dare" as the figure removed her hood.
"Your majesty." complete silence fell over the room.
"You heard Queen Anne. Lady Mary is not to be harmed."" AWESOME!
I wonder who was with Anne? How did she survive?
I'm LOVE that Anne ordered them not to harm Lady Mary.
""But Charles knew more than anyone that Anne was the only woman the King truly loved."" I believe this to be true. I think Henry only loved Jane, because she was different from Anne and most importantly because she gave him Edward.
""They lied to me. Those deceitful, manipulative Seymours. They forced me to kill my Queen. I was promised an heir by their precious Jane. Charles, my son is dead because of that ** lying in the Queen's chambers." Charles knew what the King mean about his lost son. Anne's precious little boy lost because she had been set into a frenzy of jealousy over Jane."" This is so true!
Poor Jane! I don't like her because she got Anne killed, but it sad that she has to die because she gave birth to a girl.
Its interesting that Jane wasn't given the Queens' chamber.
Charles realized it was the Henry's deep love of Anne that caused this madness. These were the people he blamed for the execution of Anne."" Very true. Poor Henry. I think.
I'm glad that Henry reinstalled Anne as the rightful Queen and Elizabeth as his heir.
So Elizabeth is queen.
""The cloaked figure emerged. It was clear that this was no man telling them what to do, but a very petite woman.
"I dare" as the figure removed her hood.
"Your majesty." complete silence fell over the room.
"You heard Queen Anne. Lady Mary is not to be harmed."" AWESOME!
I wonder who was with Anne? How did she survive?
I'm LOVE that Anne ordered them not to harm Lady Mary.
6/11/2012 c1 Bindzoyaether
I think it would be big of Anne if she spared Jane. I don't think Jane wanted her dead, either.
Also, while Mary might be in the tower right now, her life is not in danger like in history with Northumberland. And she wouldn't flee from England & lose her chance to be queen(esp with her grudge against Anne). But even though Mary won't be able to send proclamations throughout the land announcing her accession to the throne, or stay in a fortified castle like Framlingham Castle in Suffolk(oh yeah Angolia is East Anglia, my mistake) (unless she escapes); there will be enough people supporting her to form an army. Even the leaders who were suppose to take her in, fled to her side. Don't underestimate this. Then I'm positive the Emperor will most likely wage war or something to support Mary(don't know why the Emperor didn't do this in history, HenryVIII's will named Edward, then Mary after him, then Elizabeth) even though Eddie changed his to Jane on Northumberland's bullying).
Either way, even if Mary doesn't have the best chance of all of them to become queen, it'd be interesting to add a side story to have them face hard to control the threat of Mary to their throne.
I think it would be big of Anne if she spared Jane. I don't think Jane wanted her dead, either.
Also, while Mary might be in the tower right now, her life is not in danger like in history with Northumberland. And she wouldn't flee from England & lose her chance to be queen(esp with her grudge against Anne). But even though Mary won't be able to send proclamations throughout the land announcing her accession to the throne, or stay in a fortified castle like Framlingham Castle in Suffolk(oh yeah Angolia is East Anglia, my mistake) (unless she escapes); there will be enough people supporting her to form an army. Even the leaders who were suppose to take her in, fled to her side. Don't underestimate this. Then I'm positive the Emperor will most likely wage war or something to support Mary(don't know why the Emperor didn't do this in history, HenryVIII's will named Edward, then Mary after him, then Elizabeth) even though Eddie changed his to Jane on Northumberland's bullying).
Either way, even if Mary doesn't have the best chance of all of them to become queen, it'd be interesting to add a side story to have them face hard to control the threat of Mary to their throne.
6/11/2012 c2 Ifab1ndiya
Wow this is interesting. Anne has pity in this one. Just one thing, I doubt Anne & Charles(? He'd never go for this atleast) would be able to name Elizabeth queen.
Mary has too much of England's support(esp the Catholics in the North)! Just like when Northumberland tried to put Jane on the throne, Mary went to Angola(sp?), and had the people's support while she camped out to retake her throne in a daring move(which she did). When Mary had enough support to take back her throne, even Northumberland's council deserted him, and begged pardon from Queen Mary.
Then there's the Emperor, who will most likely wage war on England for Mary's rights.
Unless you have some big stipulation that cancels Mary from the throne, and stops the people's support. You can make this fic about Anne & Elizabeth vs Mary's right.
Oh yea, Mary & Chapauys will definitely run away(like Mary did in history) so Mary can claim her right as queen.
Wow this is interesting. Anne has pity in this one. Just one thing, I doubt Anne & Charles(? He'd never go for this atleast) would be able to name Elizabeth queen.
Mary has too much of England's support(esp the Catholics in the North)! Just like when Northumberland tried to put Jane on the throne, Mary went to Angola(sp?), and had the people's support while she camped out to retake her throne in a daring move(which she did). When Mary had enough support to take back her throne, even Northumberland's council deserted him, and begged pardon from Queen Mary.
Then there's the Emperor, who will most likely wage war on England for Mary's rights.
Unless you have some big stipulation that cancels Mary from the throne, and stops the people's support. You can make this fic about Anne & Elizabeth vs Mary's right.
Oh yea, Mary & Chapauys will definitely run away(like Mary did in history) so Mary can claim her right as queen.