for Caught Looking5/20 c23 sammieanne
I still believe Bella has a screw loose, anyways this is the best Bella ever. I know you created her and I do hope she'll kick but,if she should find a need to. Bella is mostly portrayed as a damsel in trouble, weak and whiny , it would do a body good to see her mad as hell with who ever and taking no prisoners. Update soon, take care...
I still believe Bella has a screw loose, anyways this is the best Bella ever. I know you created her and I do hope she'll kick but,if she should find a need to. Bella is mostly portrayed as a damsel in trouble, weak and whiny , it would do a body good to see her mad as hell with who ever and taking no prisoners. Update soon, take care...
5/20 c4 sammieanne
How in God's name did Bella get custody of Seth, the way she thinks, and behave ,it must have been really bad before, Bella's mind is off the chart.
How in God's name did Bella get custody of Seth, the way she thinks, and behave ,it must have been really bad before, Bella's mind is off the chart.
5/20 c3 sammieanne
Why would a professional talk to anyone like that especially a stranger. I guess the story teller just doesn't know any better and a character is just as bad or good as the author. Update soon.
Why would a professional talk to anyone like that especially a stranger. I guess the story teller just doesn't know any better and a character is just as bad or good as the author. Update soon.
5/11 c23 
2AlbertaGirl78
Are you going to update soon? I'll beg if I have to. LOL Do you know how many more chapters you have planned!?
2AlbertaGirl78Are you going to update soon? I'll beg if I have to. LOL Do you know how many more chapters you have planned!?
5/2 c23 Soni's Angel
Awesome update! Damn, poor Bella certainly was worried about the fact that Edward took a fastball to the crotch;) Loved her method of tending to his injury;P I truly feel so sad for Seth who is aware of the fact that his dad gave him away, I can only imagine his confusion and hurt.
Esme certainly put Rose in her place effectively, I wonder if Rose misses Emmett as much as he does her.
Gotta love Alice for flying her Jasper freak so high and being proud of it;P I love the relationship between Edward and Riley and it is so sad that despite Bella being happy to be included by the Cullen's she feels that her and Seth are outsiders. While Bella calling Phil is a good idea, she should keep communication about her decision open with Seth, while Phil will have to work to repair his relationship with his son obviously, Seth is the one who must set the pace and ultimately the decision is his. Thanks for sharing and looking forward to the next chapter;)
Awesome update! Damn, poor Bella certainly was worried about the fact that Edward took a fastball to the crotch;) Loved her method of tending to his injury;P I truly feel so sad for Seth who is aware of the fact that his dad gave him away, I can only imagine his confusion and hurt.
Esme certainly put Rose in her place effectively, I wonder if Rose misses Emmett as much as he does her.
Gotta love Alice for flying her Jasper freak so high and being proud of it;P I love the relationship between Edward and Riley and it is so sad that despite Bella being happy to be included by the Cullen's she feels that her and Seth are outsiders. While Bella calling Phil is a good idea, she should keep communication about her decision open with Seth, while Phil will have to work to repair his relationship with his son obviously, Seth is the one who must set the pace and ultimately the decision is his. Thanks for sharing and looking forward to the next chapter;)
4/30 c23 karenff
I'm still reading, even when I'm terrible about reviewing. Just a little bit of happiness to brighten up my day :)
I'm still reading, even when I'm terrible about reviewing. Just a little bit of happiness to brighten up my day :)
4/28 c2 AlexJade
Great banter.
I like smarty pants Bella. It is the geeks who run the world not the frat boys. They can burp really well.
Great banter.
I like smarty pants Bella. It is the geeks who run the world not the frat boys. They can burp really well.
4/26 c23 10Diana Prenze
Oh my gosh! I just started reading today and I already finished. I cannot wait for more!
I beg you to forgive my very short review 'cause I don't have much vocabulary in english (I also beg you forgive me for my mistakes if I had some XD) I'm chilean, so... my born language is spanish. Well, I just wanna tell you that I love this story. I love this Bella and I love even more Seth and Edward. And all of them!
See (read) u later!
10Diana PrenzeOh my gosh! I just started reading today and I already finished. I cannot wait for more!
I beg you to forgive my very short review 'cause I don't have much vocabulary in english (I also beg you forgive me for my mistakes if I had some XD) I'm chilean, so... my born language is spanish. Well, I just wanna tell you that I love this story. I love this Bella and I love even more Seth and Edward. And all of them!
See (read) u later!
4/25 c23 Jrjones44
Ha that is too funny that Bella's felt like her life might be ruined because of that fast ball. That was definitely not what I was expecting. Loved Esme putting Rose into her place too. Classic.
Ha that is too funny that Bella's felt like her life might be ruined because of that fast ball. That was definitely not what I was expecting. Loved Esme putting Rose into her place too. Classic.