for Death Angel4/16 c12 Guest
SO GOOD! But I'm crying right now. :'(
-sniffle-
SO GOOD! But I'm crying right now. :'(
-sniffle-
1/20 c13 scarletjj27
I like this story a lot but it woul have been better if the ending did not end just like that and explained more about how mikan knew natsume and so on and how hotaru acted
I like this story a lot but it woul have been better if the ending did not end just like that and explained more about how mikan knew natsume and so on and how hotaru acted
12/7/2012 c12 
4silversecret99
Oh My Gosh! I love this story so much! I think you should totally make a second season or something like that! I can't remember the word...andways, I TOTALLY LOVE THIS STORY!
4silversecret99Oh My Gosh! I love this story so much! I think you should totally make a second season or something like that! I can't remember the word...andways, I TOTALLY LOVE THIS STORY!
12/3/2012 c13 5Blackreader27
Hello!
Aww! U had me crying in the end!
I got to admit that it was a really good story!
Loved it lots!
5Blackreader27Hello!
Aww! U had me crying in the end!
I got to admit that it was a really good story!
Loved it lots!
11/27/2012 c13 Mi-Chan
Omgee!
NATSUME YOU YOU YOU you...
I don't know what to say :(
Omgee!
NATSUME YOU YOU YOU you...
I don't know what to say :(
11/27/2012 c3 Mi-Chan
I love your fanfiction omgee!
This story is just like the manga Nageku Shinigami
I love your fanfiction omgee!
This story is just like the manga Nageku Shinigami
11/27/2012 c13 spica14
ehhh... I kinda didn't get it. So how will Natsume see Mikan again after killing the girl?
ehhh... I kinda didn't get it. So how will Natsume see Mikan again after killing the girl?
11/23/2012 c13 davina-her
I think it was fine the way it was, also I personally just don't find noir fanfics very appealing. I think it's cause it'll be hard to see a favorite character turn into a monster, you know.
I think it was fine the way it was, also I personally just don't find noir fanfics very appealing. I think it's cause it'll be hard to see a favorite character turn into a monster, you know.
11/21/2012 c12 AnimeMango
OMG! I am in love with your writing! This was such a lovely and amazing story! It was so romantic! I can't wait to read your other masterpieces!
OMG! I am in love with your writing! This was such a lovely and amazing story! It was so romantic! I can't wait to read your other masterpieces!
11/21/2012 c13 Mika
Omg . I cried at the ending. That was... that was soo emotional TTTT
Really... You mad me cry in the middle of the night.
And the prologue O_O
Bring Mikan back please!
Put him to his senses! Mikan can be an angel right? since she's good and all... ._.
Please make a sequel! You can't really leave us hanging there TTTT
Omg . I cried at the ending. That was... that was soo emotional TTTT
Really... You mad me cry in the middle of the night.
And the prologue O_O
Bring Mikan back please!
Put him to his senses! Mikan can be an angel right? since she's good and all... ._.
Please make a sequel! You can't really leave us hanging there TTTT
11/21/2012 c13 Kuroyuri
Hey... i've never fully read ur story but judging from the few lines that i have read...
u should totally continue the story...
the ending... hmmmm... more like a cliffhanger... u should -no, u MUST continue!
CONTINUE THE STORY.
tnx U
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Hey... i've never fully read ur story but judging from the few lines that i have read...
u should totally continue the story...
the ending... hmmmm... more like a cliffhanger... u should -no, u MUST continue!
CONTINUE THE STORY.
tnx U
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11/21/2012 c13 bellward13
Your story is very good but personally I don't like the ending..(I'm a sucker of happy ending..hehehe) I think it would be better if you will make a sequel:)
Your story is very good but personally I don't like the ending..(I'm a sucker of happy ending..hehehe) I think it would be better if you will make a sequel:)
11/20/2012 c13 2De Entertainer
I don't mean to swear or anything but, the ending was... pretty cr-ppy. No offense. The "prologue" was a great base idea and all, but the emotions you put into this story (AND the prologue) are/were quite void. Really think about how someone would act and place the details carefully. Been there, done that. When you don't add the details, it's like a bullet, not in a good way. It's like a simple, 'There was once a frog prince. Then there came along a very purdy princess. The princess kissed the frog and then they lived happily ever after, the end.' Yes, there's that and then there's, 'There was once a prince that had been cursed with a spell by a witch and had been turned into a frog. Sadly, the only way he could turn back to his natural form was to get his true love - a princess - to kiss him. And so, then entered his saviour(ess? Lol), his true love...' Blah blah blah, and so on... That was a horrible job done by me but hey, see that? Quite the difference, eh? So, you build upon your sentences and then structure it into a much better, new and evolved sentence. Then there you have it. See if it works. Gosh, I hate all this "prep" talk.
2De EntertainerI don't mean to swear or anything but, the ending was... pretty cr-ppy. No offense. The "prologue" was a great base idea and all, but the emotions you put into this story (AND the prologue) are/were quite void. Really think about how someone would act and place the details carefully. Been there, done that. When you don't add the details, it's like a bullet, not in a good way. It's like a simple, 'There was once a frog prince. Then there came along a very purdy princess. The princess kissed the frog and then they lived happily ever after, the end.' Yes, there's that and then there's, 'There was once a prince that had been cursed with a spell by a witch and had been turned into a frog. Sadly, the only way he could turn back to his natural form was to get his true love - a princess - to kiss him. And so, then entered his saviour(ess? Lol), his true love...' Blah blah blah, and so on... That was a horrible job done by me but hey, see that? Quite the difference, eh? So, you build upon your sentences and then structure it into a much better, new and evolved sentence. Then there you have it. See if it works. Gosh, I hate all this "prep" talk.