for I wish it didn't hurt so much7/8/2012 c1 
1Esmejs
I loved reading this. You're so true to both characters, and it's such a believeable situation you've created to explain how they get together again... It's a shame there's not more, tho I see why you chose not to add to it... Well done. I'll look out for your work again. Thanks x
1EsmejsI loved reading this. You're so true to both characters, and it's such a believeable situation you've created to explain how they get together again... It's a shame there's not more, tho I see why you chose not to add to it... Well done. I'll look out for your work again. Thanks x
6/23/2012 c1 topBecky
Wow that's a good chapter, have u done any more i would love to read more.
Wow that's a good chapter, have u done any more i would love to read more.
6/17/2012 c1 1rubberbandgirl7
so this is lovely and I am looking forward t more to see how this develops
1rubberbandgirl7so this is lovely and I am looking forward t more to see how this develops
6/14/2012 c1 Guest
Love this Soo gd will you be carrying on
Love this Soo gd will you be carrying on
6/13/2012 c1 Guest
Amazing please write more
Amazing please write more
6/12/2012 c1 12PositivelyUncertain
This was absolutely wonderful. So well written, and you really captured Jen's inner turmoil. Thank you for sharing your wonderful writing with us :)
12PositivelyUncertainThis was absolutely wonderful. So well written, and you really captured Jen's inner turmoil. Thank you for sharing your wonderful writing with us :)
6/11/2012 c1 1xUndefinedx
I'm quite saddened that this is only a one shot however, it was concluded beautifully. Very believable and well written throughout. The dialect used is ideal, and the diary extract I was even going to use in my fic, however you dealt with it way better than I probably would have if I'm honest. You've done the characters justice!
1xUndefinedxI'm quite saddened that this is only a one shot however, it was concluded beautifully. Very believable and well written throughout. The dialect used is ideal, and the diary extract I was even going to use in my fic, however you dealt with it way better than I probably would have if I'm honest. You've done the characters justice!