Reviews: Generation Of The ARC: The Child Within

for Generation Of The ARC: The Child Within

7/2/2012 c16

1GeorgieG
aww that was a really nice ending:)) but you need to write moree!;)

6/30/2012 c16

2gem-gem96
Oohhhhh, I understand now! Soph went back through time and met her daughter who she really lost in your last story! I get it now! xD
But great story! )

6/30/2012 c15 gem-gem96
Whoa! A crazy ass confusing chapter but awesome )

6/30/2012 c14 gem-gem96
YAY! She's back! )

6/30/2012 c13 gem-gem96
Soph needs to come back into the story, just saying

6/30/2012 c15

1GeorgieG
bit of a mind-fuck but... good chapter!:L hmm i think you should do one about when they were younger maybe? like when they were 13/14? i think it would pretty cool to see Ciaran and Sophie or Michael and Amy flirting...:) update soon?

6/29/2012 c14 GeorgieG
finally:D wicked chapter... update soon?:)

6/27/2012 c13 GeorgieG
good chapter!:) im missing Sophie though:'( update soon?:D

6/24/2012 c12

2gem-gem96
Ooo, Ciaran got a bit touchy there didn't he?

And its a shame to see this side of Ciaran, it seems as if he's drifted away from Tobias too and dumping him upon Gemma (

It'd be nice to see some family time with Ciaran, Tobias, the grandparents and friends maybe?

But anywho's Update Soon! ! )

6/24/2012 c12

1GeorgieG
'tighter than Helen Cutters face'... i almost died of laughter:D! good chapter:) hope they find Sophie soon!

update soon?:)

6/23/2012 c11

2gem-gem96
So Amy was cooking dinner for Ciaran and Tobias but Ciaran knew he was with Michael? xD

But the whole gangs back together again now! Yay! )

It would've been nice to see some emotion from Abby and Connor seeing as they're daughter's missing but great chapter! )

Update soon! )

6/23/2012 c10 gem-gem96
Ooo, so Sophie is in safe hands! )

But poor Ciaran, he's missing his wife. I hope he gets her back soon for his and Tobias' sake

Onto the next chapter! )

6/23/2012 c9 gem-gem96
Noooo! What's happened to Soph?

Quickly going onto the next chapter! )

6/23/2012 c11

1GeorgieG
family reunion:D update sooooon? im such an impatient person:')

6/22/2012 c10 GeorgieG
aww... please let him find sophie soon! i cant bear the cliffies-_- heyho! good chapter:D update soon?:)

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