for The Bond of Six6/18/2012 c1 
9961-3
This little one shot was pretty good - I liked the poem feel to it. This is just a suggestion, but maybe you should lay it out more like a poem, since you have all of these rhymes. A little more description would also be nice, only because the one shot is really really short. Good job!
Lilly
9961-3This little one shot was pretty good - I liked the poem feel to it. This is just a suggestion, but maybe you should lay it out more like a poem, since you have all of these rhymes. A little more description would also be nice, only because the one shot is really really short. Good job!
Lilly