for Wrong Way12/4/2012 c8
34Crystal Manning
So I've been reading this on and off all day (school getting in my way of course) and I like the idea of it. I really like the name of the main character. It's very unique, which is something that I look for when reading a girl goes to CGL fic. Unlike the others on here I give each and every one a chance, even if they are Mary Sues. Yours isn't so far, which is a bonus. I am curious about more of her backstory. While I do enjoy this story I ask that maybe you put a bit more description in it. The scenery, how she's feeling, how others look to her, that sort of thing.
I can't wait until the next update.
34Crystal ManningSo I've been reading this on and off all day (school getting in my way of course) and I like the idea of it. I really like the name of the main character. It's very unique, which is something that I look for when reading a girl goes to CGL fic. Unlike the others on here I give each and every one a chance, even if they are Mary Sues. Yours isn't so far, which is a bonus. I am curious about more of her backstory. While I do enjoy this story I ask that maybe you put a bit more description in it. The scenery, how she's feeling, how others look to her, that sort of thing.
I can't wait until the next update.
8/4/2012 c7
2Laurafxox
I really wanna know what's so special about her! How can she go so long without eating. Update soon please!
2LaurafxoxI really wanna know what's so special about her! How can she go so long without eating. Update soon please!
7/30/2012 c6
2Laurafxox
This is a really good idea for a story, I like the fact that they reopened the camps, it works a lot more than some other ideas ive read. Please update soon!
2LaurafxoxThis is a really good idea for a story, I like the fact that they reopened the camps, it works a lot more than some other ideas ive read. Please update soon!
6/14/2012 c1
3GreaserTrio
It's good, but I'm a little confused. Maybe the next chapter will help a little.
3GreaserTrioIt's good, but I'm a little confused. Maybe the next chapter will help a little.
