for Oops8/14/2012 c1 Guest
That was... HILARIOUS! I was laughing ma frikken head off! Great work keep it up!
That was... HILARIOUS! I was laughing ma frikken head off! Great work keep it up!
6/17/2012 c1 
9Daydreamer1412
I don't think anyone would have any qualms about this! Like anon-san below me, I would like to thank you for helping out the ShinRan ship! It's a great edition!
I'm a canon girl, and find it weird that the main couple is hardly EVER written about in this archive, instead with all AU KaiShin...no comment. Sorry for the mini rant!
Anyway, I loved your fic! Just that romantic post Conan Drama that I needed! Bit short for my taste, but I'm a long winded person! You cheered me up! .b
I wanted to compliment you on pulling off first person so well! I for one find it tough, so go you, even of this is second nature! Characterizations were on point, and while there's some tiny irregularities, you did brilliantly for you first try!
A light once over for grammar wouldn't hurt, and you may want to keep in mind that they are in Japan, so Ran calling Yukiko. "Ms. Yukiko" is off. Since Yukiko hates being called basan (middle aged woman, equivelent to Mrs/Ms) I think she would allow Ran to call her by her first name with a proper honorific... Yukiko-san maybe. Oooh or maybe Yukiko-obachan! I think she would like either!
Sooo that was my rambling! Thanks again for the contributation and pick me up! Sorry if I offended you in anyway in the review- I didn't mean it!
Please, don't just catch a fever- get DISEASED! The fandom need more of you m'dear! I'll be waiting!
Lol (Lots of Love)
Daydreamer1412
9Daydreamer1412I don't think anyone would have any qualms about this! Like anon-san below me, I would like to thank you for helping out the ShinRan ship! It's a great edition!
I'm a canon girl, and find it weird that the main couple is hardly EVER written about in this archive, instead with all AU KaiShin...no comment. Sorry for the mini rant!
Anyway, I loved your fic! Just that romantic post Conan Drama that I needed! Bit short for my taste, but I'm a long winded person! You cheered me up! .b
I wanted to compliment you on pulling off first person so well! I for one find it tough, so go you, even of this is second nature! Characterizations were on point, and while there's some tiny irregularities, you did brilliantly for you first try!
A light once over for grammar wouldn't hurt, and you may want to keep in mind that they are in Japan, so Ran calling Yukiko. "Ms. Yukiko" is off. Since Yukiko hates being called basan (middle aged woman, equivelent to Mrs/Ms) I think she would allow Ran to call her by her first name with a proper honorific... Yukiko-san maybe. Oooh or maybe Yukiko-obachan! I think she would like either!
Sooo that was my rambling! Thanks again for the contributation and pick me up! Sorry if I offended you in anyway in the review- I didn't mean it!
Please, don't just catch a fever- get DISEASED! The fandom need more of you m'dear! I'll be waiting!
Lol (Lots of Love)
Daydreamer1412
6/15/2012 c1 Guest
Hi!
First, I want to say thank you for contributing a ShinRan fic in this fandom! As you can see, only few ShinRan fics are posted in here. I think you already know the reason, right?
Ahem.
Anyways, about your fic, beside that it is very well written, the story itself is so damn cute!
Your idea of making Ran, hear his confession was very unique! It went on with the dream, the confusion about his current status (which is single and not yet to be married! _) and the misunderstanding with his mother. It was a good plot! I love it! :D
Please continue to work some more ShinRan fics again! I will be waiting! :)
Hi!
First, I want to say thank you for contributing a ShinRan fic in this fandom! As you can see, only few ShinRan fics are posted in here. I think you already know the reason, right?
Ahem.
Anyways, about your fic, beside that it is very well written, the story itself is so damn cute!
Your idea of making Ran, hear his confession was very unique! It went on with the dream, the confusion about his current status (which is single and not yet to be married! _) and the misunderstanding with his mother. It was a good plot! I love it! :D
Please continue to work some more ShinRan fics again! I will be waiting! :)