6/19/2012 c1 6iizninja
BWHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHHAHAHA!

I'm not laughing at you or your sotyr. Sorry, I'm laughing at my head. Like, I just got this image in my mind… get this :D

Puck nawed on the end of his pencil, glaring at the sheet of paper he held in his hands before balling it up and tossing it into the ever-growing pile behind him of failed attempts.

"This is stupid," he murmured, glaring at the girl beside him.

Red sighed, "This is poetry! This is how you win a girl's heart. This is the food of love."

"Food… I could go for some food."

"Look, you asked me to help you be more romantic."

"There's gotta be a better way." His voice quieted for a moment before a playful eyebrow raised, "I could throw mud on her."

Red repressed a smile, refusing to give him the satisfaction of changing the subject again. "You tried that. Remember? It didn't work out so well for you."

"That punch was out of love, I'm sure of it."

"Just read me what you've got so far."

Puck groaned, burring his head in his hands and proteseting weakly before reaching over to one of the discarded pieces of paper and reading:

"You're kind of cool, and I'm really amazing

My awesomeness has no compare.

You don't go to school, and I'm still amazing

My legend is told everywhere.

We go to the pool, and I look amazing

I guess we make a good pair

You'll break all the rules, and I'll be amazing

And in my perfection we'll share."

Red grimaced, "Why don't you try writing it about her instead of you?"

"You don't like it, do you?" Puck frowned, ripping the paper up.

"It's not much of a love letter. Just… think about HER. Think about what she is, who she is, how she makes me feel…" Red's phone beeped as the alarm went off. "Okay, I've got to go to meditation with Tobias. Remember, think about HER."

Puck sneered at the girl behind her back as he snatched another paper up and began writing.

I'm sorry, I couldn't resist. (That was totally out of fun, by the way, and done in three minutes so let's not take that for my writing ability…:D) The thought of Puck actually writing this is too cute! I mean, I can totally see him slaving over it just so it's perfect... and then being too embarrassed to actually give it to her, leaving her to find it discarded somewhere making room for a thousand more emotions…

golly. Why don't you write more to this, make it a story and such? THAT WOULD BE SO FUN! HOLLY CHEESE NIPS, IF YOU DON'T WANNA I WILL! Lol, just kidding. Sorry, I got sidetracked form the actual review. This wasn't OOC, actually, because in my mind Puck is really sweet and sensitive on the inside. He's a wounded child, as we saw at the end of the fourth book, and he's subconsciously searching for love and finding it in Sabrina. Naturally he'd go out of his way to make him like her, all the while trying to keep his pride intact and failing miserably. So, I liked it. :) I don't know if it's AMAZINGLY written, because it doesn't have too much substance and powerful meaning, but it's so Puckish that I'm beaming at you. I really want you to do a backstory to this, now that I think about it, but I wont beg. I'll grovel, but I won't beg. .

Signed, your resident lunatic, iizninja

6/17/2012 c1 SephoraSweetie07
Errrrrrrr... Very poetic! Kind of OOC but I like OOC Puck. Was this a one shot? Will you write more? Love it! Just a wee bit short. Bye!