for Gratitude5/4 c30 Guest
i loved this fic so much.i am a slow reader, because i like to take my time and take all the information in.i read this over the space of two days,( being roughly four hours each )and it made me laugh, it made me cry,and when i was sure that i was going to finish my last chaper for the night, it would end with a cliff i had to read more.i still think that the story could have had a happier ending,or at least ended with Toby and Luise your ending i think was still super poweful and effective!i loved it so much! i think this is actually my favorite fan fic of all time,and i cant wait to share this with my friends. good job!:')
i loved this fic so much.i am a slow reader, because i like to take my time and take all the information in.i read this over the space of two days,( being roughly four hours each )and it made me laugh, it made me cry,and when i was sure that i was going to finish my last chaper for the night, it would end with a cliff i had to read more.i still think that the story could have had a happier ending,or at least ended with Toby and Luise your ending i think was still super poweful and effective!i loved it so much! i think this is actually my favorite fan fic of all time,and i cant wait to share this with my friends. good job!:')
3/13 c30 
1renwhit
Why the fucking hell haven't you updated.
I will cut you.
also you should know that with my friends, it is a requirement to read this to be in the audience.
1renwhitWhy the fucking hell haven't you updated.
I will cut you.
also you should know that with my friends, it is a requirement to read this to be in the audience.
2/21 c30 Melody
KEEEP GGOOOOIIINNNGGG!
KEEEP GGOOOOIIINNNGGG!
1/28 c30 Halcat1120
You should update soon! It truly is a fantastic story!
You should update soon! It truly is a fantastic story!
1/13 c30 StarKidAbbie
best Tobuscus story ive ever read. I love this and you need to keep writing! XDDD
best Tobuscus story ive ever read. I love this and you need to keep writing! XDDD
1/6 c30 10ChloeHeidrich1228
What an inopportune time to end such a story! Goddangit, this needs to continue. I'm emotionally invested now. You can't just end something when a girl is emotionally invested. It's... sacrilegious... or something... Anyways (anyway? I don't know), this needs to continue. I thoroughly enjoyed it, and the fact that it's a good (really, really good) Toby/OC story means that it NEEDS to continue. Please?
10ChloeHeidrich1228What an inopportune time to end such a story! Goddangit, this needs to continue. I'm emotionally invested now. You can't just end something when a girl is emotionally invested. It's... sacrilegious... or something... Anyways (anyway? I don't know), this needs to continue. I thoroughly enjoyed it, and the fact that it's a good (really, really good) Toby/OC story means that it NEEDS to continue. Please?
1/4 c30 rachelcg99
I know you're probably busy or you are suffering from some MAJOR writers block, but please update soon! :D I am in love with this story, you really got his personality so perfectly _
I know you're probably busy or you are suffering from some MAJOR writers block, but please update soon! :D I am in love with this story, you really got his personality so perfectly _