for Moonlight Butler and Midnight Secretary4/10 c4 
32Fullbusterrulesmyheart
My thoughts exactly, Emil Kun. How is whipping considered as a healthy relation? Lol. Anyways, I was like actually in love with this chapter. So, now Gray turns into a hot guy, huh? *smirks*
Although its quiet painful to hear that Mira is targeted. She's innocent and so doesn't deserve this. T.T
I still am a bit confused about Loke and Lisanna. But they actually look nice together now. And I need to appreciate you for gifting us this amazing chapter. Your writing has changed drastically - in a good way.:-D
Coco and a few other characters confuse me, which I think is the main thing in this story.
So, yeah, you are doing a marvalous job at keeping your readers in suspence. Especially me, since you already know what I'm waiting for. XD
Jellal is actually coming off as a very strong character now and it looks like our ice mage has to really start his journey right now. Zoe seems to be friendly. That's all I can say about her. Natsu and other guys are reminding me of jocks - even though Lyon is a scientist. I wish I could review a bit more, but its tough to type in a cell. But overall, this chapter was great and I can say that you've got a strong grip on the plot.
Update soon! :-D
32FullbusterrulesmyheartMy thoughts exactly, Emil Kun. How is whipping considered as a healthy relation? Lol. Anyways, I was like actually in love with this chapter. So, now Gray turns into a hot guy, huh? *smirks*
Although its quiet painful to hear that Mira is targeted. She's innocent and so doesn't deserve this. T.T
I still am a bit confused about Loke and Lisanna. But they actually look nice together now. And I need to appreciate you for gifting us this amazing chapter. Your writing has changed drastically - in a good way.:-D
Coco and a few other characters confuse me, which I think is the main thing in this story.
So, yeah, you are doing a marvalous job at keeping your readers in suspence. Especially me, since you already know what I'm waiting for. XD
Jellal is actually coming off as a very strong character now and it looks like our ice mage has to really start his journey right now. Zoe seems to be friendly. That's all I can say about her. Natsu and other guys are reminding me of jocks - even though Lyon is a scientist. I wish I could review a bit more, but its tough to type in a cell. But overall, this chapter was great and I can say that you've got a strong grip on the plot.
Update soon! :-D
3/28 c4 3XForgottenEternityX
Very well done! I really liked the side dialogues, especially where Shulk and Melia got together...somehow.
Anyways, very nice details and descriptions used within your sentences. I'm kind of wondering, though, does the quote in the beginning have any bearing on the chapter itself? I mean, is it there to represent the main idea of the chapter? Just something I always think about.
Well, at first I thought it was amazing how Lisanna got away from the strangers, but when she got caught, I was like "NO!" But when I found out it was Koji and Takuya, you have no idea how happy I was! Erza and Lucy are forming a lovely friendship while Lisanna and Loke make an adorable couple!
The ending scence of the chapter was full of action, I almost got pulled into the story...when it ended with that "inevitable death" part. See, that's what your stories do to me, Emil-kun!
Amazing chapter, keep uploading fateful writer. ;D
3XForgottenEternityXVery well done! I really liked the side dialogues, especially where Shulk and Melia got together...somehow.
Anyways, very nice details and descriptions used within your sentences. I'm kind of wondering, though, does the quote in the beginning have any bearing on the chapter itself? I mean, is it there to represent the main idea of the chapter? Just something I always think about.
Well, at first I thought it was amazing how Lisanna got away from the strangers, but when she got caught, I was like "NO!" But when I found out it was Koji and Takuya, you have no idea how happy I was! Erza and Lucy are forming a lovely friendship while Lisanna and Loke make an adorable couple!
The ending scence of the chapter was full of action, I almost got pulled into the story...when it ended with that "inevitable death" part. See, that's what your stories do to me, Emil-kun!
Amazing chapter, keep uploading fateful writer. ;D
10/15/2012 c3 32Fullbusterrulesmyheart
OH GOSH EMIL-KUN!
It was amazing! Best chapter till now if I might add.
C'mon man, everything was just so touching... and maybe I'll learn that guys also have emotions... well some of them at least, hihi XD
I understand your condition in your college... although I'm still in school, but...*shrug*
Coming back to chapter-
Flaws were lesser this time. And the words were chosen perfectly! :D
Most of the mistakes I spotted this time were in the part of Zoe and Takuya's scenes... but as the chapter continued, it kept getting better and at the end we got a perfect ending! :D
I hope you're understanding what I'm saying 'cause I tend to blabber when I'm excited and say or write something in rush and everything is just too messed up, Lol!
Anyways, I think Laxus has some connection with all this stuff... hmmm...
By the way, I think Takuya is really sweet. It was him who punched the wall, right? Sorry, I'm still pretty confused with the four of them...
And aww, Lyon and Gray are just sooo sweet. I like Lyon's older brother's protective side. And Loke is a big time flirt here, Lol.
Now let's come to Jerza... The guys seriously needs to learn women aren't just for getting physical... *That bastard!* Although I might agree with Erza's dialogue, Lol. Must be 'cause I'm a girl though :D Hope you think opposite of Jellal, because if you don't, I'm afraid I'll turn into a man hater... T.T
Just kidding, don't worry.
By the way, the best dialogue ever-
"Men are nothing but pigs with hair and clothes!"
Lol, I've thought about it too many times... Don't worry, I'm not directing anything towards you. It's just some personal experience...
I'm not sure but I feel like I'm shipping more and more for Loke and Juvia and Natsu and Lisanna... Crack, right? Lol! :D
You did a great job, Emil Kun, and once again, if anything in the review hurts your emotions, it was completely unintentional.
As I said, I tend to mess things up when I'm excited and this chapter got me really very much excited!
Update soon! :D And sorry if this was too long...
32FullbusterrulesmyheartOH GOSH EMIL-KUN!
It was amazing! Best chapter till now if I might add.
C'mon man, everything was just so touching... and maybe I'll learn that guys also have emotions... well some of them at least, hihi XD
I understand your condition in your college... although I'm still in school, but...*shrug*
Coming back to chapter-
Flaws were lesser this time. And the words were chosen perfectly! :D
Most of the mistakes I spotted this time were in the part of Zoe and Takuya's scenes... but as the chapter continued, it kept getting better and at the end we got a perfect ending! :D
I hope you're understanding what I'm saying 'cause I tend to blabber when I'm excited and say or write something in rush and everything is just too messed up, Lol!
Anyways, I think Laxus has some connection with all this stuff... hmmm...
By the way, I think Takuya is really sweet. It was him who punched the wall, right? Sorry, I'm still pretty confused with the four of them...
And aww, Lyon and Gray are just sooo sweet. I like Lyon's older brother's protective side. And Loke is a big time flirt here, Lol.
Now let's come to Jerza... The guys seriously needs to learn women aren't just for getting physical... *That bastard!* Although I might agree with Erza's dialogue, Lol. Must be 'cause I'm a girl though :D Hope you think opposite of Jellal, because if you don't, I'm afraid I'll turn into a man hater... T.T
Just kidding, don't worry.
By the way, the best dialogue ever-
"Men are nothing but pigs with hair and clothes!"
Lol, I've thought about it too many times... Don't worry, I'm not directing anything towards you. It's just some personal experience...
I'm not sure but I feel like I'm shipping more and more for Loke and Juvia and Natsu and Lisanna... Crack, right? Lol! :D
You did a great job, Emil Kun, and once again, if anything in the review hurts your emotions, it was completely unintentional.
As I said, I tend to mess things up when I'm excited and this chapter got me really very much excited!
Update soon! :D And sorry if this was too long...
10/15/2012 c3 3XForgottenEternityX
Nice chapter! _ It's actually very sad and heartwarming at the same time, Emil-kun. I like how you started the chapter with a mood of curiousity and then made the moods swing back and forth. The flashbacks switching to present was done really well. Your words are chosen carefully when it comes to expressing the emotions of the scenes. It was really hard for myself to not feel sad when Takuya was acting regretful, I mean, he was so adorable!
Poor Zoe T-T This is really intense. Is she actually going to die?
I Love how Happy, Gray, and Tenebrae give some exciting news for the story ;)
Nice chapter Emil, keep it up, Summon Spirit ;)
3XForgottenEternityXNice chapter! _ It's actually very sad and heartwarming at the same time, Emil-kun. I like how you started the chapter with a mood of curiousity and then made the moods swing back and forth. The flashbacks switching to present was done really well. Your words are chosen carefully when it comes to expressing the emotions of the scenes. It was really hard for myself to not feel sad when Takuya was acting regretful, I mean, he was so adorable!
Poor Zoe T-T This is really intense. Is she actually going to die?
I Love how Happy, Gray, and Tenebrae give some exciting news for the story ;)
Nice chapter Emil, keep it up, Summon Spirit ;)
7/31/2012 c2 5Bella Swift
Nice one...really interesting...I guess the beasts you mentioned in this fic are from the movie twilight...you did picked them up from there right!
anyways...I am not sure about it...KEEP IT UP...YOU ARE DOING A GOOD JOB...CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPPY!
5Bella SwiftNice one...really interesting...I guess the beasts you mentioned in this fic are from the movie twilight...you did picked them up from there right!
anyways...I am not sure about it...KEEP IT UP...YOU ARE DOING A GOOD JOB...CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPPY!
7/23/2012 c2 8Hachibukai
Ahhhh! Cliff-hanger! How mean Emil-kun?
I really loved what you did in this story. Now, the real plot begins... Tadaaa
Can't wait to read more! O gosh! Please update soon. Pretty pretty please. Ah, but I shouldn't be pressuring you but don't worry, I'd patiently wait for the next update.
And who's that guy Zoe loves? Hmm...
Ahhh did Zoe die? And... gaah! Laxus is so cute in here. Hihihi. Lyon too (ahhh I can't... I shouldn't say this) anyway. Great chapter! It's getting more and more interesting. :D
8HachibukaiAhhhh! Cliff-hanger! How mean Emil-kun?
I really loved what you did in this story. Now, the real plot begins... Tadaaa
Can't wait to read more! O gosh! Please update soon. Pretty pretty please. Ah, but I shouldn't be pressuring you but don't worry, I'd patiently wait for the next update.
And who's that guy Zoe loves? Hmm...
Ahhh did Zoe die? And... gaah! Laxus is so cute in here. Hihihi. Lyon too (ahhh I can't... I shouldn't say this) anyway. Great chapter! It's getting more and more interesting. :D
7/22/2012 c2 35Sabrina-nee
Emil-kun, your story is awesome! :) but in some point Sabrina is somewhat lost while reading the story maybe because the story jumped from one scene to another, Sabrina doesn't want to offend you so sorry T_T anyways as she said your story is awesome... Well written and very funny :) keep up the good work and update whenever you can ne? Gambatte kudasai!
Sabrina-chan xoxo
Always keep the positive vibes
PS: since you really like Jellal-Lucy crack pairing, Sabrina dedicate her newest update of Fairy Baby to you (though Jellal did not appear on it, sorry!)
35Sabrina-neeEmil-kun, your story is awesome! :) but in some point Sabrina is somewhat lost while reading the story maybe because the story jumped from one scene to another, Sabrina doesn't want to offend you so sorry T_T anyways as she said your story is awesome... Well written and very funny :) keep up the good work and update whenever you can ne? Gambatte kudasai!
Sabrina-chan xoxo
Always keep the positive vibes
PS: since you really like Jellal-Lucy crack pairing, Sabrina dedicate her newest update of Fairy Baby to you (though Jellal did not appear on it, sorry!)
7/21/2012 c2 32Fullbusterrulesmyheart
Okay, so maybe the starting wasn't that good, but slowly when the Jerza scene came, it started getting better. The grammer problem still needs to be fixed though :/ At some places, I felt it was yaoi. But no worries there, 'cause I loved it!
Update soon, and oh, I especially liked the Lyon and Gray sibling scenes.
32FullbusterrulesmyheartOkay, so maybe the starting wasn't that good, but slowly when the Jerza scene came, it started getting better. The grammer problem still needs to be fixed though :/ At some places, I felt it was yaoi. But no worries there, 'cause I loved it!
Update soon, and oh, I especially liked the Lyon and Gray sibling scenes.
7/20/2012 c2 PRiNCESS SLAYER o1o
"O"
ohh nooo!
what will happen to Graysama Now!
X.X
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its really good _
I love how Erza act in this chapter!
*smirks*
She really ** Jellal3
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I'll wait for the next chapter _
GANBATTE KUDASAI
"O"
ohh nooo!
what will happen to Graysama Now!
X.X
..
its really good _
I love how Erza act in this chapter!
*smirks*
She really ** Jellal3
...
I'll wait for the next chapter _
GANBATTE KUDASAI
7/20/2012 c2 3XForgottenEternityX
I was really surprised that Erza wasn't shocked to hear what her Boss' attitude would be towards her, and Oh my god, Jellal gets on my nerves, he's such an insolent meanie :(
And the fight at the end with Zoe and Gray was really painful, and I cried when I read about Zoe's serious condition :'(
Great chapter! Lots of events going on, can't wait for the next chapter ;D and yeah Melia! She really should've been with Shulk.
3XForgottenEternityXI was really surprised that Erza wasn't shocked to hear what her Boss' attitude would be towards her, and Oh my god, Jellal gets on my nerves, he's such an insolent meanie :(
And the fight at the end with Zoe and Gray was really painful, and I cried when I read about Zoe's serious condition :'(
Great chapter! Lots of events going on, can't wait for the next chapter ;D and yeah Melia! She really should've been with Shulk.
6/25/2012 c1 8Hachibukai
Waaah! Why didn't you tell me that you already published this story? You know how excited I am to read this, right? XD
You've succeeded with the mystery part. :D I can't wait for the next chapter! Wah! :D
I was totally laughing with Cana and the principal's part. Also Natsu's lines - they're hilarious! You've portrayed everyone so well *claps hands*
Awesome! :D
Update soon BFFFEEEE... you did really great! :D
8HachibukaiWaaah! Why didn't you tell me that you already published this story? You know how excited I am to read this, right? XD
You've succeeded with the mystery part. :D I can't wait for the next chapter! Wah! :D
I was totally laughing with Cana and the principal's part. Also Natsu's lines - they're hilarious! You've portrayed everyone so well *claps hands*
Awesome! :D
Update soon BFFFEEEE... you did really great! :D