for Insensitive7/1/2012 c3 
1IaraEulb
Woah, I loved it so much! You did a good writing to Drama :3
But I think you should have had more development in the time, like: Passed two year right? So invest in this years! Write what happened in this years (even if is a little and silly thing, but always in harmony with the theme) and how the facts occured (like, Hika and Kao are now lovers. How this happened?). Your idea is very good, just invest more in the events! :3
Loved it dear! I hope you write more HikaxKao fanfics! Congrats!
1IaraEulbWoah, I loved it so much! You did a good writing to Drama :3
But I think you should have had more development in the time, like: Passed two year right? So invest in this years! Write what happened in this years (even if is a little and silly thing, but always in harmony with the theme) and how the facts occured (like, Hika and Kao are now lovers. How this happened?). Your idea is very good, just invest more in the events! :3
Loved it dear! I hope you write more HikaxKao fanfics! Congrats!
7/1/2012 c3 6Kate Skye Ride
Aww! Good job, Trish! Love this! So cute!
Haha, I re-read chapter 2. Not much difference, but just enough that it made more sense. I was going to review it, but found myself pressing the "next" button instead of the "review"... Oh well, it's reviewed now!
I love this! Keep up your great work!
Always, forever, & absolutely never.
Read, write, give up.
Love, Kate!
6Kate Skye RideAww! Good job, Trish! Love this! So cute!
Haha, I re-read chapter 2. Not much difference, but just enough that it made more sense. I was going to review it, but found myself pressing the "next" button instead of the "review"... Oh well, it's reviewed now!
I love this! Keep up your great work!
Always, forever, & absolutely never.
Read, write, give up.
Love, Kate!
6/26/2012 c2 Kate Skye Ride
Okay, maybe rushing you wasn't the best idea... It's a little spelling lacking, and grammar... And the POVs are a little confusing... Third or first? Hikaru or Kaoru? It's a little odd, but it's probably no help I'm half asleep... Haha.
Good job! More!
Always, forever, & absolutely never.
Read, write, give up.
Love, Kate.
Okay, maybe rushing you wasn't the best idea... It's a little spelling lacking, and grammar... And the POVs are a little confusing... Third or first? Hikaru or Kaoru? It's a little odd, but it's probably no help I'm half asleep... Haha.
Good job! More!
Always, forever, & absolutely never.
Read, write, give up.
Love, Kate.
6/25/2012 c1 6Kate Skye Ride
Oh Trish, you're so mean!
I hope that there's another chapter coming for this! Please tell me there is... You can't just leave Kaoru for dead! Not again...
Really good, well written and nice, but more chapters? Please? -imitates Tamaki's puppy dog eyes-
Always, forever, and absolutely never.
Read, write, give up.
Love, Kate!
6Kate Skye RideOh Trish, you're so mean!
I hope that there's another chapter coming for this! Please tell me there is... You can't just leave Kaoru for dead! Not again...
Really good, well written and nice, but more chapters? Please? -imitates Tamaki's puppy dog eyes-
Always, forever, and absolutely never.
Read, write, give up.
Love, Kate!