for Glorious Ashes3/26 c3 Okamilover
It would be nice if you would finnish this one day :) Your writing is outstanding :))
Okami
It would be nice if you would finnish this one day :) Your writing is outstanding :))
Okami
8/2/2012 c3 
1RosaRubra
This is amazing! Please, please, please, for the love of god tell me you'll finish it!
I'd be so sad if you didn't :c
1RosaRubraThis is amazing! Please, please, please, for the love of god tell me you'll finish it!
I'd be so sad if you didn't :c
7/26/2012 c3 2BlackJack The Pegasus
Please continue. I really want to know what happens. Poor Scout! Please update!
2BlackJack The PegasusPlease continue. I really want to know what happens. Poor Scout! Please update!
7/25/2012 c3 2XxSiberianTigerxX
Awesome! I always wondered where Spy was during the first half of the video! Please continue this!
2XxSiberianTigerxXAwesome! I always wondered where Spy was during the first half of the video! Please continue this!
7/17/2012 c2 1DeidaraHoshika
Wow. Very intriguing plot you have here! Nice portrayal of characters, good pacing, no spelling/grammar mistakes, full of suspense and action... it's a really good story. I think this is the first fanfic I've ever read that takes the Meet the Pyro so seriously. I'm impressed, I think you portrayed the RED's point of view quite nicely.
Good job mate. :))
1DeidaraHoshikaWow. Very intriguing plot you have here! Nice portrayal of characters, good pacing, no spelling/grammar mistakes, full of suspense and action... it's a really good story. I think this is the first fanfic I've ever read that takes the Meet the Pyro so seriously. I'm impressed, I think you portrayed the RED's point of view quite nicely.
Good job mate. :))
7/3/2012 c3 53LilyRosetheDreamer
Oh man, another chapter! Woohoo! And cue the traumatised team mate. :D I already did that and it really works well to make tension and emotion for the story, especially in your case! I love this...please let it be a happy ending!
53LilyRosetheDreamerOh man, another chapter! Woohoo! And cue the traumatised team mate. :D I already did that and it really works well to make tension and emotion for the story, especially in your case! I love this...please let it be a happy ending!
7/3/2012 c3 4Jinny the Kisaragi
O-oh my god...POOR SCOOTS! I feel so bad for him! I just want to jump into the story and snuggle him forever! Or at least until he feels better...but I love this...*sniffle* please continue
4Jinny the KisaragiO-oh my god...POOR SCOOTS! I feel so bad for him! I just want to jump into the story and snuggle him forever! Or at least until he feels better...but I love this...*sniffle* please continue
7/1/2012 c2 Guest
Oh-mein-Gott. This is so sad and beautiful in the same time (just like the MTP-video itself w)
I so hope you continue this diamond of a fanfiction.
Oh-mein-Gott. This is so sad and beautiful in the same time (just like the MTP-video itself w)
I so hope you continue this diamond of a fanfiction.
6/30/2012 c1 Lordriochi
I wonder why the BLU didn't bring their weapons with them to take on the Red Pyro? So I guess that their own Pyro had traveled separate from their group on the road to Dustbowl?
I wonder why the BLU didn't bring their weapons with them to take on the Red Pyro? So I guess that their own Pyro had traveled separate from their group on the road to Dustbowl?
6/30/2012 c2 53LilyRosetheDreamer
Oh awesome! I didn't realise that this was multi chapter! I assumed it was a one-shot. Cool. :D
OH NO! Will Spy be okay? I always guessed that he would have a harder time because of his naughty habit. XD Maybe this will teach him to stop smoking.
Medic, wake up and help, verdammt!
Can't wait for more.
53LilyRosetheDreamerOh awesome! I didn't realise that this was multi chapter! I assumed it was a one-shot. Cool. :D
OH NO! Will Spy be okay? I always guessed that he would have a harder time because of his naughty habit. XD Maybe this will teach him to stop smoking.
Medic, wake up and help, verdammt!
Can't wait for more.
6/29/2012 c2 shadowofcrabs
I was about to say if Spy got Medic out of that Medic owed him, but what happened at the end of 2nd chap, im like nvm great job cra (1 for last chap )(\/)(,;,;,)(\/) (\/)(,;,;,)(\/)
I was about to say if Spy got Medic out of that Medic owed him, but what happened at the end of 2nd chap, im like nvm great job cra (1 for last chap )(\/)(,;,;,)(\/) (\/)(,;,;,)(\/)