for DanIsNotOnFire Has My Heart On Fire12h ago c32 opheliathereader
OMG WOW WOW WOW WOW WOW WOW WOW WOW THAT WAS SO GOOD YOU ARE SO TALENTED OMG WOW WOW WOW
OMG WOW WOW WOW WOW WOW WOW WOW WOW THAT WAS SO GOOD YOU ARE SO TALENTED OMG WOW WOW WOW
14h ago c13 opheliathereader
When Dan got angry and started shouting I said 'DAN YOU FEISTY BEAST' before thinking about it. You are truly a fantastic author
When Dan got angry and started shouting I said 'DAN YOU FEISTY BEAST' before thinking about it. You are truly a fantastic author
5/16 c8 Guest
Katie? Who the fuck is katie?
Katie? Who the fuck is katie?
5/13 c33 Guest
This was a great story! But one thing... Wasnt that story a bit too mature to be told to a little kid? Idk, just wondering. But seriously, that was great!
This was a great story! But one thing... Wasnt that story a bit too mature to be told to a little kid? Idk, just wondering. But seriously, that was great!
5/9 c15 Guest
Just because she doesn't cry at titanic doesn't mean she isn't crapping on feminism from a great height. All the blushing and the thanking people all the time and making breakfast like a good little woman and now this...
Just because she doesn't cry at titanic doesn't mean she isn't crapping on feminism from a great height. All the blushing and the thanking people all the time and making breakfast like a good little woman and now this...
5/9 c12 G
I don't really think her reaction reflects the true trauma of a rape victim - pretty sure you wouldn't even be kissing Dan in that situation.
I personally wouldn't have included this plot twist, I think I would have included some unexpected trouble for Dan that she could help out with - making the relationship more equal and establishing her as a strong female character. That's just my opinion and I definitely enjoyed all the other chapters :) keep it up! Xx
I don't really think her reaction reflects the true trauma of a rape victim - pretty sure you wouldn't even be kissing Dan in that situation.
I personally wouldn't have included this plot twist, I think I would have included some unexpected trouble for Dan that she could help out with - making the relationship more equal and establishing her as a strong female character. That's just my opinion and I definitely enjoyed all the other chapters :) keep it up! Xx
5/6 c28 danasaurkeeksxx
Your story is amazing !
Your story is amazing !
5/3 c32 Guest
Ok I loved the whole story until the end . I repect your writing and all but the end just ruined it for me personally ...
Ok I loved the whole story until the end . I repect your writing and all but the end just ruined it for me personally ...
5/1 c32 Guest
This was amazing! I read all of it, but the ending kind of sucked... i was hoping for a little more about Dan and Skye. Oh well.
This was amazing! I read all of it, but the ending kind of sucked... i was hoping for a little more about Dan and Skye. Oh well.
5/1 c33 
1Miss Writer Girl
Hey! I would a love a second story! I finished this story last last night and forgot to review, sorry . Anyway, if you could, maybe a squeal about Skye's pregnancy? I feel it would be an interesting story :D
1Miss Writer GirlHey! I would a love a second story! I finished this story last last night and forgot to review, sorry . Anyway, if you could, maybe a squeal about Skye's pregnancy? I feel it would be an interesting story :D
4/30 c8 strawface
i thought the girl was called skye?
i thought the girl was called skye?
4/26 c28 Guest
It's great ! Love the story !
It's great ! Love the story !
4/25 c7 Kia
Awww this is cute!
Awww this is cute!
4/23 c15 11summerlovin2011
I completely love your story (even though I wish it was me! Lol). My only suggestion is to put a special warning before the self harm chapters. It was a bit triggering because I didn't see it coming. But excellent story thus far :)
11summerlovin2011I completely love your story (even though I wish it was me! Lol). My only suggestion is to put a special warning before the self harm chapters. It was a bit triggering because I didn't see it coming. But excellent story thus far :)