for Left In Ruins and The Deal That Changed Everything10/18/2012 c3 Sakuragami
I'm happy that you didn't use human cuss words or type in random stuff when a character screams in this chapter! You're improving; keep up the good work!
I'm happy that you didn't use human cuss words or type in random stuff when a character screams in this chapter! You're improving; keep up the good work!
8/10/2012 c2 Guest
plz continue!
plz continue!
7/4/2012 c2 Guest
Oh dear... This cannot be good...
Oh dear... This cannot be good...
7/1/2012 c1 Guest
Please, please, PLEASE continue! I'M BEGGING YOU!
Please, please, PLEASE continue! I'M BEGGING YOU!
6/29/2012 c1 Guest
Definately continue. BTW this tis samredlamb7, I was too lazy to log in.
Definately continue. BTW this tis samredlamb7, I was too lazy to log in.
6/29/2012 c1 Blackwing of ShadowClan
Please continue c:
I like it, but most of the paragraphs seem very short O_O
Please continue c:
I like it, but most of the paragraphs seem very short O_O
6/29/2012 c1 Guest
Continue! Please! It is so good!
VitanixKopa
( Sorry too lazy to sign in )
Continue! Please! It is so good!
VitanixKopa
( Sorry too lazy to sign in )
6/29/2012 c1 Guest
Update soon this was awesome!
Update soon this was awesome!
6/29/2012 c1 Guest
this was interesting, it made me at this from ashfur's perspective. update with more please,and soon!
this was interesting, it made me at this from ashfur's perspective. update with more please,and soon!