for Reign of the Pyro7/11/2012 c10 
3Zach of death
well, I applaud this story. But this last chapter could have been a tad more organised, I kinda had trouble sorting through it.
3Zach of deathwell, I applaud this story. But this last chapter could have been a tad more organised, I kinda had trouble sorting through it.
7/8/2012 c6 Guest
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7/4/2012 c3 Guest
Cool. Keep going. Don't let this FF die like so many others. Maybe have the other team join the hunt for him.
Cool. Keep going. Don't let this FF die like so many others. Maybe have the other team join the hunt for him.
7/9/2012 c7 10Invader Kiwi
THIS IS GONNA BE GOOD!
No. Wait. Scratch that. It's already good. In fact, it's awesome. There's no way it could get BETTER...
But I have faith in you, dear writer, that somehow, it will. Because... because this is brilliant.
10Invader KiwiTHIS IS GONNA BE GOOD!
No. Wait. Scratch that. It's already good. In fact, it's awesome. There's no way it could get BETTER...
But I have faith in you, dear writer, that somehow, it will. Because... because this is brilliant.
7/7/2012 c5 1DeidaraHoshika
Very interesting plot you've got here. Oh Pyro, why did you betray your mates? Then again, this whole crazed psycho/evil genius makes sense, since nobody has actually ever known what Pyro is like. The colorful, innocent thing seen in Meet the Pyro could be a mere facade...
Anyway, nice plot, chapter's aren't too long, suspenseful, the characters are portrayed accurately (in my opinion anyway), your writing style gets the message across without making it a headache, your grammar and spelling is impeccable, and you've portrayed Pyro in such a way that you give the readers info, but not enough for us to see where exactly this story's going.
Good job mate. :))
1DeidaraHoshikaVery interesting plot you've got here. Oh Pyro, why did you betray your mates? Then again, this whole crazed psycho/evil genius makes sense, since nobody has actually ever known what Pyro is like. The colorful, innocent thing seen in Meet the Pyro could be a mere facade...
Anyway, nice plot, chapter's aren't too long, suspenseful, the characters are portrayed accurately (in my opinion anyway), your writing style gets the message across without making it a headache, your grammar and spelling is impeccable, and you've portrayed Pyro in such a way that you give the readers info, but not enough for us to see where exactly this story's going.
Good job mate. :))
7/5/2012 c4 2BruinBastard
I like where this is going! The Pyro should definitely set more things on fire, and kill more people!
2BruinBastardI like where this is going! The Pyro should definitely set more things on fire, and kill more people!
7/4/2012 c3 53LilyRosetheDreamer
OH NOOOO! The Scout! He always dies or is the last one left in these horror genres fanfiction people write. :/ Nice job with the suspense.
53LilyRosetheDreamerOH NOOOO! The Scout! He always dies or is the last one left in these horror genres fanfiction people write. :/ Nice job with the suspense.
7/4/2012 c2 LilyRosetheDreamer
This is really interesting so far! Why has BLU Pyro gone schizo? And will RED Pyro save the day or join him? Questions, questions. Good job!
This is really interesting so far! Why has BLU Pyro gone schizo? And will RED Pyro save the day or join him? Questions, questions. Good job!