for We Will Never Hurt Again3/24 c1 Guest
'My anger grew, but not at Edward and Alice alone, but for the fact that they had hurt the man's soul, whom of which was right in front of me.'
What is wrong with this sentence?
'My anger grew, but not at Edward and Alice alone, but for the fact that they had hurt the man's soul, whom of which was right in front of me.'
What is wrong with this sentence?
3/16 c7 Guest
Wow...im lost for words ive always been a jasper girl and i love this story so much :D
Wow...im lost for words ive always been a jasper girl and i love this story so much :D
3/14 c13 Guest
Absolutely perfect! i'm not a big fan of this kind of romance writing, but the way u wrote it is just amazing.
Absolutely perfect! i'm not a big fan of this kind of romance writing, but the way u wrote it is just amazing.
3/11 c8 r99smith
I just found this story and love it. Will there be a little more back story of what happened with Bella and Edward? It sounds as if he broke up with her and they left, but they are back? Just 2 grammar items: breathe - is the verb - (sometimes the "e" at the end if left off) - I remember it this way "I can hold my breath but I need an "e" to breathe. The other is "he could care less", it should be "he couldn't care less" meaning - he cares so little that it is impossible for him to care less. Thanks for writing, I am enjoying this Bella and Jasper.
I just found this story and love it. Will there be a little more back story of what happened with Bella and Edward? It sounds as if he broke up with her and they left, but they are back? Just 2 grammar items: breathe - is the verb - (sometimes the "e" at the end if left off) - I remember it this way "I can hold my breath but I need an "e" to breathe. The other is "he could care less", it should be "he couldn't care less" meaning - he cares so little that it is impossible for him to care less. Thanks for writing, I am enjoying this Bella and Jasper.
1/30 c13 
17Rainbor123
Is it sad that I knew exactly what 'As you Wish' was from the moment i read it?
Aww who cares i LOVVVVEE the Princess Bride :)
17Rainbor123Is it sad that I knew exactly what 'As you Wish' was from the moment i read it?
Aww who cares i LOVVVVEE the Princess Bride :)
1/30 c13 DarkMysticGoddes
How cute!
How cute!
1/19 c21 2salvatorebabe411
You are absolutely amazing! At first I was skeptical, but I've come to love the idea of Bella and Jasper's love for each other. Thank you for opening my eyes and writing the best story I've read in a VERY long time!
2salvatorebabe411You are absolutely amazing! At first I was skeptical, but I've come to love the idea of Bella and Jasper's love for each other. Thank you for opening my eyes and writing the best story I've read in a VERY long time!
1/12 c8 Guest
this was really softie fluff! thats so cute! i espeially like when jazzman throws bellsy boo nto the water.
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this was really softie fluff! thats so cute! i espeially like when jazzman throws bellsy boo nto the water.
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1/12 c7 Guest
omg that was so... okay, i have to say it again, sweet!
i loved the kiss scene but the one thats forever playing on my mind was the one where jasper tries to scare bella. i think that that was the most intimate moment in the whole chapter.
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omg that was so... okay, i have to say it again, sweet!
i loved the kiss scene but the one thats forever playing on my mind was the one where jasper tries to scare bella. i think that that was the most intimate moment in the whole chapter.
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1/12 c6 Guest
you think thats funny human! leavingus with a cliffhanger! grrrr! (i still live exclamation marks!) jazzman lurves bellsy-boo! ohh thats so sweet...( i so need 2 come up with more adjectives)
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you think thats funny human! leavingus with a cliffhanger! grrrr! (i still live exclamation marks!) jazzman lurves bellsy-boo! ohh thats so sweet...( i so need 2 come up with more adjectives)
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1/12 c5 Guest
woohoo! the last part was so sweet! i love exclamation marks!yayy! um...(slightly embarrassed) yea. just gonna repeat what i said before, the last part was really sweet. and i like "male bonding time"
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woohoo! the last part was so sweet! i love exclamation marks!yayy! um...(slightly embarrassed) yea. just gonna repeat what i said before, the last part was really sweet. and i like "male bonding time"
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1/12 c4 Guest
bellsy-boo! i crack up every time. and i read over it 5 times. and jazz-man, thats even funnier! i like the light-heartedness in this chapter, even with jazzmans( hehe) thinking. yea... to much angst is just depressing. so yay!
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bellsy-boo! i crack up every time. and i read over it 5 times. and jazz-man, thats even funnier! i like the light-heartedness in this chapter, even with jazzmans( hehe) thinking. yea... to much angst is just depressing. so yay!
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