for Thanks for the memories10/2/2012 c1 
4kedah
AWWWWWWW that is sooooo cuuuuuute. I loved it, you gota write more stories. Update, UPDATE!
4kedahAWWWWWWW that is sooooo cuuuuuute. I loved it, you gota write more stories. Update, UPDATE!
7/8/2012 c1 12Bob the Flying Monkey
Very good story. You portrayed his emotions well. Side note: don't use commas - you do better without them. Other than that, well-written and sweet. Write more so I can read more.
BtFM
12Bob the Flying MonkeyVery good story. You portrayed his emotions well. Side note: don't use commas - you do better without them. Other than that, well-written and sweet. Write more so I can read more.
BtFM
7/8/2012 c1 Guest
LOOOVED IT! XD
LOOOVED IT! XD
7/4/2012 c1 Guest
is this a gay story?
is this a gay story?
7/5/2012 c1 15Annzy Bananzy
Awww! This was so cute All he can think about is Marik!
This was written very well! Good description and emotion told in such a short word-count; impressive :)
As you said, there were a few (VERY FEW MIND YOU) mistakes, but nothing greatly annoying.
I like the words that are capitalized and bolded, firstly because they help put emphasis on them (obviously XD), but also because if you read them backwards it spells, "LOVE HIM." I'm not sure if that was on purpose, but it's still cool to me D
All in all, great job :D I hope to see more thiefshipping from you!
15Annzy BananzyAwww! This was so cute All he can think about is Marik!
This was written very well! Good description and emotion told in such a short word-count; impressive :)
As you said, there were a few (VERY FEW MIND YOU) mistakes, but nothing greatly annoying.
I like the words that are capitalized and bolded, firstly because they help put emphasis on them (obviously XD), but also because if you read them backwards it spells, "LOVE HIM." I'm not sure if that was on purpose, but it's still cool to me D
All in all, great job :D I hope to see more thiefshipping from you!
7/4/2012 c1 1Oniendra
I really like it! :3
Maybe Bakura is a bit out of character, I don't really know.. there is not much to judge from. You should make a longer fic where you really go deep into a character :) It's really hard to write in character at times. Depending on the character of course! :D
Overall, this little fic is super sweet and dramatic and cute and all those things! :D
So please write more :)
1OniendraI really like it! :3
Maybe Bakura is a bit out of character, I don't really know.. there is not much to judge from. You should make a longer fic where you really go deep into a character :) It's really hard to write in character at times. Depending on the character of course! :D
Overall, this little fic is super sweet and dramatic and cute and all those things! :D
So please write more :)
7/4/2012 c1 12Julius Night
It was quite good, short and sweet, good description of emotions and thoughts. Liked it
12Julius NightIt was quite good, short and sweet, good description of emotions and thoughts. Liked it