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8/8/2012 c5 2Chief Wolfee
Cool, all you need to do is say that it's completed.
8/1/2012 c4 Chief Wolfee
Nice one thebronyman, liking it.
7/19/2012 c3 Chief Wolfee
Hmm. Good so far, few errors but they're mostly grammar and spelling.
7/19/2012 c3 3bronydudeshadow
Hmm...very intersting story...couple of mistakes and a bit confusing...but other then that it looks good.
Yeh it was going a bit fast...
If ya need help or something PM me. Btw good job.
7/15/2012 c1 3Droshin
i think you progressing to fast, i suggest you slow down a bit, but other than that its not half bad
7/5/2012 c1 2Chief Wolfee
Well, awesome and i like your new name :)

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