for If I Get A Choice, I Will Choose To Stay12/15/2012 c14 
6Silver Shots
I likes this chapter a lot just whis there was an okaim refences in here
6Silver ShotsI likes this chapter a lot just whis there was an okaim refences in here
12/14/2012 c14 Dylan Boggs
I believe it has been a while since your last update, but thankfully I like your story and I remembered the plot line. It would have been horrible if I was to forget your story. Well hope to see some more updates (saw a few repeated words in this chapter and some that made no since at all, mainly around the section where they were infiltrating the changeling base/hive/topsecretportalofteleportaio nthing.)
I believe it has been a while since your last update, but thankfully I like your story and I remembered the plot line. It would have been horrible if I was to forget your story. Well hope to see some more updates (saw a few repeated words in this chapter and some that made no since at all, mainly around the section where they were infiltrating the changeling base/hive/topsecretportalofteleportaio nthing.)
12/14/2012 c14 7Some Moron
Awesome! It actually felt like an ending in a way, so I'm glad to hear there's still more to come.
7Some MoronAwesome! It actually felt like an ending in a way, so I'm glad to hear there's still more to come.
11/5/2012 c13 Guest
Loveed it :3
Loveed it :3
11/4/2012 c13 Dylan Boggs
Thank you for the update, I can't wait for the next. I have not noticed many errors in your story (besides the random odd sentence, maybe 1 or 2 per chapter) Keep the updates coming!
Thank you for the update, I can't wait for the next. I have not noticed many errors in your story (besides the random odd sentence, maybe 1 or 2 per chapter) Keep the updates coming!
11/4/2012 c13 Brohoof
Good apart from a couple of we're instead of were mistakes which were just after the next day and were you running
But apart from that another great chapter :D
Good apart from a couple of we're instead of were mistakes which were just after the next day and were you running
But apart from that another great chapter :D
11/4/2012 c13 kingwasabi
I will start off by saying I read all thirteen chalets in one sitting. the story Is wonderful staying on track and keeping my interest coming the right amount of push regarding live interests and all together very well put together keep it up man your great at this
I will start off by saying I read all thirteen chalets in one sitting. the story Is wonderful staying on track and keeping my interest coming the right amount of push regarding live interests and all together very well put together keep it up man your great at this
10/14/2012 c12 1RainbowdashEpicness
You heard me ask 'What's it!?' :O STALKER! LEAVE ME ALONE! Nah, great chapter, looking forward too more man!
1RainbowdashEpicnessYou heard me ask 'What's it!?' :O STALKER! LEAVE ME ALONE! Nah, great chapter, looking forward too more man!
10/14/2012 c12 7Some Moron
Ooh! IwannaknowIwannaknow!
Surprised how fast RD recovered, considering she's the element of loyalty and was just betrayed... not complaining though!
7Some MoronOoh! IwannaknowIwannaknow!
Surprised how fast RD recovered, considering she's the element of loyalty and was just betrayed... not complaining though!
10/14/2012 c12 Brohoof
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*ahem*
Another good chapter didn't spot many mistakes only one or two, but apart from that great!
Also... Y U USE CLIFFHANGERS .
more pls .
FFFFFIUUUUUUUUUUUU
*ahem*
Another good chapter didn't spot many mistakes only one or two, but apart from that great!
Also... Y U USE CLIFFHANGERS .
more pls .
10/14/2012 c12 Upset Reader Guy
Excelent as always, however I would like to give you a big screw you for ending the chapter like that, I wanted to keep reading D:
Excelent as always, however I would like to give you a big screw you for ending the chapter like that, I wanted to keep reading D:
10/14/2012 c12 123chipmunkfanantic
Wow enlist in starfleet academy ? well that sounds like a good idea for me but he could get transfered to The USS Enterprise E current flagship of the Federation great chapter and Update soon
123chipmunkfananticWow enlist in starfleet academy ? well that sounds like a good idea for me but he could get transfered to The USS Enterprise E current flagship of the Federation great chapter and Update soon