for Midnight7/19/2012 c2 Guest
I think you should reread through this, it has a lot of errors, if you do not have a beta then maybe you should look around, or PM me. Your story has potential, and you can match it up if you have someone fix all the tech errors.
I think you should reread through this, it has a lot of errors, if you do not have a beta then maybe you should look around, or PM me. Your story has potential, and you can match it up if you have someone fix all the tech errors.
7/16/2012 c4 Guest
great story. keep writing. update soon. I can't wait to read more! This is getting interesting.
great story. keep writing. update soon. I can't wait to read more! This is getting interesting.
37/10/2012 c1 soupydoo1
Don't forget to update! And that vampire...I thoought it was Jasper gone a little wild, but he wouldn't hurt Bella.
Don't forget to update! And that vampire...I thoought it was Jasper gone a little wild, but he wouldn't hurt Bella.
7/10/2012 c1 misszayy-5
loved it update soon :D
loved it update soon :D
7/12/2012 c3 lunjul
I wonder why he left? I can't wait to see both him and Bella together and I hope that they screw up the cullens
I wonder why he left? I can't wait to see both him and Bella together and I hope that they screw up the cullens
7/11/2012 c1 E.G.Hewitt
Please get yourself a beta, this could be a really good story, its a great plot, but way too jumpy, its hard to read, though i am enjoying it anyways.
Please get yourself a beta, this could be a really good story, its a great plot, but way too jumpy, its hard to read, though i am enjoying it anyways.