for Still Can't Get Out Of Italy3/18 c4 Rachelandray
Hahaha, I really enjoyed reading this. It reminded me a lot of HAP! you did a very good job with the characters.
Hahaha, I really enjoyed reading this. It reminded me a lot of HAP! you did a very good job with the characters.
8/13/2012 c4
5kayra isis
hello there! this story is so bizarre and i absolutelly love it! and nihons phrase: youve just activated my trap card was epic! hilarious! hahahhahahaa you made me laugh!
ohhh man i would love to be in the allies meetings: baseball, disney on ice... hahaha
i hope you continue soon i cant wait for the next attempt ! :p
seee ya )
5kayra isishello there! this story is so bizarre and i absolutelly love it! and nihons phrase: youve just activated my trap card was epic! hilarious! hahahhahahaa you made me laugh!
ohhh man i would love to be in the allies meetings: baseball, disney on ice... hahaha
i hope you continue soon i cant wait for the next attempt ! :p
seee ya )
8/13/2012 c4
10Nyapoop14
This story got me laughing on the floor :D my cousin gave me looks like I'm cazy for laughing at my phone :P I luv this... Please continue :D
10Nyapoop14This story got me laughing on the floor :D my cousin gave me looks like I'm cazy for laughing at my phone :P I luv this... Please continue :D
8/13/2012 c4
14Lapulta J.R.R. Cahill
Yes! I love your author's notes! I can literally hear the dub's voice speaking to me and laughing at 'silly Germany' and 'while those two are duking it out'. Great job! (Might I say that I love the history? Keep it coming!)
While the writing could use a bit of work, you did wonderfully capturing all the countries' personalities. Russia... Russia especially. Because I can just see all of them watching Tinkerbell and poor Britain getting so protective over her. :)
Keep writing!
-L
14Lapulta J.R.R. CahillYes! I love your author's notes! I can literally hear the dub's voice speaking to me and laughing at 'silly Germany' and 'while those two are duking it out'. Great job! (Might I say that I love the history? Keep it coming!)
While the writing could use a bit of work, you did wonderfully capturing all the countries' personalities. Russia... Russia especially. Because I can just see all of them watching Tinkerbell and poor Britain getting so protective over her. :)
Keep writing!
-L
7/16/2012 c2
21Sophia Griffin
XD Britain and France need to chill with who's prettier and who's not. I'd give them each a mirror and go "YOU'RE MEN. YOU LOOK UGLY IN WOMEN'S CLOTHING." *deadpan*
21Sophia GriffinXD Britain and France need to chill with who's prettier and who's not. I'd give them each a mirror and go "YOU'RE MEN. YOU LOOK UGLY IN WOMEN'S CLOTHING." *deadpan*
7/16/2012 c2 catgirl963
this is fantastic. I can almost see exactly what is going on and the history lesson you tossed in makes it just like the show and I love a show where you can have a good time and learn something as well. I can hardly wait for the next chapter. Thank you for making my day so much more fun :)
this is fantastic. I can almost see exactly what is going on and the history lesson you tossed in makes it just like the show and I love a show where you can have a good time and learn something as well. I can hardly wait for the next chapter. Thank you for making my day so much more fun :)
7/12/2012 c1
21Sophia Griffin
LOL
"DON'T CHASE THEM, PROTECT ME FROM THEM EVEN THOUGH THEY'RE RUNNING AWAY!"
That is what Romano actually said in my mind. XD
21Sophia GriffinLOL
"DON'T CHASE THEM, PROTECT ME FROM THEM EVEN THOUGH THEY'RE RUNNING AWAY!"
That is what Romano actually said in my mind. XD
