for Dead Flower11/23/2012 c3 Guest
The overall story was quite appealing, however, the words you use are somewhat stiff and do not fully express the mood and actions that you are trying to portray
The overall story was quite appealing, however, the words you use are somewhat stiff and do not fully express the mood and actions that you are trying to portray
11/21/2012 c3 
22KingdomOfThomond
The characterisation is quite good in my opinion, so I wouldn't worry too much if I was you.
22KingdomOfThomondThe characterisation is quite good in my opinion, so I wouldn't worry too much if I was you.
9/15/2012 c2 An Anon
I really hope you haven't abandoned this story. I LOVE it. This girl actually has a valid reason WHY no one knows she's female and why she has so much training. It makes perfect sense and is believable- something you don't see often in this fandom. You were just getting to a good part, too! She can't hide anything from Medic. I hope you update soon!
I really hope you haven't abandoned this story. I LOVE it. This girl actually has a valid reason WHY no one knows she's female and why she has so much training. It makes perfect sense and is believable- something you don't see often in this fandom. You were just getting to a good part, too! She can't hide anything from Medic. I hope you update soon!
7/16/2012 c2 2Haley-LeatherJacket
I am loving this story and the concept of it It's rare to find bearable TF2 fics, so I commend you xD
Keep up the good work, I love how you write and love Marigold :D
2Haley-LeatherJacketI am loving this story and the concept of it It's rare to find bearable TF2 fics, so I commend you xD
Keep up the good work, I love how you write and love Marigold :D
7/14/2012 c2 22KingdomOfThomond
Nobody trying to hide their gender can hide it from Medic, but that can be covered by the Hippocratic Oath. You have a good writing style, but I have some difficulty in getting into this story (if chapter three is a good one, then I think that difficulty would decrease).
22KingdomOfThomondNobody trying to hide their gender can hide it from Medic, but that can be covered by the Hippocratic Oath. You have a good writing style, but I have some difficulty in getting into this story (if chapter three is a good one, then I think that difficulty would decrease).
7/13/2012 c2 7Magicwinter
Squeeeee I love this story so far! This is a really interesting story line and it's very well-written! Keep up your good work!
7MagicwinterSqueeeee I love this story so far! This is a really interesting story line and it's very well-written! Keep up your good work!
7/13/2012 c2 Bakura90
Well I'm sold on this story, its a new story concept here which is nice and so far looking really good.
Can't wait to read more soon!
*thumbsup*
Well I'm sold on this story, its a new story concept here which is nice and so far looking really good.
Can't wait to read more soon!
*thumbsup*
7/13/2012 c2 xMariStar
Awesome! Can't wait for an update!
Awesome! Can't wait for an update!