for Drekavs fight7/30/2012 c3 
7Benjyboy
I liked this chapter, though I would reccommend that you get a beta, as there were parts of this that were difficult to read.
Benjyboy
7BenjyboyI liked this chapter, though I would reccommend that you get a beta, as there were parts of this that were difficult to read.
Benjyboy
7/23/2012 c2 Benjyboy
Hi again. If I were you, I would request a Beta-reader, as I was unable to understand some of this chapter, but the parts I could understand were very conducive to the overall plot.
Benjyboy
Hi again. If I were you, I would request a Beta-reader, as I was unable to understand some of this chapter, but the parts I could understand were very conducive to the overall plot.
Benjyboy
7/15/2012 c1 Benjyboy
I would suggest that you work on your grammar, but other than that this is excellent. Also, the term 'super battleship' would likely be replaced with 'dreadnought' or 'juggernaught' or even 'heavy-battleship' as the size is usually referred by the tonnage.
Please keep updating.
Benjboy
I would suggest that you work on your grammar, but other than that this is excellent. Also, the term 'super battleship' would likely be replaced with 'dreadnought' or 'juggernaught' or even 'heavy-battleship' as the size is usually referred by the tonnage.
Please keep updating.
Benjboy
7/14/2012 c1 J
They don't teach yanks to proof read?
They don't teach yanks to proof read?