for Summer7/16/2012 c1
48TayaCurragh
This is really good, considering you don't usually write poem! The layout is a bit confusing, it might look better with spaces, but I really like the idea :) I feel for Andromeda, not being able to be with Ted now it was summer. The theme of summer was used well too. The last part was my favourite :)
48TayaCurraghThis is really good, considering you don't usually write poem! The layout is a bit confusing, it might look better with spaces, but I really like the idea :) I feel for Andromeda, not being able to be with Ted now it was summer. The theme of summer was used well too. The last part was my favourite :)
