for Waiting12/2/2012 c1 3Chris28
Holy crap. That scared me. This fanfic SCARED me. There's NO possible way this could be your first time writing.
Holy crap. That scared me. This fanfic SCARED me. There's NO possible way this could be your first time writing.
11/21/2012 c1 
12LexiLopezi
I cried when I read this (tell anyone and I'll kill you). This is seriously a really good fanfic. Maybe one of the best oneshots in the entire archive.
Nobody likes being alone.
12LexiLopeziI cried when I read this (tell anyone and I'll kill you). This is seriously a really good fanfic. Maybe one of the best oneshots in the entire archive.
Nobody likes being alone.
10/26/2012 c1 11hawktakesflight
Well done. It's a really good piece of work.
I admire how you work in clinches such as "the great Teufort in the sky", people going insane, setting it in the future - and yet make it so appealing and so enjoyable to read. You really manage to pull on the heartstrings.
I must admit, the last two paragraphs were clever indeed.
All in all, great piece of writing!
hawk
11hawktakesflightWell done. It's a really good piece of work.
I admire how you work in clinches such as "the great Teufort in the sky", people going insane, setting it in the future - and yet make it so appealing and so enjoyable to read. You really manage to pull on the heartstrings.
I must admit, the last two paragraphs were clever indeed.
All in all, great piece of writing!
hawk
9/9/2012 c1 Crossman282
That was beautiful...
I nearly cried at how well written that was, its mind boggling how someone can come up with such a concept that has been done plenty of times before and re-write it. Well done good sir/madam I tip my hat to you!
That was beautiful...
I nearly cried at how well written that was, its mind boggling how someone can come up with such a concept that has been done plenty of times before and re-write it. Well done good sir/madam I tip my hat to you!
9/1/2012 c1 Scuttlebucket
So touching. I actually cried whend I reached the end. It was so sad, lonely and depressing but at the same time it was kind of happy and had a hint of hopefulness in it.
So touching. I actually cried whend I reached the end. It was so sad, lonely and depressing but at the same time it was kind of happy and had a hint of hopefulness in it.
8/26/2012 c1 8cooldude01
... a very saddening and tragic tale. I'm actually quite moved by this.
The ending kind of reminds me of E-102 Gamma's ending from Sonic Adventure, oddly enough.
Well done.
8cooldude01... a very saddening and tragic tale. I'm actually quite moved by this.
The ending kind of reminds me of E-102 Gamma's ending from Sonic Adventure, oddly enough.
Well done.
8/4/2012 c1 53LilyRosetheDreamer
I remember seeing this story before and forgetting (to my horror) to review it.
*gets bricked by the other reviewers*
In the words of the Heavy;
OOH THIS IS SAD!
I mean it. The little details in this made me shocked and sad at the same time, like when his own mother left him all alone because she couldn't handle him. :(
There are a few grammatical errors and I got a bit confused when you jumped back and forth into memories, but those can be rectified with time because dammit girl, your English is brilliant and your potential is bigger than Europe! Please let me know if you need any help, for I will be more than glad to give it to you!
53LilyRosetheDreamerI remember seeing this story before and forgetting (to my horror) to review it.
*gets bricked by the other reviewers*
In the words of the Heavy;
OOH THIS IS SAD!
I mean it. The little details in this made me shocked and sad at the same time, like when his own mother left him all alone because she couldn't handle him. :(
There are a few grammatical errors and I got a bit confused when you jumped back and forth into memories, but those can be rectified with time because dammit girl, your English is brilliant and your potential is bigger than Europe! Please let me know if you need any help, for I will be more than glad to give it to you!
7/22/2012 c1 35Faux Promises
The only thing that would have made this better was if Scout had sock puppets of all his former team mates.
Engi puppet: "Ahm movin' this."
35Faux PromisesThe only thing that would have made this better was if Scout had sock puppets of all his former team mates.
Engi puppet: "Ahm movin' this."
7/21/2012 c1 2XxSiberianTigerxX
I am at a loss for words.
You say this is your first time writing? I don't believe you. This is way too good for that.
2XxSiberianTigerxXI am at a loss for words.
You say this is your first time writing? I don't believe you. This is way too good for that.
7/21/2012 c1 14Cookie-Loving Kiara
Damn, I literally LOVE this story! Great job! I can't believe this is your first time writing considering how splendid you did! I'll be honest, this story managed to make me cry :')
Again, great job!
14Cookie-Loving KiaraDamn, I literally LOVE this story! Great job! I can't believe this is your first time writing considering how splendid you did! I'll be honest, this story managed to make me cry :')
Again, great job!
7/20/2012 c1 28Rainbow-Velociraptor
I'm not going to lie, I teared up a bit. The ending was perfect, just perfect.
28Rainbow-VelociraptorI'm not going to lie, I teared up a bit. The ending was perfect, just perfect.
7/19/2012 c1 10BonclaysFan
Wow this is amazing! I actually feel really bad for the scout. The ending was bitter-sweet but just enough for me to love it. I think I'll keep an eye on you. Hope the rest of your stuff is as good as this.
10BonclaysFanWow this is amazing! I actually feel really bad for the scout. The ending was bitter-sweet but just enough for me to love it. I think I'll keep an eye on you. Hope the rest of your stuff is as good as this.
7/19/2012 c1 31Fauxhound
This. Was your first time writing?
Because this is just amazing. Seriously. Like the other reviewer said, you broke my heart into a billion pieces. The way it was set up was genius. And we don't learn too much about Scout's mom in the first place, so I like the creative take on her you used.
It was well written.
There is nothing I love more than a good sad fic.
Well done! It was great!
31FauxhoundThis. Was your first time writing?
Because this is just amazing. Seriously. Like the other reviewer said, you broke my heart into a billion pieces. The way it was set up was genius. And we don't learn too much about Scout's mom in the first place, so I like the creative take on her you used.
It was well written.
There is nothing I love more than a good sad fic.
Well done! It was great!