for At The Weakest4/7 c1 Wolfie98
Hi there Mere! I'm Wolfie98, and I LOVE all of your stories, especially this one though, and its continuation. Also, I just realized that you have a DA account! :D I can't believe I didn't see it before! Letting you know, I am DEFINITELY a fan of you! Keep up the awesome work! :)
- Wolfie98
Hi there Mere! I'm Wolfie98, and I LOVE all of your stories, especially this one though, and its continuation. Also, I just realized that you have a DA account! :D I can't believe I didn't see it before! Letting you know, I am DEFINITELY a fan of you! Keep up the awesome work! :)
- Wolfie98
4/2 c27 Guest
Mere! Mere, I LOVE you!
You are awesome! What a loophole! I-I-I don't know what to say, I am literally stuttering to myself now saying,"I-I can't b-believe it..." You are one of the most awesome authors in the world, Heck, girl get published! If those stupid guys they call producers send it back to you, they don't know good literature! You are amazing, thank you so much! Now, I saw the sequel on the list, gotta read that now... Thank you!
Mere! Mere, I LOVE you!
You are awesome! What a loophole! I-I-I don't know what to say, I am literally stuttering to myself now saying,"I-I can't b-believe it..." You are one of the most awesome authors in the world, Heck, girl get published! If those stupid guys they call producers send it back to you, they don't know good literature! You are amazing, thank you so much! Now, I saw the sequel on the list, gotta read that now... Thank you!
4/2 c26 Guest
I'm shocked. I was going to put my highlights of these last few chapters... here.
"That tractor had a mental disorder!"
"Is that why he tried to bite you when ya honked beside him?"
Mater suddenly drove into the room. "WAIT! I didn't get to say goodbye!"
Down the hall, Lightning turned around. Mater smiled. "Goodbye! Okay, I'm good."
"You're getting better at it, Sal. Only one of em tried to bite ya this time, instead of six of em."
"No..." Sally whispered, tears clouding her windshield. "No, he can't be dead!"
Doc looked at her sadly. "Sally... I'm..." He grinned. "Just teasing you. Surgery was a success, and Lightning is going to be just fine."
But now... MERE! Please, no, he can't be dead! As much as I love Finn, Holley, Mater, and the rest, I still adore Sal and Light! Mere, noooo...
*crying*
I'm shocked. I was going to put my highlights of these last few chapters... here.
"That tractor had a mental disorder!"
"Is that why he tried to bite you when ya honked beside him?"
Mater suddenly drove into the room. "WAIT! I didn't get to say goodbye!"
Down the hall, Lightning turned around. Mater smiled. "Goodbye! Okay, I'm good."
"You're getting better at it, Sal. Only one of em tried to bite ya this time, instead of six of em."
"No..." Sally whispered, tears clouding her windshield. "No, he can't be dead!"
Doc looked at her sadly. "Sally... I'm..." He grinned. "Just teasing you. Surgery was a success, and Lightning is going to be just fine."
But now... MERE! Please, no, he can't be dead! As much as I love Finn, Holley, Mater, and the rest, I still adore Sal and Light! Mere, noooo...
*crying*
4/2 c23 Guest
Shoot, well dad gum it!
Anyway, My fave poignant part was def
"Sally, I dont want to die and leave you as a single mother."
I was SOBBING at that point.
However, the rest of the chapter made up for it when I wen back and read, "A REAL FERRARI!" again...
But seriously, these past few chappies have been awesome and heartbreaking. Especially 19, when Doc says that Light had engine failure. I was thinking, "OMG. OMG. NO..."
Shoot, well dad gum it!
Anyway, My fave poignant part was def
"Sally, I dont want to die and leave you as a single mother."
I was SOBBING at that point.
However, the rest of the chapter made up for it when I wen back and read, "A REAL FERRARI!" again...
But seriously, these past few chappies have been awesome and heartbreaking. Especially 19, when Doc says that Light had engine failure. I was thinking, "OMG. OMG. NO..."
4/2 c23 Guest
Hey, it's me again! Reading At the Weakest, deciding which chapters I really want to review on all together. I do it like that now. I'm not going to review for a few chapters, then do a few at the same time. That way, I get this big WHAM feeling.
To the point, Lightning, you will do everything in your power to get well, I can see that. Please make it through. 3
Hey, it's me again! Reading At the Weakest, deciding which chapters I really want to review on all together. I do it like that now. I'm not going to review for a few chapters, then do a few at the same time. That way, I get this big WHAM feeling.
To the point, Lightning, you will do everything in your power to get well, I can see that. Please make it through. 3
3/20 c27 Temper Destiny
Hi Merel
I'd just like to say how amazing your stories are. I would have private messaged you, but it said you disabled PMs? Anyway, I think you should write a Cars fiction,specifically to send it to Pixar and see if they will make it in to a Cars 3. I love your stories btw and you are an amazing writer.
Fly on, TemperDestiny
Hi Merel
I'd just like to say how amazing your stories are. I would have private messaged you, but it said you disabled PMs? Anyway, I think you should write a Cars fiction,specifically to send it to Pixar and see if they will make it in to a Cars 3. I love your stories btw and you are an amazing writer.
Fly on, TemperDestiny
2/27 c1 PandFStudios
You REALLY should specify which stories are humanized and which ones aren't. Other than that, great start!
You REALLY should specify which stories are humanized and which ones aren't. Other than that, great start!
1/22 c27 
2Rhyme2Reason
Nothing beats this story, it's to good for words! Tha absolute best cars fanfic EVER! You rock!
2Rhyme2ReasonNothing beats this story, it's to good for words! Tha absolute best cars fanfic EVER! You rock!
1/18 c1 126Netbug009
Huh, I wonder what's wrong with Lightning. D:
A few bits of critique though:
1. You want the spelling "sight" rather than "site"
2. Please please PLEASE don't put author's notes in the middle of your chapters. Imagine if your friend paused a movie you'd never seen before at random to comment on it. For a reader, that's a lot like how an author's note wedged in feels.
126Netbug009Huh, I wonder what's wrong with Lightning. D:
A few bits of critique though:
1. You want the spelling "sight" rather than "site"
2. Please please PLEASE don't put author's notes in the middle of your chapters. Imagine if your friend paused a movie you'd never seen before at random to comment on it. For a reader, that's a lot like how an author's note wedged in feels.
1/14 c27 Guest
LOL You honestly had me when Lightning "died"!
LOL You honestly had me when Lightning "died"!