for A Promise Kept10/24/2012 c2 
13Magiku Maggi
Very nice. And angsty. I'm glad her death wasn't a suicide like I expected. Please continue. w
13Magiku MaggiVery nice. And angsty. I'm glad her death wasn't a suicide like I expected. Please continue. w
8/8/2012 c2 5Genie2130
One idea can be that Rin does something to make Chihiro actually smile once,leading to a way to make her leave her sorrow and despair. Anyway,please get some inspiration to update on this original plot.
5Genie2130One idea can be that Rin does something to make Chihiro actually smile once,leading to a way to make her leave her sorrow and despair. Anyway,please get some inspiration to update on this original plot.
8/6/2012 c2 DAfan
Not to bad...
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Not to bad...
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7/30/2012 c1 Blackcat
Ut is easy for a person to for of they give up the will to live, your body, simply stops working. The end.
Well, that was just depressing. But nice story, I liked the way it was written.
Ut is easy for a person to for of they give up the will to live, your body, simply stops working. The end.
Well, that was just depressing. But nice story, I liked the way it was written.
7/28/2012 c1 sonia-sa
well written story, happy belated
well written story, happy belated
7/28/2012 c1 Taltala
I once gave up the will to survive...
But nice story, anyway... I just wonder how does a person die with just losing a living will..? OwO
I once gave up the will to survive...
But nice story, anyway... I just wonder how does a person die with just losing a living will..? OwO