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6Ciel-Chocoholic-BakeNeko
Don't worry we understand smiles I would say that I would adopt it but I take to long to update and I dont think I could portray your OC's half as good as you can. Please let me know when someone adopts so I can see how this story turns out!
6Ciel-Chocoholic-BakeNekoDon't worry we understand smiles I would say that I would adopt it but I take to long to update and I dont think I could portray your OC's half as good as you can. Please let me know when someone adopts so I can see how this story turns out!
11/20/2012 c1 Guest
I love it
Ana Rae black. I love her she reminded of me
The same calm and cool
We even have the same exact middle name
I love it
Ana Rae black. I love her she reminded of me
The same calm and cool
We even have the same exact middle name
11/22/2012 c7 Ciel-Chocoholic-BakeNeko
Noo!i hate cliffhangers de suck!
Anyways, XD thanks for the update this was awesome!
Noo!i hate cliffhangers de suck!
Anyways, XD thanks for the update this was awesome!
10/8/2012 c6 6The-Music-Loving-Anime-tard
I... Have no idea how to explain what I just read. XDDD All I can say is freaking hilariously random! You have learned well, my pupil. You have learned well.. I just... Love the ** you can come up with in your stories sometimes. Update soon! (Note to self: stay as far away as possible from Orochimaru o.O)
6The-Music-Loving-Anime-tardI... Have no idea how to explain what I just read. XDDD All I can say is freaking hilariously random! You have learned well, my pupil. You have learned well.. I just... Love the ** you can come up with in your stories sometimes. Update soon! (Note to self: stay as far away as possible from Orochimaru o.O)
9/30/2012 c6 39VeeandreaHart
Aaaaaaaawwwww! It was funny and cutely romantic and and and it made me happy! Reading this has been the best part of my birthday so far. I woke up at 8 because someone texted me and then I found out that Maxson didn't work anymore and now I'm sad :(
39VeeandreaHartAaaaaaaawwwww! It was funny and cutely romantic and and and it made me happy! Reading this has been the best part of my birthday so far. I woke up at 8 because someone texted me and then I found out that Maxson didn't work anymore and now I'm sad :(
9/4/2012 c4 MusicAnimeTard
*Read review on chapter 16 in Evil Angels* XD Funneh shiet right there, ya' know what I mean? Ya', you know what I mean. Or..I hope you do. XD But ya'. Don't know about my own updates. ;A; I hope soon myself, actually. So anyways, you continue amusing me. And you earn my applaud. So I do indeed hope you update this, Evil Angels, and Konaha High: Sakura soon. The-Music-Loving-Anime-tard out!
*Read review on chapter 16 in Evil Angels* XD Funneh shiet right there, ya' know what I mean? Ya', you know what I mean. Or..I hope you do. XD But ya'. Don't know about my own updates. ;A; I hope soon myself, actually. So anyways, you continue amusing me. And you earn my applaud. So I do indeed hope you update this, Evil Angels, and Konaha High: Sakura soon. The-Music-Loving-Anime-tard out!
8/21/2012 c1 G.P
I'm sorry, this is a big mess. I don't mean to be rude, but it could use a lot of work. First off, the profile thing in the begining, I don't like it too much, it's much better to let the characters speak for themselves through what they say, do, and what is done to them. It seems here that your trying to tell us what the characters are like even before the reader can come there own conclusion, try showing us insead of telling us. Secondly, work on grammar... and please... referain from putting author's notes in the story, it's look sloppy. Otherwise, just a tip, develop your characters, they could be interesting if you do. Do not take this as a flame, it's not, I just think that you have a good idea that needs better execution.
I'm sorry, this is a big mess. I don't mean to be rude, but it could use a lot of work. First off, the profile thing in the begining, I don't like it too much, it's much better to let the characters speak for themselves through what they say, do, and what is done to them. It seems here that your trying to tell us what the characters are like even before the reader can come there own conclusion, try showing us insead of telling us. Secondly, work on grammar... and please... referain from putting author's notes in the story, it's look sloppy. Otherwise, just a tip, develop your characters, they could be interesting if you do. Do not take this as a flame, it's not, I just think that you have a good idea that needs better execution.
8/21/2012 c4 39VeeandreaHart
SILVER! HEY! I WANNA LICK YOUR FACE! WE HAVE OUR PHONES? THATS ROCKING! HEY, I NEED TO TELL YOU SOMETHING OF MUCH IMPORTANCE! I have grape juice, but that's not what I wanted to say. I wanted to say THIS THE GREATEST **ING SHORT CHAPTER I'VE EVUH READ! you know...it kinda makes meh want to lick your face...
39VeeandreaHartSILVER! HEY! I WANNA LICK YOUR FACE! WE HAVE OUR PHONES? THATS ROCKING! HEY, I NEED TO TELL YOU SOMETHING OF MUCH IMPORTANCE! I have grape juice, but that's not what I wanted to say. I wanted to say THIS THE GREATEST **ING SHORT CHAPTER I'VE EVUH READ! you know...it kinda makes meh want to lick your face...
8/7/2012 c3 Guest
How About You ummm Make them ...I got nothin man this stuff is hard! Sorry :(
How About You ummm Make them ...I got nothin man this stuff is hard! Sorry :(
8/6/2012 c2 Duckychan
Te vad data viitoare? what that mean? Anyways,great chapter plz update again soon thank u's byebye!
Te vad data viitoare? what that mean? Anyways,great chapter plz update again soon thank u's byebye!