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5VampireVampyre
Damn cliffhangers! Ah well, great story and can't wait for the sequel!
Great job, I really enjoyed reading that! :D
5VampireVampyreDamn cliffhangers! Ah well, great story and can't wait for the sequel!
Great job, I really enjoyed reading that! :D
8/27/2012 c14 VampireVampyre
You used the quote! :D
Aha childish arguements, don't you just love 'em? I really wouldn't have wanted to be in Isabella's position there. If it was just Ezio it wouldn't have bothered me because he is quite cool headed but Altiar? I think once he was free he would've ripped my throat out. I haven't got the longest of tempers!
Okay character description, on it!
Name: Up to you
Age: Again up to you.
Appearance: Wavy light brown hair which reaches to just above the shoulders. Deep brown eyes, a long thin nose, quite full lips and a shadow of stubble on his face -usually. He is tall (six foot 2) and broad and overall very masculine.
Personality: Tough, confident (sometimes too confident) and scared of very few things.
You used the quote! :D
Aha childish arguements, don't you just love 'em? I really wouldn't have wanted to be in Isabella's position there. If it was just Ezio it wouldn't have bothered me because he is quite cool headed but Altiar? I think once he was free he would've ripped my throat out. I haven't got the longest of tempers!
Okay character description, on it!
Name: Up to you
Age: Again up to you.
Appearance: Wavy light brown hair which reaches to just above the shoulders. Deep brown eyes, a long thin nose, quite full lips and a shadow of stubble on his face -usually. He is tall (six foot 2) and broad and overall very masculine.
Personality: Tough, confident (sometimes too confident) and scared of very few things.
8/27/2012 c13 VampireVampyre
This chapter was great! The first part actually made me snort out loud with laughter.
The second dream part was really good too, I could imagine it in my head!
Great work!
P.S I'm back from my holiday!
This chapter was great! The first part actually made me snort out loud with laughter.
The second dream part was really good too, I could imagine it in my head!
Great work!
P.S I'm back from my holiday!
8/16/2012 c15 Guest
plz update
plz update
8/16/2012 c15 will zona
This is a awesome epilogue.
This is a awesome epilogue.
8/15/2012 c14 Guest
plz update
plz update
8/15/2012 c14 will zona
This chapter is awesome. Too bad connor isn't in the sequal but if you make a third to this story and when you get to know him better maybe then you'll put him in your stories. It's always my dream to see desmond work together with both his previous ancesters and him. Keep up the amazing work.
This chapter is awesome. Too bad connor isn't in the sequal but if you make a third to this story and when you get to know him better maybe then you'll put him in your stories. It's always my dream to see desmond work together with both his previous ancesters and him. Keep up the amazing work.
8/14/2012 c1 what
Lol what would happen if the Eden made a little girl that ran around hugging random people lol
Lol what would happen if the Eden made a little girl that ran around hugging random people lol
8/12/2012 c13 will zona
oh, i almost forgot,about the sequel, will connor kenway(another ancestor of desmond)be another character in your next story?
oh, i almost forgot,about the sequel, will connor kenway(another ancestor of desmond)be another character in your next story?
8/12/2012 c13 will zona
this chapter was super awesome. as for shaun,make his reaction "oh my god, how the bloody hell this happened!? do you know what to the timeline if those two aren't in their own time periods!?" keep up the amazing work.
this chapter was super awesome. as for shaun,make his reaction "oh my god, how the bloody hell this happened!? do you know what to the timeline if those two aren't in their own time periods!?" keep up the amazing work.
8/2/2012 c12 Guest
plz update
plz update
8/2/2012 c12 will zona
This chapter is awesome. Keep up the good work.
This chapter is awesome. Keep up the good work.
8/2/2012 c12 VampireVampyre
Haha I would ALWAYS go with the insane options, it makes life more interesting :D
Great work and it is interesting to find out that Isabella has eagle vision but slightly different to her ancestors'
Haha I would ALWAYS go with the insane options, it makes life more interesting :D
Great work and it is interesting to find out that Isabella has eagle vision but slightly different to her ancestors'