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2Javana
This was brilliant! I really hope you continue. And if it would happen to develop into a Scott/Derek novel I certainly wouldn't object. :D
Either way I love your writing style and how well you've managed to capture the characters. I can't wait to find out what happens next.
2JavanaThis was brilliant! I really hope you continue. And if it would happen to develop into a Scott/Derek novel I certainly wouldn't object. :D
Either way I love your writing style and how well you've managed to capture the characters. I can't wait to find out what happens next.
12/9/2012 c6 PeasAndCheese
Read this in one sitting and cut to the chase, I need to know more. I love the concept of Scott as a Shaman and the dynamic between him and Derek intrigues me even more (especially in this chapter. I had myself reeling along with Scott's reaction regarding Derek's scent marking).
Read this in one sitting and cut to the chase, I need to know more. I love the concept of Scott as a Shaman and the dynamic between him and Derek intrigues me even more (especially in this chapter. I had myself reeling along with Scott's reaction regarding Derek's scent marking).
10/5/2012 c6 1Ezroen Aphla
this I a nice story and I like to read more of it soon *puppy-dog eyes* please start uploading as soon as posable *begging and stronger puppy-dog eyes*
1Ezroen Aphlathis I a nice story and I like to read more of it soon *puppy-dog eyes* please start uploading as soon as posable *begging and stronger puppy-dog eyes*
9/26/2012 c6 1
sprinting out the door and almost smashing into Derek.
"You left without me."
Scott felt his body slam against the brick of the clinic wall and groaned. "I forgot okay!
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how/why did scott slam against the brick of the clinic wall- if derek slammed him into it you didn't say- did he slam himself against it?
regardless it would have been better if maybe he ran straight into derek's strong, broad, warm, solid, well muscled body- especially after you had the vet talk about derek scenting scott's clothes and that's keeping those interested in mating with him away. derek would have to wrap his strong, muscular arms around scott to keep him from bouncing off of derek and falling down or smashing into the wall- then you could have scott kinda like how it felt to be embraced by derek- and you could have started the beginnings of scott becoming interested in derek in 'other' ways
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i enjoy your story telling- you keep the story entertaining and interesting- the characters are pretty true to the tv show- your stiles annoys me and your scott makes me want to slap him and tell him to grow up- but that's how i react to them on the tv show- so you're just being true to canon_ and my being annoyed by the characters has nothing to do with your ability to tell a good story and doesn't mean i don't enjoy it.
thanks for sharing with us
sprinting out the door and almost smashing into Derek.
"You left without me."
Scott felt his body slam against the brick of the clinic wall and groaned. "I forgot okay!
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how/why did scott slam against the brick of the clinic wall- if derek slammed him into it you didn't say- did he slam himself against it?
regardless it would have been better if maybe he ran straight into derek's strong, broad, warm, solid, well muscled body- especially after you had the vet talk about derek scenting scott's clothes and that's keeping those interested in mating with him away. derek would have to wrap his strong, muscular arms around scott to keep him from bouncing off of derek and falling down or smashing into the wall- then you could have scott kinda like how it felt to be embraced by derek- and you could have started the beginnings of scott becoming interested in derek in 'other' ways
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i enjoy your story telling- you keep the story entertaining and interesting- the characters are pretty true to the tv show- your stiles annoys me and your scott makes me want to slap him and tell him to grow up- but that's how i react to them on the tv show- so you're just being true to canon_ and my being annoyed by the characters has nothing to do with your ability to tell a good story and doesn't mean i don't enjoy it.
thanks for sharing with us
9/26/2012 c5 1
"You can't be in the room." Derek shot him a warning glance. "I can't concentrate when you're glaring at me."
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and when scott needs to focus/concentrate to access his shaman powers he'll just ask the enemies for a time out cause he can't concentrate while they're trying to kill him or his friends
so derek is making finances easier on his mom so maybe she won't have to work herself to death. he's protecting the family better than ever now that he lives there. he cooked a good breakfast for all of them.. and scott still ** and moans and slams a door cause his clothes smell like derek- he must realize by now that he is not a regular kid anymore and he never will be again- and to expect the freedoms and no responsibility like other 16 year old kids makes him a stupid werewolf and a stupider shaman- he can't give it back and he doesn't seem to want to accept it- then he should kill himself and all his problems will be over- and his mother would also be safer with him gone as well-
"You can't be in the room." Derek shot him a warning glance. "I can't concentrate when you're glaring at me."
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and when scott needs to focus/concentrate to access his shaman powers he'll just ask the enemies for a time out cause he can't concentrate while they're trying to kill him or his friends
so derek is making finances easier on his mom so maybe she won't have to work herself to death. he's protecting the family better than ever now that he lives there. he cooked a good breakfast for all of them.. and scott still ** and moans and slams a door cause his clothes smell like derek- he must realize by now that he is not a regular kid anymore and he never will be again- and to expect the freedoms and no responsibility like other 16 year old kids makes him a stupid werewolf and a stupider shaman- he can't give it back and he doesn't seem to want to accept it- then he should kill himself and all his problems will be over- and his mother would also be safer with him gone as well-
9/26/2012 c4 1
Stiles waved his arms in obvious frustration. "You so owe me an explanation!"
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what makes stiles think he's 'owed' an explanation? you did a good job of making your stiles as obnoxious and irritating as the tv show stiles
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why doesn't scott think his mother would check whether or not derek really works at the school or not- she would be stupid not to- especially if she thinks scott would offer the room to someone who used drugs- since she asked him the question she must assume he would
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"What was I supposed to do? I thought you were dead and I didn't know who Peter was?"
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he/they didn't have to name derek absolutely and definitely the killer- they could have said they didn't know who the killer was_derek risked his life protecting scott and scott didn't think twice about letting everybody believe that derek was a serial killer_making the world believe a brave and honorable man who had suffered so much loss so young in life was a serial killer was a ** thing to do- if scott had died would he be okay with them blaming the murders on him?
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"I'm the sole beneficiary of the Hale line. Money isn't the problem, arrest warrants are."
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with warrants out for him his accounts would be monitored at the least and probably frozen- so how does he have accesss to his estate- he'd have to be sitting on a butt load of cash
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it's too bad that with scott's new spiritual ascension he doesn't behave any better than a 16 year old punk in regards to his attitude. so what if his clothes smell like derek- it's not like regular people should notice and he knows it's for his and his mother's protection- so why the ** and moaning about it.
Stiles waved his arms in obvious frustration. "You so owe me an explanation!"
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what makes stiles think he's 'owed' an explanation? you did a good job of making your stiles as obnoxious and irritating as the tv show stiles
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why doesn't scott think his mother would check whether or not derek really works at the school or not- she would be stupid not to- especially if she thinks scott would offer the room to someone who used drugs- since she asked him the question she must assume he would
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"What was I supposed to do? I thought you were dead and I didn't know who Peter was?"
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he/they didn't have to name derek absolutely and definitely the killer- they could have said they didn't know who the killer was_derek risked his life protecting scott and scott didn't think twice about letting everybody believe that derek was a serial killer_making the world believe a brave and honorable man who had suffered so much loss so young in life was a serial killer was a ** thing to do- if scott had died would he be okay with them blaming the murders on him?
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"I'm the sole beneficiary of the Hale line. Money isn't the problem, arrest warrants are."
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with warrants out for him his accounts would be monitored at the least and probably frozen- so how does he have accesss to his estate- he'd have to be sitting on a butt load of cash
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it's too bad that with scott's new spiritual ascension he doesn't behave any better than a 16 year old punk in regards to his attitude. so what if his clothes smell like derek- it's not like regular people should notice and he knows it's for his and his mother's protection- so why the ** and moaning about it.
9/25/2012 c2 1
cool idea with the shaman bit- but if scott is so magical and can heal and even bring back those from near death- he should also be able to protect himself with those same powers- if another pack tries to take him he should be able to take their life force just as he is able to give it
cool idea with the shaman bit- but if scott is so magical and can heal and even bring back those from near death- he should also be able to protect himself with those same powers- if another pack tries to take him he should be able to take their life force just as he is able to give it
9/23/2012 c6 anon
i love this story please update asap
i love this story please update asap
8/22/2012 c6 4quoththeraven5
This was fantastic! :) So happy Scott is getting better at focusing and I love love love the Derek/Scott bonding! :)
4quoththeraven5This was fantastic! :) So happy Scott is getting better at focusing and I love love love the Derek/Scott bonding! :)
8/22/2012 c6 story lover
U did great on this one hope u update soon
U did great on this one hope u update soon
8/22/2012 c6 41The Forever Young One
Becoming interesting. x3 I wonder what will happen next...
Update soon?
-Young
41The Forever Young OneBecoming interesting. x3 I wonder what will happen next...
Update soon?
-Young