for Busy: Out to get Rory5/3/2005 c8 Angelica
please finish this story..i want to know how it ends
please finish this story..i want to know how it ends
3/3/2005 c1 anon
It's an ok story. It could be better if Rory was somewhat in character. Here, she's not. Sleeping with a random person and wearing leather are completely uncharacteristic of the Rory Gilmore that we all know and love. Even in these later seasons, she's less innocent but still is quintisentially Rory. I think that you lost her here.
It's an ok story. It could be better if Rory was somewhat in character. Here, she's not. Sleeping with a random person and wearing leather are completely uncharacteristic of the Rory Gilmore that we all know and love. Even in these later seasons, she's less innocent but still is quintisentially Rory. I think that you lost her here.
12/22/2004 c8 iluvlilninjai
I love this story! you need to add some more chapters! or i will get board!
I love this story! you need to add some more chapters! or i will get board!
10/16/2003 c8 frackandbonechick2
o u lil witch, please finish this story, its fantastic... PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE FINISH THIS STORY!
Cheers
Michelle
o u lil witch, please finish this story, its fantastic... PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE FINISH THIS STORY!
Cheers
Michelle
4/20/2003 c8 katie
can u pleasecontinue this story
can u pleasecontinue this story
3/24/2003 c8 Nikki
Hey! This is very good, but why havent u written in a while? Are you busy? Because I understand, I have been the same way recently! So keep it up and I hope to read more soon!
Hey! This is very good, but why havent u written in a while? Are you busy? Because I understand, I have been the same way recently! So keep it up and I hope to read more soon!
12/25/2002 c8 
27Angel Monroe
I just read this whole story, and it's pretty good. Some of the language is a little less descriptive than I would have liked, like when Rory was telling Tritan about the rape. It would have been a lot better if you'd added a little more action description, ie fidgetting, looking out the window, down at her hands, Rory crying into Tristan's shoulder, stuff like that. Anyway, I'm really looking forward to your next chapter. Please update soon. O:)
27Angel MonroeI just read this whole story, and it's pretty good. Some of the language is a little less descriptive than I would have liked, like when Rory was telling Tritan about the rape. It would have been a lot better if you'd added a little more action description, ie fidgetting, looking out the window, down at her hands, Rory crying into Tristan's shoulder, stuff like that. Anyway, I'm really looking forward to your next chapter. Please update soon. O:)
12/18/2002 c8 pandapearl
lorelai is completely justified in her reaction. rory, well, i can picture her rash indignance, but tristan should have been more understanding of a mother's concern.
and Lorelai being upset that Rory didn't tell her she was moving in with a guy she (Lorelai) doesn't know is not a "small thing." Rory's only 21. Lorelai should still at least know where her daughter is living.
lorelai is completely justified in her reaction. rory, well, i can picture her rash indignance, but tristan should have been more understanding of a mother's concern.
and Lorelai being upset that Rory didn't tell her she was moving in with a guy she (Lorelai) doesn't know is not a "small thing." Rory's only 21. Lorelai should still at least know where her daughter is living.
12/18/2002 c7 pandapearl
funny chapter. oh, it's been so long without lorelai in the picture, but it's better now. however, her dialogue is really off, but hey, it's really hard to write for lorelai.
funny chapter. oh, it's been so long without lorelai in the picture, but it's better now. however, her dialogue is really off, but hey, it's really hard to write for lorelai.