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12/2/2002 c7 17klm111a
don't stop now! Continue, continue! :) i love it...and i'm glad Rory's back to her self!
12/2/2002 c7 3Trory4ever
wow! this story is getting really good. i love it. please continue. keep up the great work.

michelle
12/2/2002 c7 CraziEe 4 Trory
Great chapter! Pls. continue...Tristan and Rory need to get together..LOL ok just a suggestion.
12/2/2002 c7 Sarah V
Wow Lorelai does not know they live together wow! can't wait for the next amazing chapter.
12/2/2002 c7 mandie
ooh more soon! :)

i never thought u'd update!
12/2/2002 c7 sara
very good fic! more soon!
12/2/2002 c7 Guest
very different- I like it! Keep up the good work, please!
12/2/2002 c7 Carrie28
I love it! This is a really good stiry, I would have never thought of this idea! Keep it coming and Update soon please!
11/8/2002 c6 1amgonyea
wow, nice twist. I was kinda wondering what the hell was up with the new 'bad **, lets screw any guy' thing :)

keep going... great job
11/6/2002 c6 lunaticbabe
Liked this progression very much. Especially how she didn't just wake up and *ping* decides to tell all. And Tristan being the best man is a good turn. Looking forward to the next bit.

Cheers,

Anna
11/6/2002 c6 Samantha
I liked it. If you need anymore ideas just email me or leave another frantic author note. LOL
11/5/2002 c5 Alex
Well i know how it feels to be stuck, maybe you can make Rory stop being with guys so much You can make a chapter were Rory and Tristan are drunk or something in new years e've and they make a pact to be single at least for 4 months or something and in that time they can realise the feelings they have for each other and become a couple or something just continue please.
11/5/2002 c5 Samantha
YOu need to get Rory to open up to Tristan. Therefore they become closer ...form a relationship...fall in love (or atleast admit it to eachother) and Rory needs to get over this...She needs tristan to help realize that just because some jerk did that to her doesn't mean she is any less of the person she used to be. He needs to remind her of who she was and help her heal...(thats just where I would go with it)
11/2/2002 c4 Sarah V
PLEASE I BEG YOU CONTINUE YOUR STORY ! Rape is a really sad thing and most people don't write about it. But it's good that you write about it because it can say how people can get threw it, so please continue.
7/27/2002 c4 Ashlee
this is great! can't wait to read the next chapter! umm but to tell u the truth...I don't like the "new" Rory! it makes her seem like a **!
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