for The Porcelain Angel7/13/2008 c1 
19Blood of the Dawn
this is an amazing story, are you a real writer? like professionally?
19Blood of the Dawnthis is an amazing story, are you a real writer? like professionally?
9/12/2007 c1 Your Fan Forever
This story is the most soul touching that I have ever read.
Thank You for all of your hard work in making this such a masterpiece. From the bottom of my heart I am your greatest fan. TAKARI WHO!
This story is the most soul touching that I have ever read.
Thank You for all of your hard work in making this such a masterpiece. From the bottom of my heart I am your greatest fan. TAKARI WHO!
10/21/2003 c1 30AkaOkamiRyu
I've read this many a time already, why I have never reviewed it i cannot say, but for some time it has been a favorite that I constantly return to when nothing of worth is available. I find myself inclined to ask, as it sounds rather interesting, be it true, the poem in the story, is it a real poem? ANd if it is, may I ask the title and author? I'm a poet and a reader myself, and should it be real I would rather love to read it.
If it I'd appreciate it if you could take the time to email it to me.
30AkaOkamiRyuI've read this many a time already, why I have never reviewed it i cannot say, but for some time it has been a favorite that I constantly return to when nothing of worth is available. I find myself inclined to ask, as it sounds rather interesting, be it true, the poem in the story, is it a real poem? ANd if it is, may I ask the title and author? I'm a poet and a reader myself, and should it be real I would rather love to read it.
If it I'd appreciate it if you could take the time to email it to me.
11/22/2002 c1 6Dark-Paladin-Duelist
nice fic,could you write a fic,with that doll in it but Kari has been switched with the doll,her body would be lifeless,but the angel doll would be Kari,please think about it,email me at ,I'd be funny to read that
6Dark-Paladin-Duelistnice fic,could you write a fic,with that doll in it but Kari has been switched with the doll,her body would be lifeless,but the angel doll would be Kari,please think about it,email me at ,I'd be funny to read that
9/17/2002 c1 2Says TB
omg i swear u shouldda receive alott more reviews than this. this story was terrific! erm...except the endin was kinda rushed but u did warn everyone =) i really enjoyed it alot. u have such a way with words. =D keep writing!
2Says TBomg i swear u shouldda receive alott more reviews than this. this story was terrific! erm...except the endin was kinda rushed but u did warn everyone =) i really enjoyed it alot. u have such a way with words. =D keep writing!
8/13/2002 c1 Shadow Katana not logged in
Wow... I'm utterly speechless... This is a beautiful peice of work, Raven. I've read most of your stories, and reading this only served to make me a more whole-hearted fan of yours. You know just the words and the feelings to put into a piece of work in less words than even accomplished authors could. There's no words to describe this, yet there's so many...
SK's rating: A well-earned 10/10
Wow... I'm utterly speechless... This is a beautiful peice of work, Raven. I've read most of your stories, and reading this only served to make me a more whole-hearted fan of yours. You know just the words and the feelings to put into a piece of work in less words than even accomplished authors could. There's no words to describe this, yet there's so many...
SK's rating: A well-earned 10/10
8/11/2002 c1 Sasayaku
Ooooh, very heart warming and WAFFy. Well done and well written.
Ooooh, very heart warming and WAFFy. Well done and well written.
8/6/2002 c1 untitled
Wow, that was amazing, touching and descriptive. Definetly not one of the many shallow, substance lacking Takari's that seem to populate FF.net.
Wow, that was amazing, touching and descriptive. Definetly not one of the many shallow, substance lacking Takari's that seem to populate FF.net.
7/22/2002 c1 takari fan
amazing fic, you should write more takari. the vocabulary usage and spelling were great. excellent descriptions although the plot was kind of weird it was still an appropriate one for this story.
amazing fic, you should write more takari. the vocabulary usage and spelling were great. excellent descriptions although the plot was kind of weird it was still an appropriate one for this story.
7/21/2002 c1 Digikittyo123
That was a beautiful story.I loved it.I have read tons of romance stories but this is the best one I have ever read.I always did like TK/Kari ones.U should write more stories like this.I would definetely read them.U are a great author,U know that?
That was a beautiful story.I loved it.I have read tons of romance stories but this is the best one I have ever read.I always did like TK/Kari ones.U should write more stories like this.I would definetely read them.U are a great author,U know that?
7/21/2002 c1 5TogetherAgain
now, there's a heart warming fic! Very well written with the perfect amount of detail! I loved it! ttfn
5TogetherAgainnow, there's a heart warming fic! Very well written with the perfect amount of detail! I loved it! ttfn
7/21/2002 c1 Cracker
My GOD, this is incredible! This has to be the greatest story that I've read on ff.net, and I'm not exaggerating. I have never written anything else like this in a review, but I thought that yours was excpetional. Your character descriptions are uncanny and your use of the many literary terms incorporated are masterful! The dialogue is fresh and not a single cliché was noted. Your diction/word choice is very impressive and one that I don't see too often; like reading a published novel. I'm also quite impressed by the little notations of the famous few you've added (Freud, di Vinci), it made me...smile :) Cultural, complete, and common sense. It embellished a normally mundane type sentence.
I could go on, but then you'd have to actually use your browser to read the rest. Rest assure, this is an absolutely wonderful story. Keep writing, you have aquired a new fan :D
~Cracker
My GOD, this is incredible! This has to be the greatest story that I've read on ff.net, and I'm not exaggerating. I have never written anything else like this in a review, but I thought that yours was excpetional. Your character descriptions are uncanny and your use of the many literary terms incorporated are masterful! The dialogue is fresh and not a single cliché was noted. Your diction/word choice is very impressive and one that I don't see too often; like reading a published novel. I'm also quite impressed by the little notations of the famous few you've added (Freud, di Vinci), it made me...smile :) Cultural, complete, and common sense. It embellished a normally mundane type sentence.
I could go on, but then you'd have to actually use your browser to read the rest. Rest assure, this is an absolutely wonderful story. Keep writing, you have aquired a new fan :D
~Cracker