for Strange Comfort7/22/2005 c1 Kimberly Dykes
That was an awesome Fan Fiction! I would absolutely love to read the next one!
That was an awesome Fan Fiction! I would absolutely love to read the next one!
2/8/2001 c4
8Setsunna
::Chin wobbles:: You cant just end it there! What did ChiChi do? Say? WHAT HAPPENED? And what the heck happened to Bulma's parents? They cant be on vacation for THAT long...can they?
8Setsunna::Chin wobbles:: You cant just end it there! What did ChiChi do? Say? WHAT HAPPENED? And what the heck happened to Bulma's parents? They cant be on vacation for THAT long...can they?
2/8/2001 c2 auroraangel2
Konnichi'wa! You know what? I was going to jsut keep readin w/out reviwing, but when I read it was your first fanfic, I just HAD to praise you! This is AMAZING work for a first fanfic, and you are an amazingly talented author! Witty, angst, emotion floods this fanfic so wonderfully! You're doing truly significant work, which I feel cannot be left unpraised. You are truly TALENTED writer, keep writing! You have lots of potential and I admire you already! Lots of luv, ~AuroraA~ ~~~~~~~^~~~~~~~@ it's a rose from my Mamo-chan! But hands off! He's MINE! And so is oh-so-Trunks, and Goku, and Vegeta, but not Yamcha! The cowardous weakling who is UGLY! Yah, dat's write baby! Make sure you get my Vegeta ta kill him, wil ya? I love the cool demenor you've given Vegeta, and what is his plan? What IS his plan? Hehehe... Ok, seriously - I WILL say buhbye now. Right... right! BuhbYe... NOT! Muahahahahah... ahahahahah... *sweatdrops* I am soooo sad. I will SERIOUSLY stop now. Vegeta-san is getting ** off at me and is cocking an eyebrow at me in annoyance... BuhBye!
Konnichi'wa! You know what? I was going to jsut keep readin w/out reviwing, but when I read it was your first fanfic, I just HAD to praise you! This is AMAZING work for a first fanfic, and you are an amazingly talented author! Witty, angst, emotion floods this fanfic so wonderfully! You're doing truly significant work, which I feel cannot be left unpraised. You are truly TALENTED writer, keep writing! You have lots of potential and I admire you already! Lots of luv, ~AuroraA~ ~~~~~~~^~~~~~~~@ it's a rose from my Mamo-chan! But hands off! He's MINE! And so is oh-so-Trunks, and Goku, and Vegeta, but not Yamcha! The cowardous weakling who is UGLY! Yah, dat's write baby! Make sure you get my Vegeta ta kill him, wil ya? I love the cool demenor you've given Vegeta, and what is his plan? What IS his plan? Hehehe... Ok, seriously - I WILL say buhbye now. Right... right! BuhbYe... NOT! Muahahahahah... ahahahahah... *sweatdrops* I am soooo sad. I will SERIOUSLY stop now. Vegeta-san is getting ** off at me and is cocking an eyebrow at me in annoyance... BuhBye!
1/1/2001 c1 Kichi
i read this before and i'm probably reviewing it again, but i gotta ask, is Mrs. Briefs name really Bunny? i thought it was Bra.
i read this before and i'm probably reviewing it again, but i gotta ask, is Mrs. Briefs name really Bunny? i thought it was Bra.
12/23/2000 c1 The Prime Minister
Heh heh. I'm glad you wrote the next part. You have some interesting ideas.
Heh heh. I'm glad you wrote the next part. You have some interesting ideas.
12/23/2000 c1 The Prime Minister
It's still a good idea. I hope you finish it, if you haven't already (I am currently ignorant on this issue).
It's still a good idea. I hope you finish it, if you haven't already (I am currently ignorant on this issue).
12/23/2000 c1 The Prime Minister
This is very dark. I noticed that in the midst of it you tried to lighten it up- while that's fine, don't be afraid to write an entire piece that is dark. I think you have the consistency in your writing to pull it off.
This is very dark. I noticed that in the midst of it you tried to lighten it up- while that's fine, don't be afraid to write an entire piece that is dark. I think you have the consistency in your writing to pull it off.
12/23/2000 c1 The Prime Minister
Very interesting take on Bulma's life. Not your run-of-the mill character-analyzation story. Keep up the originality!
Very interesting take on Bulma's life. Not your run-of-the mill character-analyzation story. Keep up the originality!
