for Destiny's Child3/9/2012 c21 justjoe
This crew is seriously incompetent. The number of lapses in protocol is unacceptable. It really hurts the story, which is otherwise well done though there are several grammar errors.
This crew is seriously incompetent. The number of lapses in protocol is unacceptable. It really hurts the story, which is otherwise well done though there are several grammar errors.
12/7/2011 c21 orionastro
well, what an amazing story. just hope you update this very good story as soon as you can . :)
well, what an amazing story. just hope you update this very good story as soon as you can . :)
8/11/2011 c21 
68Firewolfe
Any chance of getting an update. I really enjoy this fic and would love to see more someday soon.
Fire
68FirewolfeAny chance of getting an update. I really enjoy this fic and would love to see more someday soon.
Fire
7/30/2010 c3 alokin
"even the Humans ... "
What ? The Tollan dont consider themselves humans or what ?
"even the Humans ... "
What ? The Tollan dont consider themselves humans or what ?
5/7/2010 c16 alokin
Now ... what are the chances of the Rapier running into Goauld that can capture them ...
I can just roll my eyes at this plot line ...
Now ... what are the chances of the Rapier running into Goauld that can capture them ...
I can just roll my eyes at this plot line ...
2/6/2010 c21 1locutes
great story, though I want it to get finished :) It's just to goo not to finish it! please do so, I beg thee.
1locutesgreat story, though I want it to get finished :) It's just to goo not to finish it! please do so, I beg thee.
10/31/2009 c21 23Guardian54
Why don't you ffinish this?
It's really good. (in the same way that the Pacific is a small puddle, ie massive understatement)
23Guardian54Why don't you ffinish this?
It's really good. (in the same way that the Pacific is a small puddle, ie massive understatement)
8/16/2009 c21 6Sharnorasian Empire
THis story is beautiful, B E A utiful... plz update plz plz plz plz plz
SE
6Sharnorasian EmpireTHis story is beautiful, B E A utiful... plz update plz plz plz plz plz
SE
8/4/2009 c2 2Red Death
I *know* you meant "doused" as in "extinguished" but this caused what was likely the biggest gigglefit I'll admit to having for quite some time"
"douched the three burning consoles"
Thats a VERY different definition that "doused." (gigglesnickerchortle)
All kidding aside, this and your other works have some serious "wrongword" problems. Words that SOUND right, but aren't. For example:
Were/we're. They're/there/their. Passed/past. Leek/leak. There are many more.
The problem is that the words you're using have vastly different meanings that you intended. A "leak" is, well, a leak. Like a faucet. A "leek" is a vegetable.
Not fatal to a fic in and of itself, but they really make a reader stop and ask themselves: "Did I really just read what I thought I did?"
Could use a cleanup.
2Red DeathI *know* you meant "doused" as in "extinguished" but this caused what was likely the biggest gigglefit I'll admit to having for quite some time"
"douched the three burning consoles"
Thats a VERY different definition that "doused." (gigglesnickerchortle)
All kidding aside, this and your other works have some serious "wrongword" problems. Words that SOUND right, but aren't. For example:
Were/we're. They're/there/their. Passed/past. Leek/leak. There are many more.
The problem is that the words you're using have vastly different meanings that you intended. A "leak" is, well, a leak. Like a faucet. A "leek" is a vegetable.
Not fatal to a fic in and of itself, but they really make a reader stop and ask themselves: "Did I really just read what I thought I did?"
Could use a cleanup.
7/13/2009 c8 1The Lord Marbury
I don't know what tto think because I've always gotten the feeling that weapons and shields in the stargate universe was j
more powerful than the ones in the star trek universe. Especially when you compare the shields. Good work though.
1The Lord MarburyI don't know what tto think because I've always gotten the feeling that weapons and shields in the stargate universe was j
more powerful than the ones in the star trek universe. Especially when you compare the shields. Good work though.
1/30/2009 c15 ljbrown1
What are these idiots doing? They could have escaped at warp or impulse. They are much faster.
Please continue with your story.
What are these idiots doing? They could have escaped at warp or impulse. They are much faster.
Please continue with your story.
11/6/2008 c1 J.GRENCIK
GOOD STORY.BUT ONE LITTLE QUESTION.O'NEILL AND CARTE AND JACKSON HAVE ALL MADE DIRECT "STAR TREK " REFERANCES OVER THE YEARS.THEY WOULD HAVE BEEN PRETTY FAMILIAR WITH THE SHOW .I KNOW THIS IS A LITTLE PETTY BUT HOW COMW THEY DID NOT RECOGNISE THE SAOVIERN CLASS SHIP.THE DESIGN WOULD HAVE BEEN VERY FAMILIAR TO THEM .I UNDERSTAND STORY CONSISTANCY AND ALL BUT IT WAS KIND OF A GLAREING OMISSION.
GOOD STORY.BUT ONE LITTLE QUESTION.O'NEILL AND CARTE AND JACKSON HAVE ALL MADE DIRECT "STAR TREK " REFERANCES OVER THE YEARS.THEY WOULD HAVE BEEN PRETTY FAMILIAR WITH THE SHOW .I KNOW THIS IS A LITTLE PETTY BUT HOW COMW THEY DID NOT RECOGNISE THE SAOVIERN CLASS SHIP.THE DESIGN WOULD HAVE BEEN VERY FAMILIAR TO THEM .I UNDERSTAND STORY CONSISTANCY AND ALL BUT IT WAS KIND OF A GLAREING OMISSION.