for Destiny's Child8/11/2002 c3 
4Morrolan
This is really good, can't wait to see what happens next, and Its much easier to read than before.
4MorrolanThis is really good, can't wait to see what happens next, and Its much easier to read than before.
8/11/2002 c3 17TD Master
I love it. Great plot so far, love the characters, can't wait for the next part. For example, when (it should be soon, astrometric sensors/stars espansion and all) will the Resolution crew find out they're not just in an alternate universe but also 375 odd years in the past.
And I really wanna see Earth's reaction, mainly, if the Human crew do decide to go 'home' so to speak, the changes on Earth are going to be as big as the first contact with the Vulcans was in the Star Trek Universe. And Jack's, Daniel's and the rest's reaction I've got high hopes for. Keep writing! Update this story soon!
17TD MasterI love it. Great plot so far, love the characters, can't wait for the next part. For example, when (it should be soon, astrometric sensors/stars espansion and all) will the Resolution crew find out they're not just in an alternate universe but also 375 odd years in the past.
And I really wanna see Earth's reaction, mainly, if the Human crew do decide to go 'home' so to speak, the changes on Earth are going to be as big as the first contact with the Vulcans was in the Star Trek Universe. And Jack's, Daniel's and the rest's reaction I've got high hopes for. Keep writing! Update this story soon!
8/8/2002 c3 BC1
Dear andrewjameswilliams,
I love the Startrek story Destiny's Child. It sounds really interesting. I can't wait for next chapter to come out. It is getting really good!
I can't wait for SG-1 to come into the plot line. I can't wait to see the reactions.
Your number one fan,
BC
Dear andrewjameswilliams,
I love the Startrek story Destiny's Child. It sounds really interesting. I can't wait for next chapter to come out. It is getting really good!
I can't wait for SG-1 to come into the plot line. I can't wait to see the reactions.
Your number one fan,
BC
8/8/2002 c3 Arthorius
Oh this is going to be interesting. Looking forward to seeing more of this. Keep writing.
Oh this is going to be interesting. Looking forward to seeing more of this. Keep writing.
8/8/2002 c3 5captuniv
Oh yeah, kicking the Goa'uld butts. Gotta love it. This is going very well and I'm glad to see the paragraph problem corrected. It makes the story much easier to read and enjoy. The plotline is advancing well and you've really sucked me into the story. Keep going, can't wait to see where this is going.
5captunivOh yeah, kicking the Goa'uld butts. Gotta love it. This is going very well and I'm glad to see the paragraph problem corrected. It makes the story much easier to read and enjoy. The plotline is advancing well and you've really sucked me into the story. Keep going, can't wait to see where this is going.
8/7/2002 c2 BC1
Dear andrewjameswilliams,
I love the Startrek story Destiny's Child. It sounds really interesting. I can't wait for next chapter to come out.
Your number one fan,
BC
Dear andrewjameswilliams,
I love the Startrek story Destiny's Child. It sounds really interesting. I can't wait for next chapter to come out.
Your number one fan,
BC
8/5/2002 c2 CyberAngelOne
Don't know what to think about just yet though the formating could be change it is kind of hard to read when the are no indentions. I hope that there will be some real action in the next chapter.
Don't know what to think about just yet though the formating could be change it is kind of hard to read when the are no indentions. I hope that there will be some real action in the next chapter.
8/5/2002 c2 4Morrolan
This is really good, but a bit hard to read because you have all the text kind of running toghether. But otherwise I like it.
4MorrolanThis is really good, but a bit hard to read because you have all the text kind of running toghether. But otherwise I like it.
8/5/2002 c2 5captuniv
Very interesting start here. Interesting original Star Trek characters and ship. Like how they will be responding to the Goa'uld attack on Tollana.
Kinda hard to read though with the paragraph spacing that you're using. Might want to break it up with each characters lines and such.
Keep writing, want to see where this goes and when SG-1 will enter the picture. Can't wait for Jack's reaction to the Federation and Sam's to the technology. Gotta wonder if the Prime Directive covers giving high tech to Earth's other universe counterparts.
5captunivVery interesting start here. Interesting original Star Trek characters and ship. Like how they will be responding to the Goa'uld attack on Tollana.
Kinda hard to read though with the paragraph spacing that you're using. Might want to break it up with each characters lines and such.
Keep writing, want to see where this goes and when SG-1 will enter the picture. Can't wait for Jack's reaction to the Federation and Sam's to the technology. Gotta wonder if the Prime Directive covers giving high tech to Earth's other universe counterparts.
8/5/2002 c2 4Xanders Gaurdian Angel
God start try to space out your paragraphs as i have found it hard to read the text as one large block.
Love the idea about planets not being were they are supposed to be
4Xanders Gaurdian AngelGod start try to space out your paragraphs as i have found it hard to read the text as one large block.
Love the idea about planets not being were they are supposed to be