for O Brother, Where Art Thou?6/9/2003 c8 
4mystlady
This is very bittersweet story... I cant believe it ended. I don't personally think the ending was but... But at least, it wasn't heartwrenching!
4mystladyThis is very bittersweet story... I cant believe it ended. I don't personally think the ending was but... But at least, it wasn't heartwrenching!
1/30/2003 c3 GC
I think this story would be better if it wasn't so confusing. You have okay dialogue, but the action is hard to follow, like you're skipping around too much. I have to read the same line several times to understand what's going on.
I think this story would be better if it wasn't so confusing. You have okay dialogue, but the action is hard to follow, like you're skipping around too much. I have to read the same line several times to understand what's going on.
1/18/2003 c6 4Chibi Makoto
Whoa, interesting chapter. ^^ So what happened to Jupiter, Venus, and Mars? x_X; Are they really gone now? They have to come back somehow! ;~; Is Akiko going to die or something? oO; Meep! Well please write more soon! ^^ This is getting really interesting.
4Chibi MakotoWhoa, interesting chapter. ^^ So what happened to Jupiter, Venus, and Mars? x_X; Are they really gone now? They have to come back somehow! ;~; Is Akiko going to die or something? oO; Meep! Well please write more soon! ^^ This is getting really interesting.
12/31/2002 c6 JPandS not signed in
That was great please update soon
That was great please update soon
12/30/2002 c5 4mystlady
This awesome. I liked the action pack. Dont keep us hanging. Mako/Duo, Mako/Heero works for me ^_~
4mystladyThis awesome. I liked the action pack. Dont keep us hanging. Mako/Duo, Mako/Heero works for me ^_~
12/30/2002 c5 JPandS not signed in
That was a great chapter! I LOVED IT! Please update soon and good job. ^^ Bye.
That was a great chapter! I LOVED IT! Please update soon and good job. ^^ Bye.
12/30/2002 c5 6mako-chan-fan
hi... jes wanna ask if i can post yer fic in my site? well... actually, i'm letting you know that i ALREADY put it in my site... hehehe...
6mako-chan-fanhi... jes wanna ask if i can post yer fic in my site? well... actually, i'm letting you know that i ALREADY put it in my site... hehehe...
12/28/2002 c4 Sarien aka Sailor Emerald
Very nice story! The part with the puppy was cute. Do I sense a love triangle? I'm confused about this hunter fellow. Who is he and who are the others? I get confused very easily. Sorry. I guess you just have to get the next chappie out sooner so I can understand, eh?
Very nice story! The part with the puppy was cute. Do I sense a love triangle? I'm confused about this hunter fellow. Who is he and who are the others? I get confused very easily. Sorry. I guess you just have to get the next chappie out sooner so I can understand, eh?
12/28/2002 c4 18JPandS
That was GREAT! I loved it! I'm really liking this fic. Please update soon and good job. =) Well bye now. ^^
18JPandSThat was GREAT! I loved it! I'm really liking this fic. Please update soon and good job. =) Well bye now. ^^
12/28/2002 c4 Guest
noooooooooooooo! i'd rather see makoto with duo!
noooooooooooooo! i'd rather see makoto with duo!
9/10/2002 c1 8AnimeDarkAngel
Hey this is pretty good. baby blu eyes told me you were REALLY good and I think I agree. If you like Makoto based fics I'm soon gonna put one up if you wanna see it. Drop me a line and I'll make sure you see it first ^_~ just cause you'r my little sisters friend.
~Raven
8AnimeDarkAngelHey this is pretty good. baby blu eyes told me you were REALLY good and I think I agree. If you like Makoto based fics I'm soon gonna put one up if you wanna see it. Drop me a line and I'll make sure you see it first ^_~ just cause you'r my little sisters friend.
~Raven
9/9/2002 c4 6Anegel Vitriol Trinton
WHEE!...lol Anywhoo, this..*is* a Mako/Heero fic, right?...RIGHT? Cuz if it isn't, I'll just kill myself..
6Anegel Vitriol TrintonWHEE!...lol Anywhoo, this..*is* a Mako/Heero fic, right?...RIGHT? Cuz if it isn't, I'll just kill myself..