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1CorynNighthawk3078
I'm very much enjoying seeing a more human side of Sandoval. I like how you have them being awkward around each other, not really sure in their relationship, especially since it was antagonistic to begin with. Please update soon. (On knees begging).
Later,
Coryn
1CorynNighthawk3078I'm very much enjoying seeing a more human side of Sandoval. I like how you have them being awkward around each other, not really sure in their relationship, especially since it was antagonistic to begin with. Please update soon. (On knees begging).
Later,
Coryn
2/25/2012 c6 FireEMSjunkie
This story is so wonderful! Please update it! Its been a few years, but I still love it just as much as when you started posting it. This really deserves to be completed. Please update - Liam needs to learn how to get in touch with his inner Kimera. :)
This story is so wonderful! Please update it! Its been a few years, but I still love it just as much as when you started posting it. This really deserves to be completed. Please update - Liam needs to learn how to get in touch with his inner Kimera. :)
12/26/2011 c6 Amareina
Beautifully written story. I would love to see this story contiunue. The character dynamics are phenomenal. By far one of the best stories I've read in ages. You have a true gift.
Beautifully written story. I would love to see this story contiunue. The character dynamics are phenomenal. By far one of the best stories I've read in ages. You have a true gift.
5/22/2011 c6 1NexIncendius
It saddens me that this hasn't been updated in so long, its my favourite fanfiction series for EFC
1NexIncendiusIt saddens me that this hasn't been updated in so long, its my favourite fanfiction series for EFC
5/14/2011 c6 1snow6835
Please update this! I love the dynamics of Liam and Sandoval's relationship that you're building. Definitely still one of the best EFC stories out there!
1snow6835Please update this! I love the dynamics of Liam and Sandoval's relationship that you're building. Definitely still one of the best EFC stories out there!
10/23/2010 c6 Shoshana Rose
I've reviewed before, but I recently reread this story and felt the need to review again. This is an awesome series, Tag! Your chapters are detailed and well paced, the emotions you portray in your characters (and those you evoke in your your readers) are intense, and you have a good sense of how to write action. You've left this story and this series at such a cliffhanger that I truly hope you'll revisit and continue to work on this. I can't wait to see what happens in Sandoval and Liam's relationship, how Sandoval's knowledge and Liam's new job affect his daily life as a companion protector and resistance member, and what will happen with the shadowy foe you keep hinting about. Please continue this story!
Best,
Shoshi
I've reviewed before, but I recently reread this story and felt the need to review again. This is an awesome series, Tag! Your chapters are detailed and well paced, the emotions you portray in your characters (and those you evoke in your your readers) are intense, and you have a good sense of how to write action. You've left this story and this series at such a cliffhanger that I truly hope you'll revisit and continue to work on this. I can't wait to see what happens in Sandoval and Liam's relationship, how Sandoval's knowledge and Liam's new job affect his daily life as a companion protector and resistance member, and what will happen with the shadowy foe you keep hinting about. Please continue this story!
Best,
Shoshi
5/13/2010 c6 Sexytrekkie
This is a great story! I love it. I hope you feel like finishing it as some point.
This is a great story! I love it. I hope you feel like finishing it as some point.
3/31/2010 c6 Queen of Happy
I have just recently looked into EFC fanfics when I started rewatching the series and I found yours. And I have to say it is one of my favorites for this genre. I love the relationship that you have between Liam and Sandaval. I really hope you are continuing it
I have just recently looked into EFC fanfics when I started rewatching the series and I found yours. And I have to say it is one of my favorites for this genre. I love the relationship that you have between Liam and Sandaval. I really hope you are continuing it
10/22/2009 c6 Shoshi
I love this series. Your creative handling of Sandoval and the "elite" (can't wait to see where *that* goes), your detailed descriptions, and your textured characterizations all make this a potent story. I particularly like your take on Sandoval and Liam. Sandoval's internal monologue *finally* reveals him to be human underneath it all, and I think you've managed to straddle a difficult expanse with your characterization of Liam: he's both the capable adult we see on the show, but he has youthful vulnerabilities, too. Please continue this soon!
I love this series. Your creative handling of Sandoval and the "elite" (can't wait to see where *that* goes), your detailed descriptions, and your textured characterizations all make this a potent story. I particularly like your take on Sandoval and Liam. Sandoval's internal monologue *finally* reveals him to be human underneath it all, and I think you've managed to straddle a difficult expanse with your characterization of Liam: he's both the capable adult we see on the show, but he has youthful vulnerabilities, too. Please continue this soon!
10/21/2009 c6 SIS
Welcome back! I thought you fell off the face of the planet! Great story so far!
Welcome back! I thought you fell off the face of the planet! Great story so far!
10/12/2009 c6 Heather
*Squeal* You updated, omg! I thought you'd abandoned this fic for good. I came online to re-read this story from the beginning, I click on link and there was an update. Seriously, I literately bounced up and down on my chair when I saw it. I loved it, Sandoval talking to Liam and getting to the bottom of fears. Please, please say you are going to update again soon. *Begs*
*Squeal* You updated, omg! I thought you'd abandoned this fic for good. I came online to re-read this story from the beginning, I click on link and there was an update. Seriously, I literately bounced up and down on my chair when I saw it. I loved it, Sandoval talking to Liam and getting to the bottom of fears. Please, please say you are going to update again soon. *Begs*
9/21/2009 c1 Lady of Imladris
Thank you so much! I just love Liam/Sandoval family fics, and I think this is my favorite. I have been mourning this fic's lack of continuation since I found it. It's wonderfully written, and it portrays Sandoval as a human being, something I think the series forgot.
Thank you so much! I just love Liam/Sandoval family fics, and I think this is my favorite. I have been mourning this fic's lack of continuation since I found it. It's wonderfully written, and it portrays Sandoval as a human being, something I think the series forgot.
8/24/2009 c6 jeannette
it is so exciting to see another chapter of this story! i love it! keep going!
it is so exciting to see another chapter of this story! i love it! keep going!