Chapter 1-Fukyuu Shinobi
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Unknown-nin345: Hallo everybody! This is a story that started coming to me as I was writing chapter for to Koujaku Naruto. I hope you like it and be sure to leave reviews. By the way, the first word in the title means immortal. On with the words.
- (Small warning: there will be a lemon in this chapter. You've been warned)-
I have roamed this land for over six-hundred years…
I, a soldier in battle, fought demons in battle as a Great War lay nations to waste… I studied with the Muttsu Seijins when chakra was discovered. Long after those I fought with and cared for, had died… I drove back war-bent Uchiha, spilling their blood on the soil of my adopted home country.
Factions have come and gone. Enemies, risen and fallen. Friends gained and lost. Yet I survive.
My blade defends those in my life whom I consider to be precious to me. Others may lose their head in the heat of battle, but not I (as much).
My name…is Uzumaki Naruto…and I am immortal.
They say there can be only one.
I say, "You'll have to take my head first."
-Konohagakure, Hokage Tower-
At a large wooden desk sat the most powerful shinobi in Konoha: The Yondaime Hokage, Namikaze Minato. Currently he is fighting the greatest battle of any Hokage's worst nightmare- Paperwork. However, he had discovered a way to defeat it and had been using that method for the past year now. Its name was Kage Bushin no Jutsu.
Signing the last paper, the real Minato looked up and saw the bushin he had assigned to civilian matters of the village had finished as well. He promptly dismissed the clone and sat back with eyes closed as the information streamed into his head. When it finished he stood up with a relieved sigh and turned to look out the window, which offered a spectacular view of the village he had sworn to defend, with the sun beginning to set.
He stood in silence and watched the colors of the falling sun on the horizon before addressing the seemingly empty room. "You stay invisible like that; I'm going to have to forcibly eject you from this office." There was no acknowledgement to his statement until…
A section of the wall near the edge of the wide window blurred before revealing the intruder. He stood at an impressive height of 6'5''. His midnight-black hair had two upside-down triangle bangs on both sides of his face with a small bit sticking up on top, the rest pulled back into a long ponytail that was wrapped in a white cloth(A/N: Think Rey Yan from The Cursed Sword Chronicles but with midnight-black hair.). He wore a steel-colored shirt covered by a black, sleeveless trench coat that had gold linings. On his legs were dark blue shinobi pants with the ends also wrapped in white tape. Covering his left leg was a picture of a golden thunderbird that seemed to crackle with electricity. Mirrored on his left leg was a crimson-orange firebird whose wings seemed to be wreathed in flame. A spiraling jade dragon could be seen on the back of his trench coat, with each reptilian scale depicted in great detail. Strapped to his back was a dai-katana, its hilt was carved from a white wood and held the appearance of a dragon's head baring its fangs. The sheath, which extended from just above his shoulder to the length of his knee was depicted to look like an icy wind, complete with sparkling sapphire snowflakes.
His face was what any female would describe as the perfect blend of handsome, sexy, and rugged (a/n: though I wouldn't know.). His eyes were truly something to get lost in; they were a blend of humbleness, wisdom, compassion, and ingenuity. Yet for all of these were small amounts of pain and sadness of someone who had lost many loved ones in the ocean-like (both in color and in depth) blue eyes the man possessed.
Upon his forehead rested the hitai-ate that bore the Kanji: Kasuka no Hogosha, rumored to have belonged to one of the Muttsu Seijin.
Topping off his ensemble was an ornate silver amulet. It bore the visage of a snarling wolf's head, a reminder of the first woman he had come to love.
He was Uzumaki Naruto, an over 2,000 year-old immortal.
"I'm wounded that you would do such a thing." He put his hand over his heart, "It hurts me right here you know." He sniffed, fake tears coming on.
The blonde Hokage rolled his eyes in exasperation "Sometimes I find it hard to believe you're over 2,000 years old."
The immortal shrugged, "You simply learn to roll with the punches that life throws at you." His face hardened voice turning serious, "But I'm sorry to say I didn't come here to exchange witty banter gaki." The Yondaime turned to face Naruto, when he spoke seriously you'd better listen, as he continued, "I don't know how but Uchiha Madara is still alive, even though I was pretty sure I had killed him a long time ago. I can only assume he became an immortal like me." Silence descended as the fire-shadow of Konoha digested this, but then saw the look on Naruto's face. "He's trying to locate her cave."
Dread twisted Minato's stomach into a cold knot. Her cave?! Man, if Madara survived that encounter, the man would have his respect.
Naruto continued relaying the information he received from his network, "From what I can remember of him, he'll no doubt do something that will piss her off. We should expect an attack because I wouldn't put it past him to tell her that he was sent by Konoha and then lead her here just to spite us."
The Yondaime nodded "And we won't be able to just simply kill her, plus it'll be damn near impossible to defeat her in a fight."
"Yeah, all of the Bijuu were once human immortals."
Minato looked at the immortal shocked, "Really? You never mentioned that before."
"Well, you never asked." Naruto grinned cheekily, "But, yeah. There were about 13 or 14 that I knew were on the human's side back during the Great Demon War. By now, there's probably a little over 200 immortals in the elemental nations. Anyway, around the time the Sages discovered chakra and jutsu were being invented; Kami came and offered positions to the 14 of us. Nine were offered to become guardians of certain areas, they became the Kyuu Bijuu. Three were given the choice to become bosses of certain summon animals; I think they were for the slugs, wolves, and eagles. Those 12 were given animal forms to shift in to."
"What about you and the other person?"
He gained a far away look, "The last two of our group were me and…my aniki. He had been approached by Kajishukun-sama, the King of Dragons to become the boss of the dragon summons. While I had been approached by Kami-sama herself for the position of the ten-tail Bijuu." he paused clearly remembering the day, "She was sooo fucking hot." Minato turned red, imagining what Kami must have looked like, "Anyway, we both turned down our offers."
Minato was truly shocked, "What! Why the fuck would turn down those kinds of offers?"
Naruto didn't say anything for a minute, "Minato. Do you remember the three 'laws' about immortals that I told you?"
He nodded, "Yeah. One-They can only die with the loss of their head. Two-An immortal will gain more power by cutting off other immortals head. 3-An immortal is only allowed one child."
Naruto continued, "Well, my aniki refused because, he was married and his wife was pregnant with their child. The offer would only allow him the dragon form and he didn't want to leave his wife and unborn child by themselves. Aniki wanted to be there for all the moments of his child's life, the first words and steps, his child getting married, and seeing his child's children."
Minato nodded, if he would only get to have one child he'd want to spend as much time with it as he could as well.
Naruto suddenly sighed, "Then, Aniki's wife was killed, before the baby had even been born…
Two figures could be seen dragging between them two deer thru a lush forest, their dinner for the night. The two were talking about nothing in general as they walked along the path back to the cabin where the wife of one of them was waiting for them.
"So aniki, have you decided on a name for the child yet?" asked a younger Naruto.
His older brother, whose name was Uzumaki Kohaku, nodded, "Hai. If it's a girl we decided to name it Uzumaki Hoshiko. If it's a boy he'll be named after tou-san." He was built like a bear, with ruddy amber hair that shined.
Naruto raised an eyebrow, "Uzumaki Daichi?"
They continued the walk in silence as they came up on the cabin. But as soon as they exited the woods they stopped, feeling the familiar 'buzz' they'd come to associate with an immortal. Quickly drawing their respective swords, Kohaku his daikatana and Naruto a tai chi sword. They rushed over to the house. Seeing no one inside they moved around to one side just in time to see a cloaked figure flee from the back of the house over to the woods. Naruto quickly rushed after the figure while Kohaku moved at a slower pace incase there was another attacker who had hung back. While Naruto continued off to the forest, missing the form against the wall. Kohaku, who had looked at it however, froze and sank to his knees with his sword falling from his grasp.
Naruto who had felt his brother not follow him, turned around before freezing as well uttering a quiet "No."
Pinned up against the wall was the slashed form of Uzumaki Naomi, Kohaku's wife.
The husband of the dead women seemed to suddenly realize his love was dead as a great wail/shout rose from him. He cried out over his wife's death while Naruto stuck his sword in the ground and knelt, lowering his head to the ground as tears dripped from his eyes as well. It was like with Kaa-san all over again.
They stayed like that for a while before Naruto stood up and moved over to his older brother. His head was bent down to the ground, his tears had stopped falling, not from wanting to stop, but from being used for too long
Naruto laid a hand on his brother's shoulder, rousing him from his silence. "C'mon. We should build her a pyre. Give her a proper sending off." Kohaku nodded and stood up laboriously. They proceeded to take out the items that were pinning her to the wall of the cabin, and gently laid her down on the earth.
Kohaku went inside to grab a towel and proceeded to clean the blood off of her. Naruto started to gather wood for the burning of her body. Each was silent as they worked, except for a choked sob coming from the elder Uzumaki when he discovered that Naomi had been slashed twice at her expanded stomach, there was no chance for mother or unborn child.
After a while Naruto had gather sufficient wood for the pyre and set it up for what they were about to do, pouring oil on the wood. When he finished, the sun was setting and Kohaku had yet to leave his wife's side. He had wiped off all the blood and now he simply stared at her features. Naruto went over to him, holding up a torch, and told him the pyre was ready. His answer was a nod as Kohaku picked up his wife and carried her over to place her on the wood. He stepped back and motioned for the torch. When he was handed it he stared into the flickering flames a bit before he thrust it into the wood, leaving it in there as he backed up.
Together they watched as the fire spread in silence when Kohaku decided to speak up, "Naruto. I want you to grab my sword."
Confused at his brother's request, he nevertheless did as he was told and walked over to where it had been left in the ground. When he came back and tried to hand it back he was stopped, "Naruto, I want you take my head."
He turned over to look at his younger brother and Naruto was shocked at his eyes, they looked empty "I want to go with her. The only way I can do that is if you take my head."
Naruto shook his head, "I..I can't do it aniki. I can't kill you."
Kohaku smiled a bit, "You won't be killing me. I'll still live on in you, and in my sword. Naruto after you take my head I want you to wield my sword. Use it to defend your precious people. Wield it and keep true to what you believe in. I know you will become a great person."
He got down on both knees, with his hands resting on them. "Please otoutou."
Naruto saw that he wouldn't be dissuaded and quickly engulfed his older brother in the last hug he would ever receive from him. With tears flowing he stood to the side of Kohaku, "Goodbye Ni-san."
His older brother smiled softly, "Never say goodbye, because we will meet again. Remember that, and tell me when you come up that you made me an Uncle. Okay Naruto."
He smiled through his tears and quickly brought the sword down, cleaving the head from the body. Moving quickly, before the Quickening started he picked up the body and lay it next to his wife's. Then, jerkingly, he picked up the head as well and put it in the flames. He then moved away as lightning started striking the ground around him. He fell to his knees as several bolts struck him and yelled out in pain, rage, and sorrow.
When the Quickening ended, he stayed on his knees for a minute before standing. Moving over to his brother's daikatana he picked it up and looked back at the pyre that still burned bright. He faced it completely and drew the sword across his hand, "I promise aniki, on this blood that I let fall, that I will hunt down and kill the person who did this. You have my word brother. Ni su'cuyi, gar kyr'adyc, ni partayli, gar darasuum(1) Kohaku."
Running a rag over the blade, he sheathed the sword and walked away as the fire burned behind him.
There was silence in the office as the Yondaime Hokage processed this tale and Naruto remembered the saddest day in his very long life.
The Yondaime spoke, "Why'd you refuse Kami-sama's offer?"
Naruto shook his head, smiling ruefully, "She said that in return for the power I would be granted, every 300 years I'd have to come before her and do all the paperwork she has at the moment I arrive."
The Yondaime frowned, "Well sure, I can see why you wouldn't want to do paperwork but it wasn't that bad was it?"
"Minato. ONE stack of Kami's paperwork is as tall as the Hokage Tower, doing all the paperwork of Kami would take seventy years at best. There was no way in hell I would be doing all that."
The blonde Hokage sweatdropped while paling in fright.
He cleared his throat as they moved on, "Hmm, okay then."
Naruto spoke seriously, "We still have to prepare for a possible Kyuubi attack. Plus, since she can't be killed except by getting her human head cut off we'll most likely have to seal her."
Naruto shrugged, "What else? A human would be the only thing strong enough to hold any Bijuu over four-tails." He put his hand to his chin, "I don't think it should be powerful enough to last forever. We just need to give her some time to cool down."
The Yondaime agreed, "Very well. Still, how are we going to do this?"
"Well, from what my information network gathered, he shouldn't get to the cave until two weeks from now, then we will have at most a week before she reaches Konoha." He grinned and started pushing a protesting Minato out of the room, "So go spend some time with your wife. We'll start working on a seal in two days. Go on, have some fun."
He walked off, leaving a stunned Hokage who decided to take his advice and spend some quality time with his wife.
We find Naruto walking down a street, remembering a time long ago, during the demon wars of the time when he first met Hinoiri Akane, the immortal woman who would become the Kyuubi no Kitsune.
Smoke rose from random buildings around him as he walked through the war torn town. It had been six years since the start of the Great Demon Wars and this town had become a popular fighting ground a year ago. There wasn't much in the area except for some broken down buildings and rubble from the destroyed ones.
He sighed. No one knew why demons were attacking the human realm instead of staying in Makai fighting there. Currently he was on patrol to see if any demons were preparing a base in the rubble, dressed in body armor the Shodaime of Konoha would come to wear, minus the shoulder pads and without having received the silver amulet yet. So far there hadn't been any sightings. He was just about to turn back as he reached the designated spot he was supposed to search to when he felt it. The buzz that only came with one thing.
There was another immortal nearby.
He was looking around when he heard screams. He forgot about the potential immortal and rushed with his sword drawn to the direction of the screams. When he reached the spot the screams were coming from his blood boiled.
A woman, about 22 to 23 years old was being raped by two Tora demons. The Tora demons stood on two legs wearing opened vests and ripped shorts, proudly displaying their black stripes on orange fur. One was holding her arms behind her back while the other was assaulting her uncovered breasts, leaving miniature scratches all over them from his fangs.. Thankfully they hadn't started on the woman's lower region yet.
With blood burning, he rushed in and with a quick swipe one was without a head. The second was released the woman who quickly scurried out of the way and leaned against a wall trying to cover her exposed chest.
The tora demon started snarling at Naruto, "You messed with our fun."
Naruto replied, "With your definition of fun. How could I not?" Spiting out fun.
"You'll pay for this ningen." with that, he leapt with sharp claws at Naruto, who dodged out of the demons path.
"Sorry, but I'm all out of cash." He lashed out with his tai-chi blade, gaining a cut at the tiger's shoulder.
The tiger swiped at him, prompting him to block the sharp claws. He punched at the demons face but his hand was grabbed by the demons other hand. He was thrown over the demons shoulder, rolled a bit, before getting up, and crouched a few feet away. He stood up and swept at the demon as it came closer, but the tiger knocked his sword away and lashed out with his claws, gaining blood as he struck Naruto across the chest making a shallow wound. They both jumped back and stared each other down, blood dripping from the wounds they had given each other. They rushed back into the fight, each gaining small cuts and slashes when finally Naruto gained a decisive blow. The tora demon howled in pain as it's left hand was cut off, blood falling out of the severed arm. The demon lashed out at Naruto with his other hand only to get it cut off up 'till the elbow. Now, with no arms the demon knelt defeated, with crimson blood pooling around his knees, dyeing the fur red.
Naruto, with a face of stone, stepped up to the demon. Without pause, he thrust his sword through the tiger's heart, then pulled the sword out and spinning around severed the head from the body, with small droplets of blood falling on his face.
He stood still before taking out a rag and ran it over his sword followed by his face, cleaning both of blood. With a flourish, he sheathed the sword into the sheath hanging from his hip.
With a sigh, he brought his hand to his chest feeling the shallow wounds and thanking Kami for inventing armor. Looking around he saw the woman still huddled against the wall. He moved towards her slowly, hands in the air to show he didn't mean any harm. When was a couple feet in front of her he sat down, he noticed that she didn't make any movements away from him which was a good sign from someone who had almost been raped.
He decided to speak up, "Daijobu desu ka?"
The woman nodded her head shakily, "I'm fine. O namae wa?"
Naruto smiled, "Boku no name wa Uzumaki Naruto desu." He pulled off his armor followed by his shirt and handed the shirt to her, "Here, think you might want this." She grabbed it and Naruto turned around so that she could have some privacy then asked, "What's your name?"
The girl pulled on the shirt and answered, "I'm Hinoiri Akane." She smiled slightly, "You can turn around now Naruto-san." He did so, "So, Naruto-san."
"Just how long have you been alive?"
He looked flustered; "Ehrm, well I think it's been about 23 years." He said unconvincingly and blushed knowing it.
Akane laughed, "Sure you are." She turned serious, "I know you're an immortal Naruto-san."
"Please, just Naruto or Naruto-kun. Anyway, how?"
"How do you think? I felt the buzz of an immortal approach, next think I now, the fucking tora attacking my tits has his head cut off and there you are with a sword, fighting the other one."
Naruto gained an understanding look, "Aaahh, so it was you I felt when I was patrolling. Well, if you tell me how many times you died, I'll tell you how many times I've died." As she was about to speak however, Naruto suddenly held up a hand, "On second thought, maybe we should head to where I'm currently staying, then we can talk."
She giggled then stood up, Naruto imitating her and he slipped on his armor. Together they set off to Naruto's house that was on the outskirts of town, close to a river and nearby woods.
- (A walk later)-
They had arrived at the house after narrowly avoiding another Tora demon. Now they stood before the house, which was small and cozy since Naruto lived by himself. He held open the door for her, inviting her in. When she stepped through the door, she could feel the cozy-ness of the house.
The furniture looked comfortable and had cheery colors that didn't stick out against the walls. There were several potted plants around the room and a nodachi that was hanging on the wall. Even as she walked in and through some of the rooms, the cozy feeling didn't abate. When she turned around, she saw that Naruto was standing at the door, looking a little nervous at having her in his home.
Gathering himself he started conversation, "Well, what do you think?"
She looked around a bit before looking at him and smiling brightly, "I love it. It's very cozy in here and whose sword is that hanging on the wall over there?"
Naruto gained a solemn look on his face as he approached the nodachi, "It belonged to my kaa-san. She and tou-san were Kenjutsu masters, him with twin hook swords and kaa-san with this nodachi."
There was silence as Akane didn't know what to say and Naruto was lost in memories. "They're both dead." He said suddenly, "Tou-san died three years into the war and Kaa-san…she was killed back when I was twelve, about four years before the demons started attacking. That was also when I found out I was an immortal. Four Inu demons attacked while tou-san and aniki were out hunting. They overpowered Kaa-san, and one held me as he forced me to watch the other three raped my mother." His fist clenched so hard he started drawing blood and tears started falling from his eyes. "Kaa-san never shed tears when they were raping her, she just did her best to keep looking at me. After they finished with her they stabbed her with this blade, and then stabbed me in the heart as well."
Behind him, Akane was crying as well, and had her hands covering her mouth. She came up behind him and wrapped her arms around him, "I'm sorry Naruto-kun. I didn't know this would bring up bad memories for you." She just continued to hold him as he still stared straight ahead at the sword of his mother, with tears still falling down both faces.
Shaking himself from the depressing memories, Naruto moved himself out of Akane's arms and wiped the tears from his eyes with Akane mimicking him. He smiled and nodded at her, "Anyway, I said we'd come here and tell each other how many times we've died so that's what we'll do." He gestured for her to sit on the coach while he went into the kitchen to get some sake. "Just give me a second to get some sake."
She nodded and sat down on the coach reflecting on what she just learned, 'Wow. He went through that when he was only twelve. I guess now I know why he fights. But I wonder how old he really is.' She looked up when she heard him coming back with two bottles of sake.
With a grateful nod, she accepted one of the bottles as he sat down on the nearby chair. After a moment of comfortable silence Akane started to speak, "I didn't die until I was fifteen, a year into the war. It had been a raid on one of the demon camps and I was caught by surprise when I was stabbed from behind. I woke up a while later and looked down to see that all I had was a scar from the stab." She lifted up the shirt so that Naruto could see that there was a diagonal scar in the middle of her stomach. "Since then I've only died one other time and right now I am 20 years old." she finished as she lowered the shirt she got from Naruto.
Naruto nodded and said, "Well, after I had been killed the first time, Aniki had to explain that I was now immortal like him."
"Wait, your brother was immortal as well?" Akane interrupted.
"Hai. But tou-san and kaa-san were both mortal so we just assume its luck that I and aniki were both immortal." He shrugged, "As for my number of deaths, I already got 6, not counting my first death. Most were from inexperienced fighting, although one was because I drank to much sake in a contest; thankfully they only thought I went into a short coma." He smiled, "As for my age, I think I'm either 22 or 23 so I wasn't really lying when I told you earlier." He stretched out in the chair, Akane admiring his muscles, and said, "Well, you're welcome to stay as long as you want. I don't know when I'll be shipped out to a different battlefield, so until then you can crash here okay?"
She nodded gratefully, "Arigatou Naruto-kun. I needed a place to stay anyway; those tora demons had chased me from my camp."
"Well make yourself at home Akane-chan. The guest room is over there." He said indicating a door over to the left. She nodded again and kissed him on the cheek in thanks before retreating into the guest room.
Naruto was stunned by the kiss and raised his hand up to his cheek before a silly grin spread on his face. He leaned back into the reclining chair and put his hands behind his head. He was glad he'd gone on patrol today.
-Later that evening-(Lemon warning, skip if you don't want to read, otherwise say nothing)
Naruto lay in his bed that night, thinking on the day he had just gone through. He had told somebody something he had told no other person and this somebody he had just met. He closed his eyes and sighed, there was just something about her that just made him feel at ease around her, as if nothing bad could happen. This was very confusing.
In his deep level of pondering, he didn't hear the door to his room slowly and silently open to reveal Akane, dressed only in a large white t-shirt and black thong. She shut the door behind her and crept up to the bed. Only when she laid down on it did Naruto realize her presence, any remark or question was stopped at her appearance. He was further kept from saying anything when Akane leaned in and captured his lips in a heated kiss. It took him only a split second to respond by kissing back, electricity shooting through them. The need for oxygen forced them apart and she breathed into his ear, "I wanted to properly thank you. Please…enjoy this." With that, she licked his earlobe gaining shivers from him as she continued down his neck and lightly nibbling on his nipple. She continued down his abs, stopping to trail a slow spiral down to his belly-button, then moved onto the waistband of his boxers where she noticed that was she was doing was greatly pleasing him. The boxers were pulled down to show Naruto's seven ½ inch member standing straight up, ready to serve. She lightly licked the tip of his dick, before trailing her tongue it and back up leaving Naruto pleasured. Kissing it she started to engulf it in her mouth and began to bob her head up and down slowly, raking her teeth at different parts bringing the black-haired man closer to the edge. He saw white when Akane started humming while speeding up her bobbing, within a minute he cummed filling her mouth with his fluid. Bringing her head up she made a sight of sensually swallowing the salty, slightly sweet cum.
She suddenly found herself on the bottom with her lips being ravaged by Naruto's. He licked her lips, begging for entrance. She parted hers slightly, allowing the two lover's tongues to explore each other's mouths. As the kiss raged on Naruto, who had placed his hands her firm ass, was slowly sliding up the red-haired beauties white shirt. They had to stop kissing a quick second so they could get her shirt over her head, when it was off she wrapped her arms around his neck as they continued kissing, while Naruto cupped her round c-cup boobs. He started to squeeze and roll them, making Akane moan into the kiss. Breaking off from her, Naruto proceeded to start leaving butterfly kisses down her neck and should before moving down to her twins. When he reached them, he began sucking on one with his other hand pinching the hardened nipple of the other tit, with Akane moaning and pushing his head closer to her tits, loving his ministrations. He then switched to the other, repeating the treatment he had given to the first mound and moving his now free hand down to where her thong still covered her womanhood. Without pause, he began to rub Akane's vagina thru the thin fabric of the black thong, feeling that she was already wet down there.
He came up suddenly, getting a frustrated groan Akane who had been very close to release, before moving down to her where her luscious lower lips lay and began to slowly peel off the black thong. With it removed he descended and pecked his way up her left leg, then repeated it over on the right leg when his head was grabbed and shoved into Akane's pussy who had started to get frustrated with the teasing, "Start licking my pussy damnit! Your teasing is driving insane!" He decided to do so and did as she said, gained mews and moans from the red-haired beauty. During his licking, he discovered a little nub that seemed to put her in more pleasure, so he brought up two fingers and inserted them into the wet folds before he began to pump them in and out. He then descended on the nub and sucked on it, "Aaahh, fuck yeah. Right there Naruto-kun! Suck right there!" He didn't disappoint. As he felt her getting close, he decided to add another finger suddenly and sped up gaining a scream as she came hard.
Naruto licked his cum covered fingers and said, "Why Akane-chan, you're such a screamer. And you taste so sweet as well." He let her suck on his last finger then brought himself up to kiss her, tasting her on her tongue. Pulling up he looked in her lust shining eyes, "Akane-chan, do you want to continue? We can stop right now, even though you can't get pregnant."
She shook her head, "No Naruto-kun. We started so we might as well finish."
He nodded as he positioned his dick at the entrance of her pussy and slowly pushed in, making Akane give out a long, drawn-out moan. He stopped when he felt her hymen and looked up at her, silently asking. At her nod, he moved his mouth onto a nipple and started nibbling and sucking it before he broke her barrier. Her pain was limited to only a small cry and few tears since she was gaining pleasure from the tit suckling. After a couple of seconds, she tapped Naruto so that he knew he could continue.
With a smile, he started to pull out and pound into her, speeding up at her insistence. For Akane, she had never before felt anything as good as this if her moans and shouts of "Yes! Keep fucking me Naru-kun!" along with repeated cries of "Faster!". Naruto looked down at her from above as he continued to pound his dick into her pussy, and watched her tits bounce up and down with each thrust.
After what seemed like an hour of being, fucked Akane could feel her release coming. Naruto could as well from the way her walls seemed to tighten around his dick. Together the came and cried "Naruto-kun/Akane-chan!"
When they finished they fell to the bed, and pulled the blanket over them. Together they went to sleep, Naruto's dick still inside Akane.
-End Flashback- (Lemon's over now)
Naruto had come to a stop now on top of the Hokage Monument, fingering the wolf pendant Akane had given him when she had left the next day. She said she didn't want them to delude each other into a relationship where nothing could be gained. He had argued saying that plenty could be gained from being together. Akane had gained a sad look, turned her head to the ground and whispered, "But not children." Naruto decided not to press the issue and simply walked over to where his Kaa-san's nodachi hung. He unhooked it from the wall, unsheathed it and had said that it had protected his mother well. He re-sheathed it and turned to her saying that he hoped it would do the same for her. She had taken it, but not without giving him the wolf amulet to remember her by. As he watched her go, he felt a terrible pain in his heart, one he had not felt since the day his kaa-san had died.
Back on the monument, he looked up at the stars and let some tears be shed. He knew that in that very short amount of time he had fallen in love. He only wished he had taken a firmer hold on it.
He shook his head banishing those thoughts, 'I know I might never love someone like her. But I said I would try. (sigh) Even now it still hurts.' He looked out over the village he had come to call home, ever since it had been a small group of huts trying to hide from the Uchiha army way back 600 years ago. Now, it was a large hidden village for shinobi that was considered one of the five great nations.
As he turned to leave the sight, he had a feeling that his life was going to take a turn for the worst.
If only he knew how right, he would be.
End of First Chapter- READ THE AUTHOR NOTES
Well, there you go. The first chapter of my Naruto/Highlander crossover. Hope you liked it, now to clear up some things that probably have you confused.
-he was twelve when he became immortal. (Age 12)
-four years later the Great Demon War started. (Age 16) the demon wars last for 15 years.
-Six years after the start of the war, he meets Akane (Naruto: age 22/23, Akane: age 20/21)
-in the first flash back it's been about 10 months after the offer he mentioned that was proposed to the 14 immortals to become Bijuu/Summon bosses(Age 404, 300 years after end of demon war.)
-Present time/3 weeks before Kyuubi attack (2,097 years old)
Two-Don't worry, for those who know the three 'real' rules for the Immortals, I'll explain what changed the third rule next chapter.
Three-The Japanese words (besides the obvious ones)
-Kasuka no Hogosha = Protector of the weak.
-Kajishukun = fire-lord/master
Hinoiri Akane = Beautiful red Sunset
Uzumaki Kohaku(naruto's aniki) = Amber Whirlpool
Daichi/Hoshiko(Kohaku's unborn child) = Great first son/star child
Uzumaki Naomi (Kohaku's wife) = beautiful whirlpool.
Daijobu desu ka? = Are you okay?
O namae wa? = what's your name?
Boku no name wa Uzumaki Naruto desu = My name is Uzumaki Naruto.
4- What being immortal is-
Basically, for those who have not heard of Highlander, Immortals cannot die except for when their heads are chopped off. Immortals sense one another with a feeling called the Buzz, which is just a buzz that goes off when one immortal senses another. When one immortal cuts off another's head they gain the immortals power, a process called the Quickening (the whole lighting strikes the immediate area around the victor.)
I think that's just about everything. So let me know what you think. Should I continue this? Because this is just a small (well, not so much) thing that came to me, I can continue this but I would like to know what you think. If so then that tells me, you appreciate my writing, if not then oh well.
(1)= I'm still alive, but you are dead. I remember you, so you are eternal. –Mandalorian-
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