First story. Sorry if it sucks.
I ran through the woods, trying to find him. "Edward!" I tripped over a branch, of course. "Here, let me help you," a sweet voice said. It was a gorgeous blond vampire, but to my great disapoinetment, it wasn't one of mine. His eyes were as black as any other vampire's eyes, along with the bell tone voice and pale skin.
"Are you lost?" I suddenly lost the ability to talk. I just nodded, and he laughed.
"Your perfect," he whispered, more to himself than I. "Don't worry, I'll wake you when it's over." I didn't understand his words, but went along with it. And in a flash, he was holding me down. He then bit my upper hand, and I heard a startled gasp of pain. Then a most ear splitting scream split my ears. Oh. Me. It was coming from me. I was blinded by pain, drowning in it. "I'm sorry...your perfect...I'm sorry..." The blond vampire's voice was fading, I couldn't hear...I couldn't see...
I opened my eyes for what seemed like the first time, blinded by light for a fraction of a second. I absorbed the surroundings around me.
Sorry that the chapter is so short. I just don't want to get to in to it if no one reads it anyway. review and maybe I'll think about it.