A/N: Alright, y'all. I've got the first chapter rewritten and posted. I have a few questions for y'all, and hopefully the story is better now! I'll include some background information on my characters so you have some idea of why they behave as they do. :D There is a lot of stuff coming up in the next few chapters about Krystal, but not much about her past, so here it is. Sorry this isn't a chapter, but I think this needs to be out there, so yeah. Hope y'all don't mind! :D
My questions are:
Should I bring Yassen back?
If so, should he be alive? Or undead? Or a super?
What should be involved in the mission Alex and Krystal go on?
What type of disguises should be used?
Should someone figure out who Krystal is?
Should someone figure out who Alex is?
Should someone go after Jack, and Giselle, Jake, and Tess fight them off?
Krystal: Krystal is a half vampire superhero. Throughout her high school career, she went through heck. Three of her teachers were evil, and she and her friends barely survived. When she was a sophomore, she was partially Turned, meaning she's half vampire. She uses that to her benefit, most of the time, but if she's hurt, she craves blood more than usual. She has wonderful control, 9 times out of 10. Her junior year, she and her friends went up against the evil teachers, and lost, and Tess was put into a coma. Krystal blamed herself, as mentioned in one of the chapters. In her senior year, one of the evil teachers hired someone to capture her, and torture her. She was held captive for a week, and she was tortured and experimented on, then was in a coma for three days after her escape. When she was still in middle school, 8th grade, I believe, she fought against an alien, and was wounded seriously. When that happened, her heart stopped, so she enjoys telling people that she died, since technically she did. The wound on her stomach is second only to the ones on her back. Any other person likely would have stopped being a super after all she's gone through, but that never crossed her mind. In this story, she's 18, the summer after graduation. She's very strong, emotionally, but has a few things that she's very insecure about. Being kidnapped and the like are normal for her, and she can usually find a way out. Her powers are the same as Superman's, which is why he's her mentor. Because of the vampirism, she's stronger than he is. She can be reckless and all, but everything she does is for others. She doesn't care as much about her own well-being, so if someone she cares about is in danger, she will do anything and everything in her powers to save them.
Clark: My version of Superman, and Krystal's boyfriend/mentor. He's 25, and has the same powers as the typical Superman. He's very protective of her, since she's always in trouble and getting hurt. He truly loves her, and they work together to find young supers, so they don't have to deal with their powers alone.
Jake: Has superspeed. He's tall, dark hair and eyes, and a goofball. He and Giselle are dating, and very well together. He is part of Krystal's group from high school, though not in as much danger as she was. Super name is Speed.
Giselle: Can turn invisible and create forcefields. Her superhero name is Shadow Stealer. She's average height, long curly brown hair, green eyes. She's quiet, but is as much of a goof as Jake.
Tess: Has power over plants, and can make them do what she wants. The problem is they are a part of her when she does this. The evil teachers used that to their advantage to put her in a coma. She's very quiet, shy, and calm. Krystal met her at one point in high school when they were both held captive, and worked together to get the other captive girls out. She has mouse brown hair, and matching eyes, and lots of freckles. She is covered with burns from the fight with the evil teachers, though they are mostly healed. She is left with the scars, and is far quieter than before. She doesn't have a mentor, so she taught herself everything about them.