A/N: I adore fairy tales and not the sweet,cute "oh-were-so happy-let's -sing" Disney versions either,nope,I love the originals,the gruesome ones .In fact a lot of people may or may not know this,but in the original version of "Little Red Riding Hood" the little girl not only had a name(Biddy),but she gets eaten . Prince Charming is not as Charming as Disney makes him out to be because in the original version of "Sleeping Beauty" he rapes the girl(I don't approve of that) . Cinderella's stepsisters cut off parts of their foot (toe) and (heel) and get their eyes pecked out on top of White was only seven not a teenager as she is portrayed in every movie version ever shown.
On that note,I am going to attempt to write a Narnian based fairytale . Susan and Lucy are the princesses of Narnia,Caspian is Prince of Telmar,Peter is the stable boy that works at Cair Paravel,Edmund is well he'll get a place later on.
Disclaimer:I own those who you are not familiar with.
Once there were two princesses that dwelled in the castle of Cair Paravel . It was a happy time during the reign of their parents King Frank and Queen Helen .The eldest daughter was as pretty as the day with glossy black hair,pale skin and perfect red cheeks and lips,the youngest was like a flower with her reddish brown hair and blue eyes.
Every morning the eldest daughter Susan went to the stables and every morning she would address the stable boy in the same manner,"Stable boy,bring me my horse."
Every time ,the boy would bow,then bring her horse. He would never utter a word ,just bow and carry out her command.
"Stable boy." Susan said walking into the stables one morning.
The boy stood there ready to carry out her command,Susan then said "Bring me my horse."
The horse was bought out,normally Susan would mount the horse and ride away,but this time she hesitated,for some reason she didn't want to leave just yet.
"Stable boy,bring me my saddle,I wish to use a saddle." Susan said.
The boy bowed,left and came back with the saddle fastening it,he stepped back and waited for the Princess to mount her horse.
Susan sat on the horse,then kicked it lightly and rode out of the stables.
Peter watched the princess ride away,every day he wanted to talk to her,but he couldn't get up the nerve to,after all she was a princess and he was not.
"You should talk to her." one of the horses said,nudging him with her nose.
Peter frowned and turned to the Horse a chestnut female with a white star on her forehead,"That's easy for you to say you're a horse." when he had first started working in the stables two years ago at the age of twelve the Talking Horses had unnerved him,there had been no Talking Beasts where he had come from,but he was used to them now
"So." Nellie(for that was the horses name) said
"So,she's a princess and not only that she's the crowned Princess,I'm just the stable boy,my mother works down in the kitchens." Peter said.
"So go visit the "Mystic Woman of the Western Woods" and she can help you." Nellie said shaking her mane.
"I can't do that,I heard she was a witch and besides no one allowed in the woods." Peter said.
"Well." Nellie neighed,"If you're scared."
"Don't,I'm not scared,but what could she do,it's not as if she could make me a prince or the son of a lord." Peter said stroking Nellie's nose,she nudged around in his pocket for a lump of sugar. "Besides how would I get there?"
"Take me." Nellie said.
"I can't do that you belong to the King of Narnia and the penalty for theft is severe ." Peter replied.
"First a Narnian Horse does not belong to anyone not even the King,we are not like the dumb beasts that dwell where you and your mother come from. Second if you're so worried just ask the King or Queen if you can use me." Nellie said neighing.
Susan entered the stables a few days later,"Stable boy,bring me my horse." she waited for the boy to get her horse,but he stood there,then for the first time spoke
"Peter." he said.
"I beg your pardon." Susan said confused.
"You always address me as stable boy,I do have a name it's Peter." Peter replied.
"Peter?" Susan repeated,she liked the name it was a strong name,"I'm.." she started to say,but was cut off.
"The Princess Susan ,I know,I've known you all my life." Peter said.
Susan looked at him,"You know me,yet I don't know you." she said.
"What is there to know,I am not important,shall I get your horse." without waiting for an answer he went to get her horse.
Susan took the reigns from him,"Sta-Peter,thank you." she said blushing as their fingers brushed against each mounted her horse and rode away.
"There you see the Princess is falling for you." Nellie said .
"Hush,the idea is absurd."Peter said,but hoping it was true.
A/N : Depending on the amount of reviews I get,I will also update a story from my poll.
This is not based on particular fairy tale,but ideas of several fairy tales.