DISCLAIMER: I DO NOT own any Sonic characters, or that dog that lives across the street. I own Jurr, Ruby, all the other OCs that are going to be in this story, and the plot.
Amy Rose: Age 1
The small, pink hedgehog swung her purple hammer, pounding her victims flat. Bam! Bam! She smiled, having completed her mission, and turned the block over. Whap! Bam! The baby hedgehog gurgled as she flattened the blocks for the 50th time on her brand new toy. She raised her hammer to strike again and swung.
The block stayed where it was. Amy looked at her hand, startled to see her hammer wasn't there anymore. She looked around and saw a red female hedgehog, a little older than herself, playing with the small hammer.
Her bottom lip began to tremble. That was her hammer! Her precious hammer! Tears began to fall as she opened her mouth to let out a wail. Little baby Amy's hand began to tingle. When it ceased she felt a new weight in her hand and stopped mid-wail. In her hand was a new red hammer, just the right size for smashing.
The small hedgehog looked back at her older sister, who was still playing with the stolen hammer. Who cares? She had her own, new, better hammer to play with. Mrs. Rose came in suddenly. "Amykinz, what's wrong?" she asked, then spied Ruby with the purple hammer. "Oooh, did mean old Ruby take your favorite hammer?" she cooed, then turned to her youngest and gasped. "Honey! Come quick! Amy's a Chosen!"
Sonic the Hedgehog: Age 6
Sonic scrambled up the rocks away from his family. "I'm gonna go explore now, 'k?" he said in a cute little kid voice. "As long as you're back for lunch!" his father called back. (I don't know his parents' names, so I'm just going to call them George and Helen when I have to.)
Higher and higher he climbed until far away from his parents' view. He turned around and looked down at his picnicking family. "Hey! You look like itty bitty ants way down there!" he yelled down, but they didn't seem to hear him. Sonic didn't care and continued his exploration up the never ending mountain until there were no more footholds. Panting, he sat down on the near edge of a ledge, but far enough away so that no classic ledge-breaking-kid-falling-off-cliff would happen. But it happened anyway. "Aaaaaah!" the poor hedgehog yelled as a secret trap door opened, sending him down a chute until dropping him off at the bottom of a rock tunnel. He looked up, his eyes following the slide to the top, which was coincidentally right above him, only to see the cleverly hidden trap door close shut once again.
"Uh oh," Sonic mumbled. "Now I'm gonna be late and Mama's gonna get mad 'cause now I'm all dirty." He sighed and picked himself up.
Even though there was no light, the should be dark tunnel was still light enough so that he could still see. The tunnel was dark, but was light enough that he could see. The ground smooth and the walls were also smooth, but also slick, like stalactites and stalagmites in caves, but there was no trace of water to be found. It wasn't hot, nor was it cold, but a somewhat comfortably cool and relaxing temperature.
The blue hedgehog walked around for a minute in the labyrinth like tunnel. "Oh boy, isn't this place great?" he said in awe as he searched for a way out.
But fate wasn't about to let that happen so before finding an exit he discovered a wall full of strange writing. Sonic looked at this tremendous wall before a thought popped into his head. "Heeeeeeey, I've seen these scribbles before! Mama told me 'bout these. They're. . . ummmm. . . Oh yeah! The "Ane Chent Language" or somethin' like that. Daddy said when I get bigger I could learn it in class." He stared at the wall for a few more minutes before coming up with a decision.
"I'm gonna keep this place a secret, 'cause then it will be my secret place, and when I get bigger I'll know what it means." Sonic gazed proudly at his discovery.
He got up to look for more treasures, but remembered something very important. "Oh yeah!" he spun back to the wall. "I gotta go now, or my mama and daddy will eat all the chili dogs without me! Bye-bye secret wall! Don't go anywhere!" He ran quickly down the corridor, quicker than he had ever seen the grown-ups run.
He stopped. Faster than the grown-ups? This place is amazing! "Hey! Another secret for my secret place!" he turned to the direction he just came. "Thank-you secret wall!" he yelled. Normally, others would have thought he was Chosen, but if he was Chosen, he would have found out years ago.
The blue hedgehog, no, the fastest blue hedgehog, ran towards the exit to join his parents in the picnic.
Chosen and The Valley
Chosen are hedgehogs with special abilities that come in several types, such as: metal, physical, and wielding. They always reveal their special abilities at a young age, the earliest from birth and the latest at four years are dubbed 'Chosen" because the hedgehogs who receive their powers seems random. A hedgehog's parents could have it, but the children themselves wouldn't, and hedgehogs who haven't been Chosen for generations would have a Chosen child.
The village, named Jurr, is inhabited only by hedgehogs, and rarely gets visitors, due to the fact that it's surrounded by dangerous mountains, and those who get passed the mountains get lost in the seemingly endless forest, or pass right by without even knowing that there was a village in the first place. When, on a rare occasion, a visitor does stumble upon Jurr, its always a treat for the younger children, and a pleasure to the friendly and forever-welcoming adults.
Well? How is it for my first chapter of my first fanfic? I was very proud at how little Sonic's voice came out. CONSTRUCTIVE CRITICISM IS WELCOMED! But no flames, please. I'll try to update as soon as possible, but my summer is very busy. Please tell me what you think!