The Spirit Room
Hey! So this is my first Maximum Ride story so Constructive criticism is welcome. Flames...Not so much... This story is completely AU so no wings, Lets just clear some things up then we shall continue with the story! :D
Max and Fang - 15
Iggy Ella (Moon Flower) Nudge - 13
Gazzy - 11
Angel - 9
Okay now that that is cleared up Dr.m is Not blood related to Max in anyway. Nor is Jeb.
I am only going to do this once for the whole story.
Does it really look like own Max? does it? no. no it does not.
Fang is a prince and next in line for the thrown. Max was abandoned by her parents, Then found and raised by the indians. How could these two fifteen year olds from totally different worlds meet and Possibly fall in love? AU. Set around the 1800's.
Fang sighed as he glanced around his future kingdom. He never wanted to be king, sure he would be a great king it just wasn't what he wanted to be. He never told anyone, but when they pass by the villagers (He refused to call them peasants much to his mothers displease) he would envy them, they got to go out with friends without having 'protection' following you around constantly (even though he could defend himself pretty damn well without the guards). They got to choose what they wanted to be, they got to choose whom they would marry. He didn't even get to choose he would marry! It was already decided; when he turned 16 he would marry princess Lissa.
Lissa was 15 also with long red hair and lots of freckles. It wasn't that she wasn't pretty she was quite pretty he just did not love her.
He and the rest of the kingdom were currently waiting for his Cousins arrival. He could truthfully not wait for his cousins to get there. They were (Besides his sisters) the only friends he had. Since he was not allowed to have serious relationships with the villagers, they were pretty much his only friends.
It was only late morning still, and they were supposed to arrive in the late evening.
He sighed; this would be a long day.
Max sat around the fire in the tipi with her sisters Laughing at a joke Moon Flower (Ella) made while making jewelry. There were a total of 7 girls in the tipi working on jewelry. Moon Flower, the girl who's family Max lived with.
Blue Sun, Who was already Married, Walking Pride, Flying Time, The most mature girl in the tipi, Rain Runner, Wind Chaser and Max. Max was the only female warrior in the tribe. She was also one of the best.
"That was really how he reacted?" Rain Runner asked being the first to be able to stop laughing.
"Yes!" Water Flower responded still in a giggle fit.
They continued to talk and joke as the worked on the jewelry until Wise Forest (Dr. M) called upon Max.
Max looked at the other girls before she left and felt a little pang of envy. They were with their kind, She still loved them all and was very grateful they accepted her as much as they did, Her after all being abandoned by her parents at the age of seven months they took her in and raised her as one of them. Still some of the tribe her a grudge at her thinking she could be a spy or a bad spirit. But most of the tribe liked and accepted her as one of their own. She had made it to the outside of Wise Forest's Tipi she took a deep breath and pulled the flap back and stepped in.
"You called upon me Mother?" Max grew up with Wise Forest so she was like her mother and Wise Forest insisted she call her that from the very start.
"Yes Max please sit down." She said motioning the spot next to her.
Max sat down and Look at the all too familr patterns on the walls of the tipi.
"Max I think its time." Wise Forest said Looking at her beautiful daughter.
"Time for what?"
Wise Forest sighed not looking forward to her daughters reaction to her information.
"Time for you to get married."
A/N: Okay! that was it! tell me if i should continue. and i am thinking about changing my name to 'Blue Butterflies play on my guitar' should i?