I am re-doing almost all my stories I think need improvements and this was defiantly one of them I know I could do better on this and I will. If you haven't read the original good for you if you have I promise this one will be way better. I took all your comments and criticism and applied them to re-make this story. I have grown as an author since the first time I had written this and I'm ready to show it.
Hope you enjoy it
Disclaimer: I don't own anything J.K Rowling does.
Petunia nearly glided out of the purse store, having just purchased a $200 green purse. It had to be one of the most beautiful things she'd seen in her whole life. She was sure Vernon would love it to just as long as he didn't see he price.
She was heading over to the shoe store across the hall when suddenly out of nowhere to teenagers came sprinting past her, grabbing her purse on the way. She was knocked off of her feet and two the ground the two thieves getting away with her beautiful purse.
"Hey! Bring it back!" She shouted. Now everyone at the shopping center had stopped to look at the scene, no one moved. Then one lady with significantly bright red hair ran after the boys Petunia watched as the young women catched up to the boys as they turned to a dead end.
Her view was blocked by a wall hiding the girl and the two young thieves. She didn't know what happened but a few seconds later the girl walked from the corner carrying Petunias purse. The two boys walked closely behind her their heads down as if in shame.
The mall cops quickly detached themselves from the crowd; arresting the boys dragging them away from the crowd of people.
The smiled down at Petunia, handing her the green purse.
"Thank you." She said great fully.
"It was nothing. Need some help?" The girls ask putting out her hand.
Petunia suddenly realizing she was still on the floor took her hand and pulled herself up.
"I'm sorry I didn't get your name." petunia said.
"Ginny. Everyone calls me Ginny."
"Well, nice to meet you Ginny I'm Petunia."
Petunia, Petunia Ginny heard that name before but just couldn't figure out where.
"I don't know how to thank-you Ginny how about lunch right here at the mall? I'll pay." Petunia said.
"No its okay."
"Please this is the least I could do."
So Ginny agreed, hey! It was free she offered.
It was amazing how much Petunia could talk although Ginny didn't mind much. She talked about how her and her husband was having a dinner party later on this week. This was why she was at the mall in the first place.
Her husband owned this muggle drill company. Ginny couldn't help but think of how her dad would love this and how interesting it would be for him. Muggle things always seem to interest him.
"Do you have any kids Petunia?" Ginny asked curiously.
Her face lightened like this was what she has been waiting for.
Yes I do his name is Duddlers, his real name is Dudley He's in the navy.
"Oh really?" Ginny asked.
"Yeah you want to see him?" She asks. Not waiting for an answer Petunia went digging into her black leather purse and took out a picture of a young man around Ginny's age. He was dressed in his uniform smiling brightly at the camera. He was built with shaved blond hair.
Ginny stared at the man she saw him before in a picture Harry had shown him. Everything was making since now Harry did say his aunt's name was Petunia and his uncle Vernon owned a drill company. How could she be so stupid?
Her eyes flashed with anger but it disappeared as soon as it had come. She didn't know why but she stayed and talked and listen to Petunia her hatred calming down as the middle aged lady talked on and on.
It wasn't until Petunia invited Ginny to the Dinner party that she knew the answer. Harry needed to seal things up with his family they couldn't be that bad maybe they had change. She automatically said yes.
"Do you mind if I bring someone else with me?" Ginny asked to be polite.
"No not at all bring whomever you like."
How was it better or worse leave some kind of comment please it's critical especially to this re-make of the story. This was probably one of the worst times to start writing this fic with exams and all but I had to it been just sitting there. Hope you enjoy it.