Okay, like so many others, I am doing a commentary on this horrible yet amusing fic :D brace yourself! My comments will be in bold.
Disclaimer: I don't own Harry Potter. And, thank Merlin, I don't own My Immortal.
AN: Special fangz (get it, coz Im goffik Wow, that was so clever) 2 my gf (ew not in that way I wasn't even thinking about it that way until you mentioned it) raven, bloodytearz666 4 helpin me wif da story and spelling Raven helped with the story and spelling? Are you sure?. U rok! Justin ur da luv of my deprzzing life u rok 2 Justin Bieber? This explains a lot.! MCR ROX! Poor MCR.
Hi my name is Ebony Dark'ness Dementia Raven Way and I have long ebony black hair (that's how I got my name Really? Your parents knew you'd have long ebony hair with purple streaks and red tips that reached your mid-back when you were born?) with purple streaks and red tips that reaches my mid-back and icy blue eyes like limpid tears Your eyes can't be icy blue and like limpid tears at the same time and a lot of people tell me I look like Amy Lee (AN: if u don't know who she is get da hell out of here! She's the co-founder of Evanescence, but geez, that was nice). I'm not related to Gerard Way but I wish I was because he's a major fucking hottie Ew, incest alert. I'm a vampire but my teeth are straight and white. I have pale white skin. I'm also a witch, and I go to a magic school called Hogwarts in England Scotland where I'm in the seventh year (I'm seventeen). I'm a goth (in case you couldn't tell) and I wear mostly black. I love Hot Topic and I buy all my clothes from there. For example today I was wearing a black corset with matching lace around it and a black leather miniskirt, pink fishnets If you're a goth, why are you wearing pink? and black combat boots. I was wearing black lipstick, white foundation, black eyeliner and red eye shadow Wow, Ebony, wow. I was walking outside Hogwarts. It was snowing and raining so there was no sun, which I was very happy about. A lot of preps stared at me. I put up my middle finger at them Yeah, 'cause putting up your middle finger at everything sure solves all of life's problems.
"Hey Ebony!" shouted a voice. I looked up. It was... Draco Malfoy!
"What's up Draco?" I asked.
"Nothing." he said shyly. Draco Malfoy? Shy? What parallel universe have I fallen into?...oh yeah, Ebony-world.
But then, I heard my friends call me and I had to go away.
AN: IS it good? No. PLZ tell me fangz! *facepalm*
As you can see, this is terrible. But this is the best chapter so far…so I guess Raven must've been doing something.
Yesterday, I rewatched Snow White and the Seven Dwarfs, and my heart just melted with the adorableness of the birds and the animals and the dwarfs...especially Dopey! :D