It twas a cold winter morning as a figure walked down the side of a frosted road. The heavy backpack and bone chilling cold slowed his trek. "Of all the days they make me walk it had to be today" he sniffled. He blew his hot breath into his hands in a desperate attempt to warm them. A loud ringing emanates from his pocket which he then quickly grabbed his phone then answered it. "Hello?" he asked "Hey Fishdeguy did you bring the stuff?" the caller said. "Yea I got the game Michael don't..." Fishdeguy who was not paying attention tripped slamming into the hard icy ground. "Oww..." he groaned. Grabbing his phone he checked it for anything wrong and sure enough the entire screen was shattered. Like small spider webs of cracks traced themselves across the glass. "Damn it!" Fishdeguy yelled. Swiftly turning around looking for the object that tripped him he saw a baseball sized crystal glowing a bright golden hue. The area around the crystal was strangely defrosted. He knelt over and picked up the orb and a warming sensation flowed through his body. "Oh man I have to show this to the guys!" he said excitedly. Dusting himself off and began running the rest of the way to his school. "I'm surprised Fishdeguy isn't here yet he usually gets here early" Michael thought pacing back and forth in the cafeteria. He felt a light tap on his shoulder then looked backed "Oh hey Josh!" Michael said in a nasally voice. "Stop with the damn voice dude it's just completely stupid!" He replied crossing his arms. "Hello everyone" Zach said in a deep smooth jazz voice. "Tyler!" The group yelled as he slowly walked over. "Now where is Fishdeguy" Michael asked right then Fishdeguy came running in from the back doors breathing heavily holding a golden sphere. "Guys I found this and it is awesome!" He said in between breaths holding the sphere up for all of them to see. "Da fuck is that?" Dane said staring at orb intensely. "You guys got to touch it's emanating some kind of heat" Fishdeguy said they all simultaneously put their hand on the orb.
Suddenly it began to glow brighter and brighter until it reached a blinding white light. "Don't walk towards the light!" Michael shouted. Fishdeguy dropped the orb and they all scrambled to get away from it. Michael slipped on the tile floor and was quickly sucked into the orb. The rest of the group tried hard to run away from the orb but it held them in place as it sucked them back. Tyler looked back and forth and saw a support pillar grabbing onto it. People at the school began rushing towards the group trying to help them. A student jumped and attempted to grab Zach's hand but to his surprise he couldn't grab it his hand just phased through Zach's. He soon as well as Josh and Dane were pulled into the orb leaving Fishdeguy and Tyler the last two. "Why isn't it sucking us into the orb?" Someone asked panicking. The schools science teacher walked up to watch the spectacle. "It appears the orb is absorbing the DNA structures of those who touched it causing everyone else around it to not be affected but that doesn't explain why we can't help them meaning that they must have been phased into another dimension preventing anyone to help them but this kind of technology hasn't been created yet" He said quizzically. Fishdeguy's arms went up into the air "Watch out we got a bad ass over here!" He mocked without realizing that he let go he too was pulled into the orb leaving Tyler as the lone survivor. Tyler's grip was waning his fingers slowly losing grip as the pulling of the orb got stronger and stronger. He closed his eyes and leaned back his middle fingers extended "Fuck the!..." His voice cut off as he was absorbed. The globe's glowing stopped it sat there dull the color it originally was has faded leaving a clear glass ball. "Well that escalated quickly" A random student said "Alright everybody to class there is nothing to see here!" the surrounding teachers said as they herded the students to class.
"Wooooooooorrrrrrrrrrrrrrllll llllllllldddddddd" Tyler stopped then looked down "Oh I guess I wasn't falling but this nice pile of horses did make a nice bed" Tyler said as he jumped down. Standing up he quickly lost his balance and fell over "That transportation must have jet lagged my body" he thought. Regaining his balance he stood up and paced around the horse pile. He touched his hooves to his legs "Legs check" then moved them to his butt "Toned Butt check" An itching sensation grew on his back upon itching his back he discovered that he had wings. "Wings eh that teleportation must have done more than just bring us here" Tyler pondered. "¡Que lastimo!" sighed a voice from the pile. "Josh is that you?" Tyler replied. Josh pushed himself out of the pile "Sí, estoy aquí, ¿qué quieres?" Josh said confused "What did you say?" Tyler said rubbing his head. "¿Sabes lo que estoy diciendo, idiota!" Josh babbled put his hooves to his mouth. "No puedo hablar Inglés!" Josh wailed "¿Qué voy a hacer! Voy a ser un paria extranjero!" he continued before he got a hard slap by Tyler. "Shut up!" Tyler demanded "We will fix you later but now let's wake up the others" He stated calmly. Josh merely nodded his head "Wait turn around" Tyler said and Josh turned around "Eres un caballo!" "You're a horse!" They both exclaimed at the same time. "This day just gets stranger well no time for this so those other horses over there must be Michael, Zach, Dane, and Fishdeguy lets give them the walk up call" Tyler pointed at the remaining unconscious horses. "Si señor" Josh saluted galloping over to the group and he yelled on the top of his lungs "Despierta!"
The pile eroded as the sleeping beauties all tried to get up. "Ow you stepped on my head"! "Dude quit grabbing my ass" "I think I lost my contacts guys!" Tyler and Joshed laughed at the chaos rather than helping them. Finally after some time everyone was up and walking around taking in their new environment. "I CAN"T BELIEVE IT WE'RE PONIES AND WE'RE IN EQUESTRIA AND I HAVE A HORN AND PONY STUFF THIS IS AMAZING!" Fishdeguy shouted jumping around. "Well it seems since you have the most knowledge of this place debrief us Fishdeguy" Zach said "Ok first equestria is a land of ponies three types Pegasus, unicorn, and earth ponies" he paused "This world is ruled by two princesses Celestia and Luna they control the rise of the moon and sun, next we have the mane six who possess the elements of harmony blah blah blah" Fishdeguy ended with a bow. "So what do I look like?" Dane asked "Let's see here Dane you, Josh, and Tyler are all Pegasus, It appears me and Michael are the only unicorns finally Zach the loner is an earth pony." "That partially answered my question but what do I look like?" Dane responded "Why don't you see for yourself?" Fishdeguy gestured at the nearby stream which everyone galloped over too.
Tyler stared at his reflection he saw that both his mane and body were camouflage. Josh focused closely at himself and saw he was a golden coloration with a blood red Mohawk. Zach let out a little chuckle to see he was a pure white earth pony. Dane and Michael stood both next to each other gazing at themselves; Michael was light blue with an even lighter blue mane while Dane was a slate gray his mane shaggy and unkempt. Fishdeguy the last to see himself had a light grey body with a shortish black mane. They nodded with contempt figuring that their appearance was alright. "It's time my friends we must make our appearance in Equestria make ourselves great heroes!" Fishdeguy spoke motivationally. The group turned to him confused "Follow me men and I shall lead you to victory!" Fishdeguy shouted as he led the group up a nearby hill. They all followed because they didn't know where else to go and Fishdeguy had the best knowledge of the world. The group hiked up the hill Josh and Tyler being pegasi just flew up but Dane being unfortunate his wings were unable to carry his body leaving him to walk up the remaining group. They all stood in amazement as they reached the top off in the distance was a small village with little cottages and building scattered about neatly and organized. Michael took off his sun glasses "Mother of god..."
Hello everyone i have decided to rewrite this entire story because i felt it wasn't super awesome. So i hope you enjoy the first rewritten chapter and do please review.