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I Love You, Loser by SundaySolis

Books » Twilight Rated: T, English, Paul & Embry, Words: 4k+, Favs: 20, Follows: 31, Published: 12-17-11 Updated: 5-13-12
29 Chapter 1: NextDoor Neighbors

Heey y'all! So I came up with the title for this story a loooong time ago but I didn't know what the story would be about. So im winging it haha so here's the first chapter. Oh and there's pics on my profile!

PLEASE REVIEW!

Enjoy.

Sunday


"Austin, Dallas. Please stop kicking my seat" I asked my Twinkies (they were my 12 year old brothers, and they were twins—duh!).

They both rolled their eyes at me at the same time, making me smile.

"Sarah, are we almost there?" Justin asked me.

"yes, honey. 10 more minutes"

"Good" he said.


My brothers and I are from McAllen, Texas. We lived there with only our mum because my dad walked out on us when Justin was born. Mum had 3 other kids with my ex-stepdad Jackson. They got divorced 3 years ago. I was the oldest of seven, and I was 16, followed by Austin and Dallas, then Justin (8), then Derek (6), after him came Simon (5), and the youngest one was Tommy (3) (A/N: pics on profile). Mum was never home, she was always getting drunk somewhere. Don't get me wrong, I know she loves us, I just wish she'd show it more.

I'd always taken care of my brothers, ever since I can remember.

I was more of their mum than mum would ever be. I was actually planning on getting custody of them the moment I turned 18.

Anyways, mum wanted to move to this tiny reservation because… well who the heck knows why mum does the stuff she does? She just came home a couple of nights ago and told us to pack some of our stuff cuz we were leaving. So we did, and two hours later, we were on our way. Now we were almost there.

Well, my babies and I were, God knows where mum was.


When we finally reached the house, Derek jumped off the car and rushed inside.

"GOTTA PEE, GOTTA PEE, GOTTA PEE!" he said over and over again, running into the house.

The rest of my babies laughed and walked into the house, looking around curiously.

I grabbed Tommy from his seat and carried him inside.


Before we left, I'd had just enough time to Google what the heck La Push was, and it turned out to be a Quileute reservation AKA an Indian reservation. We were moving here cuz apparently Jackson was Quileute, so that made Derek, Simon, and Tommy half Quileute, even if they looked everything but. All of us took after our mum, blind hair, blue eyes. Except for me, since I had my dad's red hair and green eyes, and Justin, who had our grandpa's brown eyes and darker hair. We were all as pale as our mum was, which lemme tell you, was VERY PALE. We were almost transparent. Well not really but you know what I mean.


Anyways, I was getting my babies all settled down, and they were helping me unpack (to them, unpacking meant taking everything out of the boxes and leaving it lying there for me to put it in its rightful place). We'd been doing that for almost 2 hours when the doorbell rang.

"COMING!" I hollered, before walking to over to the door, tripping a total of 4 times over all the stuff that was lying EVERYWHERE.

Of course all the littles found that hilarious and started laughing, so I just smiled and shook my head, finally reaching the door, only two find a couple standing there, with a pie in the lady's hands.

They both looked to be around 20, but that's where the similarities ended. The man was tall, at least 6'5, while the girl was around my height (I was 4'11). Maybe 5'2. The man looked kinda scary though, while the girl looked like she was a sweetheart. She had 3 long scars that went from her forehead, down her cheek, and disappeared under her shirt.

I didn't stare though. They didn't bother me.

To me, she still looked beautiful.

Both the man and the woman had tanned skin and black hair, so they were both Quileute.

"Hi, I'm Emily, and this is my fiancé, Sam. We live right across the street" she told me, pointing to the little yellow house that was, indeed, right across the street.

I smiled at both of them.

"Hi! I'm Sarah!" I said.

I turned back into the house and hollered at my littles.

"YO! ENANOS! There's people here, come say hola!" I told them.

Since we were from McAllen, we knew Spanish, so we usually spoke Spanglish.

I turned back to face the couple.

"Come on in" I told them, moving out of the way while they came in. "uh, please ignore the mess, we haven't finished unpacking"

"Of course" Sam said.

Just then, all my littles came downstairs, but stopped dead on their tracks when they saw Emily and Sam.

"Come on, pekes. They won't bite" I told them.

The twins moved forward.

"Dallas"

"Austin"

After they introduced themselves, the other ones said hi too.

"Justin"

"Derek"

"Simon"

"TOMMY!" my baby boy exclaimed, stumbling to give Emily a hug.

Emily smiled widely and hugged him back.

"Hi, honey. I'm Emily and this is Sam"

Tommy looked at Sam and smiled at him widely, showing the gap his 2 missing teeth made.

Sam smiled at him.

"Sarah, well, we brought you some apple pie!" Emily said, handing me the pie that was still in her hands.

"Thanks!"


Sam and Emily stayed over for a little while longer, and before they left, they invited us to some cook out they were gonna have the next day. I said we've be there, and off they went.

"Sarah, there's something outside" Justin told me a few minutes later, looking out the living room window.

I walked over there and there was indeed, something out there.

I saw a pair of brown eyes looking right at me.

I shrieked and pulled the curtain closed.

There was a wolf outside my window!


PLEASE REVIEW!

I know this was a weird chapter, but I wanted to upload it before I left, so I did it in a hurry… anyways, I promise the following chapters WILL be better, and that I'll upload them as soon as I come back in like a week. also, i need help with the summary! the one i have is only temporary until i can come up with a better one, IDEAS ARE WELCOMED!

So this week I read:

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